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The Janitor's Union
 
From the minds of "The Magnificent Seven" (#ingloriousbastards)
 
featuring the individual text stylings of:
 
-The Man Who's Fast w/ His Hands, AKA Jessie Pinkman, BKA Cee Jay Outlaw
-THE GAWD OF THUNDA,  AKA George Jetson wit his head spun, BKA -Que-
-The Versatile VooDoo Child, AKA Don Cheadle, AKA Velvet Jones, BKA J504   
-The Don Juan of Period Pieces, AKA FLOWZILLA, AKA Arth-uh Fonzarelli, BKA CHAIN
-The Awkward Dinner Guest, AKA Hideo Kojima's Personal Gardener, BKA Kosmosis   
-THE EMO KING, AKA Baxter Stockman,  AKA The Dr. Who of Sarcasm,  BKA Kay B 
-The Stage Rippin' Titty Grippin City Drifter himself, Mr. Motherfucking KiKi Spirez
 
About to clean house and shit.
 
and now, your Emcee for this event.... Mr. Cee Jay Outlaw 
 
 
 
[Cee-Jay]
Right Dustbusters, we've got a Site to clean, and its needs to be done pronto!
Don't Be Fucking around! We've got shit to do!
Before we start! A quick meeting, cos something seems to be bothering us all!

Let me just out some music out to accompany my say!

So Yeah, Um...

Right! Let Cee start talks, these newbs should be left for dead
Let's be said, We're sick of these half thoughts in empty threads
Most Vets are dead, new kids thinking they've got the moves like jagger
face it bitches you'll never be on our level...
 
Here's a ladder!
 
 

 

[-Que-]
NOWWW!!.........Hush!!!!!
As if you was a baby gettin Rock-A-Bye'd!!
got fists that'll emboss yah eye!!... Get rolled on like soft and dry !
Notice theres no blockin my...ROPE!!!!...leave'em Hogged and tied
Boxed up!.. And Kicked! ..Now Guys !!!!......watch his coffin slide!!
SSSSSssssssssssss!!!
Open mics a mine field....a realm known for beasts its...
Helm to my thesis..... getcha legs blown to pieces!!!!
Platoon style! Shrapnel..!!.. sinking in you private Ryans!!
The Vultures are flying...but don't think the site is dyin!!
Its ALIVE!!

Franksteinic !! ....
Don't let the recent ranks define it!!
I hit enter its a global blast!!!
Que's Drops'll fuck up the climate!!
Death footage so sick...even God'll rewind it!!
Recruit Q for the Apocalypse cuz my shit'll seventh sign it!!
RODENTS!!
Scamper the open thread then scatter raps
I gather traps !! Grab their face and feet...they can't chatter back
Squeeze till the keystyles exit the bladder sack
Pull from both ends......then suddenly the Rat'll SNAP!!
Think before you hit enter....don't suck again
or leave more beat up than the buckskin shoes on Huck Fin!!
Yall far from scary....you comedic as the Munsters
Lookin for your last drop? You'll see it in the Dumpster!!
 
 

[Cee-Jay]
Rights lads, get your cleaning equipment!
We're cleaning up...

Mops and buckets out, We'll banish the dirt with a clean sweep,
Eliminate the grime, where fags rhyme about 8 Mile or the Mean Street
fake smiles and a laugh at the fake claims of guys that spit 'flames'
fun n games, none of these guys can compete with our combined brains
remember these names, of all those involved, take a note... shit!
You newbs have no idea what dope is & wouldn't know if you smoked it!

Anyone else want to bust a say?
Yeah? No? What about you J!?
 
 
 

[J504]
GOTT-DAMN THIS SHIT!!! 
What tha fuck they damage is??
Can't these damn kids understand what bandwith is??
And since when did keystyle become code for SPAM IT QUICK ??
YA'LL THINK YA'LL FAM WITH THIS???
I'm seein' "FEEDBACK PLEASE!" and I'm like "PLEASE BAN THIS BITCH"
I hope he vanish quick, not to be fucked wit like a banished prick
Out tha spotlight like every Kardashian chick can't stand his dick
MAN, THIS IS on my last nerve, yall servin' up the blandest spits
On that sandwich shit, you Sloppy Joes even know what a Manwich is?
Bring meat to the beef, least make me believe ya planned this shit
CAUSE MY STANCE IS THIS:
I go into Open Mic hopin' there might be a dope open
So when ya drop fo' opens that got me sayin' "What is this hoe smokin?"
I'M LEAVIN' THE DO' OPEN
Get tha fuck out...
You trolls know it.
There's no warm & fuzzies here, I'm jus sayin' yall betta buck up
I snatch a tape out-a Ruxpin, if it sux, shut tha fuck up
WHAT'S UP?
I'm a L.I., guy. Name up in lights. Neon like Dion Sanders
This ain't Netcees, please, we ain't on Gold Mic type of standards
Get with tha program, no man here can eat free
This ain't no Shop of Horrors, so quit screamin' "FEED ME"
And in case you're like "what does he mean?" I'll make it easy
I'm tired of reading these bootleg Minajs and these dollar store Weezys
YOU ALL FUCKIN CHEESY! 
Your rhymin' is Rocky, this Demolition, Man.. leave ya mind blown
Thinkin' ya rhymes are Expendables while ya keep droppin' Rhinestones
Shine bright like a Diamond- NOW, WHAT AM I ON?
The truth, bruh I just hope you know it when I show it
Just cause you thought up a rhyme, doesn't mean ya gotta post it
Doesn't mean that Scotty's gotta host it
Doesn't mean we gotta toast it
This ain't Comedy Central so I ain't jokin' when I Roast it...
I said what I gotta say and now I'm ghost, kid
 
**hack....cough**

 
 
 
[CHAIN]
...wax on, wax off
 
Deep throat the mop stick, soap suds; bukkake
Brooms dipped in Ajax, Mash Out these Posses
Fuck a wet floor sign, dirt bags is slippin‘
Brillo padded gloves, I'm ready for the friction
Put away the bath scrubs, clean-up on aisle 5
Restock the bathrooms, street sweep ‘em style-wise
Y‘all kick the bucket, I leave it spotless
My pen is my squeegee and hygiene‘s the topic
Back with the plunger to claim a few homi‘s
I keep the flow going...Drano tsunami
Lame ass punani‘s, I Windex their touch screens
Still typing greasy, y‘all shelves is all dusty
 
 
 
 
Hey yo, Kos you wanna help them dudes clean this shit up?!?!
 

[Kosmosis]
Bitch, put a mop in the hand of Lone Wolf McQuade,
Who owns couth displays with J’s, que’s, and chain’s
We asking is it the call or just the phone booth that’s played?
And say there’s no excuse to leave any remains of their stains.
A penny for their thoughts? Shit a penny for some brains
Post with stupid ass title? Bitch naw I wont click it
Poster got a stupid ass name? Bitch naw I wont click it
Cuz I know they on some “rhyme click it with click it’s the ticket”
Since I depict the sick shit diznick picnic it leaves Kos conflicted:
I want to click it, but do they ever feed……
on the deep shit I drop that they never read?
This a literal bleach and metaphorical seed
Noobs: your own lack of skill is a force to impede
I keep it real: we all fought wars for our words to bleed
Kids talking bout drugs and suicide, do you mean to insult me?
Using such boring topics to stretch wordplay in a forced multi?
There is hope see, give more than what you get, and study every vet
Be creative and original, cancel the debt and gain the credit of my respect….
 
 
 
 
 
[Kay]
Rats flooded in cockroaches an' all, believe my mouth
Opens depicting' the image of a failed cleaners house
Random comments, feed aside, i'm through with this shit
Know who you are, kim n aggy ain't got a clue with this bitch
Put'cha guard down kid, No hate im just doing my best
And, no subliminals but a dope open got ruined by mess
Too many guilty kids pleading innocent when faced
Rather just tryna improve, compliment brilliance they face
Can already see the fate of this verse, ain't subliminal
But i wanna see some REAL shit, let's keep the FAKE to minimal
Makes me laugh, sass's rant got more replies his epic open
Even the oldest Vet had spoken, this'll be the next that's broken
Fuck all this bitch talk, be talented not a squealing mouse
Let's just ALL take it back to the old day's of cleaning house
 
 
Hey yo Kiki, want to make this a clean sweep?!?!
 

[Kiki]
If I was a mod, I'd be banning all you mugs,
You're not potent, I'll stuff a rodent like the Janitor in Scrubs,
You little fucking rats, I just bust a mean smile,
Full of touchy, 'i'm rusty' cats with their 'it's just a key style',
Meanwhile.. I see no concepts and no anger,
With no worth, your birth was a waste of a coat hanger,
I've had regrets, they were dope at the time,
These plays of Cee Jays, while CHAIN opens your mind,
J coming with creativity, Que unique delivery,
Sass' passion, Spume in the action, Keek with sleek wizardry,
What you giving me? Nothing. A mess of wank,
Lack of hitting, has me wishing for Round 2 of Dress and Manc.. 
 
 
[Cee-Jay]
We've Got Swagger, Real stories in our rhymes, No Fake Net Rappers
Just a group of Lyricists, poets, wordsmiths and actors
Infected with a lyrical sickness, not that keystyle syndrome
Rather than drop a half thought out verse, we'd close windows!
Work in numbers, Like Bingo... These lines woulda shook ya!
Anyone one of us will destroy you lyrically like we're called Alf Hücker (I'll fuck ya)
 
 
 
out.
 
 
 
 
#nohate
 
 

 
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Good job by all the lads on this!
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very nice collab....yall went in on this shyt
 
 
 
 
 
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This was well done, good look on the work my dudes.
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Aww heck.................I'm late for work again!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
My bad famz I been away from a pc for a minute, cant post proper from my phone
Wow this was all out brilliant everybody shined on this one! I will def come back and break a few fav highlights down .......FIRST OFF THOUGH I GOT A SHIFT TEH PUT IN
 
 
Its ya LA famz, saving Open for strictly ripping up classics
we aint falling fa no Matty type scams or trippin on Acid
We sick on a massive scale, I'm talking the rictors blown
you cant fail to factor in the fact this some shitt we own
Corrupt ya resident incinerator...glowing wit fire tonight
burning kids  back catalogues just showing Iziah the light
Cant let em die on the site! Only right we stop the slide
besides I'm not comfortable seeing Homicides softer side
We got ta thrive! Even through them times of drought
cos in truth it aint who reads ya rhymes, but what you rhyme about!!
Give us some time without underweight shit plagueing the board
too many undetected underfed kids wait for applause
Keep waiting ya fools, we taking open mic to the cleaners
we aint getting highjacked by no bike riding weaneers

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Good job from all that took part
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Dope shit, spume! Glad you was able to put something down, definitely putting it in there, fam.   
 
I'm gonna come back and feed on everybody's verse.
 
 
 
 
r-r-r-r-remix.....
 
 
 
 
 
The Janitor's Union
 
From the minds of "The Super 8" (#nottheshitmovietho)
 
featuring the individual text stylings of:
 
-Mr. Discount Double-Check, AKA MC Peter Venkman, BKA Cee Jay Outlaw
-THE OOGIE BOOGIE MAN,  AKA Ozamataz Buckshank, AKA Urban Thor, BKA -Que-
-UNCLE CREEPYTOUCH, AKA Darkwing Duck, AKA Roy Jones Jr, Jr,  BKA J504   
-SHAQSQUATCH, AKA Gruesome Brad Newsome, AKA The Missin' Link , BKA CHAIN
-ROY BATTY'S DOVE, AKA Henry the Llama, AKA The Shasta Kid, BKA Kosmosis   
-LIQUID METAL MOSES, AKA Dante from Clerks, AKA Randy Poffo,  BKA Kay B 
-CAPTAIN SLOW YA ROLL, AKA Britt Hume, AKA Robocop's nephew, BKA spume corrupt
-The Green Goblin of Skateboard Tricks and Cooking Tips, BKA KiKi Spirez
 
About to clean house and shit.
 
and now, your Emcee for this event.... Mr. Cee Jay Outlaw 
 
 
 
[Cee-Jay]
Right Dustbusters, we've got a Site to clean, and its needs to be done pronto!
Don't Be Fucking around! We've got shit to do!
Before we start! A quick meeting, cos something seems to be bothering us all!

Let me just out some music out to accompany my say!

So Yeah, Um...

Right! Let Cee start talks, these newbs should be left for dead
Let's be said, We're sick of these half thoughts in empty threads
Most Vets are dead, new kids thinking they've got the moves like jagger
face it bitches you'll never be on our level...
 
Here's a ladder!
 
 

 

[-Que-]
NOWWW!!.........Hush!!!!!
As if you was a baby gettin Rock-A-Bye'd!!
got fists that'll emboss yah eye!!... Get rolled on like soft and dry !
Notice theres no blockin my...ROPE!!!!...leave'em Hogged and tied
Boxed up!.. And Kicked! ..Now Guys !!!!......watch his coffin slide!!
SSSSSssssssssssss!!!
Open mics a mine field....a realm known for beasts its...
Helm to my thesis..... getcha legs blown to pieces!!!!
Platoon style! Shrapnel..!!.. sinking in you private Ryans!!
The Vultures are flying...but don't think the site is dyin!!
Its ALIVE!!

Franksteinic !! ....
Don't let the recent ranks define it!!
I hit enter its a global blast!!!
Que's Drops'll fuck up the climate!!
Death footage so sick...even God'll rewind it!!
Recruit Q for the Apocalypse cuz my shit'll seventh sign it!!
RODENTS!!
Scamper the open thread then scatter raps
I gather traps !! Grab their face and feet...they can't chatter back
Squeeze till the keystyles exit the bladder sack
Pull from both ends......then suddenly the Rat'll SNAP!!
Think before you hit enter....don't suck again
or leave more beat up than the buckskin shoes on Huck Fin!!
Yall far from scary....you comedic as the Munsters
Lookin for your last drop? You'll see it in the Dumpster!!
 
 

[Cee-Jay]
Rights lads, get your cleaning equipment!
We're cleaning up...

Mops and buckets out, We'll banish the dirt with a clean sweep,
Eliminate the grime, where fags rhyme about 8 Mile or the Mean Street
fake smiles and a laugh at the fake claims of guys that spit 'flames'
fun n games, none of these guys can compete with our combined brains
remember these names, of all those involved, take a note... shit!
You newbs have no idea what dope is & wouldn't know if you smoked it!

Anyone else want to bust a say?
Yeah? No? What about you J!?
 
 
 

[J504]
GOTT-DAMN THIS SHIT!!! 
What tha fuck they damage is??
Can't these damn kids understand what bandwith is??
And since when did keystyle become code for SPAM IT QUICK ??
YA'LL THINK YA'LL FAM WITH THIS???
I'm seein' "FEEDBACK PLEASE!" and I'm like "PLEASE BAN THIS BITCH"
I hope he vanish quick, not to be fucked wit like a banished prick
Out tha spotlight like every Kardashian chick can't stand his dick
MAN, THIS IS on my last nerve, yall servin' up the blandest spits
On that sandwich shit, you Sloppy Joes even know what a Manwich is?
Bring meat to the beef, least make me believe ya planned this shit
CAUSE MY STANCE IS THIS:
I go into Open Mic hopin' there might be a dope open
So when ya drop fo' opens that got me sayin' "What is this hoe smokin?"
I'M LEAVIN' THE DO' OPEN
Get tha fuck out...
You trolls know it.
There's no warm & fuzzies here, I'm jus sayin' yall betta buck up
I snatch a tape out-a Ruxpin, if it sux, shut tha fuck up
WHAT'S UP?
I'm a L.I., guy. Name up in lights. Neon like Dion Sanders
This ain't Netcees, please, we ain't on Gold Mic type of standards
Get with tha program, no man here can eat free
This ain't no Shop of Horrors, so quit screamin' "FEED ME"
And in case you're like "what does he mean?" I'll make it easy
I'm tired of reading these bootleg Minajs and these dollar store Weezys
YOU ALL FUCKIN CHEESY! 
Your rhymin' is Rocky, this Demolition, Man.. leave ya mind blown
Thinkin' ya rhymes are Expendables while ya keep droppin' Rhinestones
Shine bright like a Diamond- NOW, WHAT AM I ON?
The truth, bruh I just hope you know it when I show it
Just cause you thought up a rhyme, doesn't mean ya gotta post it
Doesn't mean that Scotty's gotta host it
Doesn't mean we gotta toast it
This ain't Comedy Central so I ain't jokin' when I Roast it...
I said what I gotta say and now I'm ghost, kid
 
**hack....cough**

 
 
 
[CHAIN]
...wax on, wax off
 
Deep throat the mop stick, soap suds; bukkake
Brooms dipped in Ajax, Mash Out these Posses
Fuck a wet floor sign, dirt bags is slippin‘
Brillo padded gloves, I'm ready for the friction
Put away the bath scrubs, clean-up on aisle 5
Restock the bathrooms, street sweep ‘em style-wise
Y‘all kick the bucket, I leave it spotless
My pen is my squeegee and hygiene‘s the topic
Back with the plunger to claim a few homi‘s
I keep the flow going...Drano tsunami
Lame ass punani‘s, I Windex their touch screens
Still typing greasy, y‘all shelves is all dusty
 
 
 
 
Hey yo, Kos you wanna help them dudes clean this shit up?!?!
 

[Kosmosis]
Bitch, put a mop in the hand of Lone Wolf McQuade,
Who owns couth displays with J’s, que’s, and chain’s
We asking is it the call or just the phone booth that’s played?
And say there’s no excuse to leave any remains of their stains.
A penny for their thoughts? Shit a penny for some brains
Post with stupid ass title? Bitch naw I wont click it
Poster got a stupid ass name? Bitch naw I wont click it
Cuz I know they on some “rhyme click it with click it’s the ticket”
Since I depict the sick shit diznick picnic it leaves Kos conflicted:
I want to click it, but do they ever feed……
on the deep shit I drop that they never read?
This a literal bleach and metaphorical seed
Noobs: your own lack of skill is a force to impede
I keep it real: we all fought wars for our words to bleed
Kids talking bout drugs and suicide, do you mean to insult me?
Using such boring topics to stretch wordplay in a forced multi?
There is hope see, give more than what you get, and study every vet
Be creative and original, cancel the debt and gain the credit of my respect….
 
 
 
 
 
[Kay]
Rats flooded in cockroaches an' all, believe my mouth
Opens depicting' the image of a failed cleaners house
Random comments, feed aside, i'm through with this shit
Know who you are, kim n aggy ain't got a clue with this bitch
Put'cha guard down kid, No hate im just doing my best
And, no subliminals but a dope open got ruined by mess
Too many guilty kids pleading innocent when faced
Rather just tryna improve, compliment brilliance they face
Can already see the fate of this verse, ain't subliminal
But i wanna see some REAL shit, let's keep the FAKE to minimal
Makes me laugh, sass's rant got more replies his epic open
Even the oldest Vet had spoken, this'll be the next that's broken
Fuck all this bitch talk, be talented not a squealing mouse
Let's just ALL take it back to the old day's of cleaning house
 
 
 
[spume]
Its ya LA famz, saving Open for strictly ripping up classics
we aint falling fa no Matty type scams or trippin on Acid
We sick on a massive scale, I'm talking the rictors blown
you cant fail to factor in the fact this some shitt we own
Corrupt ya resident incinerator...glowing wit fire tonight
burning kids back catalogues just showing Iziah the light
Cant let em die on the site! Only right we stop the slide
besides I'm not comfortable seeing Homicides softer side
We got ta thrive! Even through them times of drought
cos in truth it aint who reads ya rhymes, but what you rhyme about!!
Give us some time without underweight shit plagueing the board
too many undetected underfed kids wait for applause
Keep waiting ya fools, we taking open mic to the cleaners
we aint getting highjacked by no bike riding weaneers
 
 
 
Hey yo Kiki, want to make this a clean sweep?!?!
 
 

[Kiki]
If I was a mod, I'd be banning all you mugs,
You're not potent, I'll stuff a rodent like the Janitor in Scrubs,
You little fucking rats, I just bust a mean smile,
Full of touchy, 'i'm rusty' cats with their 'it's just a key style',
Meanwhile.. I see no concepts and no anger,
With no worth, your birth was a waste of a coat hanger,
I've had regrets, they were dope at the time,
These plays of Cee Jays, while CHAIN opens your mind,
J coming with creativity, Que unique delivery,
Sass' passion, Spume in the action, Keek with sleek wizardry,
What you giving me? Nothing. A mess of wank,
Lack of hitting, has me wishing for Round 2 of Dress and Manc.. 
 
 
[Cee-Jay]
We've Got Swagger, Real stories in our rhymes, No Fake Net Rappers
Just a group of Lyricists, poets, wordsmiths and actors
Infected with a lyrical sickness, not that keystyle syndrome
Rather than drop a half thought out verse, we'd close windows!
Work in numbers, Like Bingo... These lines woulda shook ya!
Anyone one of us will destroy you lyrically like we're called Alf Hücker (I'll fuck ya)
 
 
 
out.
 
 
 
 
#nohate
 
 

 
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Yaw killed that shit
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Preciate the looks and props to everybody who got in on this one. I'm gonna try to feed everybody's verse over the next couple days on this.
 
first up, Emcee Cee Jay!
 
 
Cee, props on stepping up to be up front on this. You really came through with this and delivered it lightening fast. Much respect on that. Solid scripting on this, it set the mood. I was trying to feed off Que's style myself and you did a great job of making your style mesh well with his scripting style, really added some glue to the parts. That "here's a ladder" line was wild! I really liked how your verse was able to be split up perfectly throughout the piece and drive the point home, especially that last set. Dead @ "I'll fuck ya"!
 
LOL
 
 
more feed to come.
 
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Aha cheers J. Alf Hücker... Ftw!


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some stood out more too me then others

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Originally posted by 戦闘の悪霊 戦闘の悪霊 wrote:

some stood out more too me then others



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Originally posted by Kay B Kay B wrote:


Originally posted by 戦闘の悪霊 戦闘の悪霊 wrote:

some stood out more too me then others



Care to elaborate?


Care to collaborate? This was what I've been trying to get in on I had no idea this storm was brewing. Props guys.
Imagery so vividly intrinsic you might miss it..
Though you never even had the chance to witness it
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Ha! Props on the feed. I forgot I was goin to feed everyone..

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As always, dope with the scripting, flow and multies. What really makes you always stand out is your vocab. You have the most unique vocab of anybody on this site, specifically because you can make a word up and it works perfect and people know exactly what you mean. That's a gift.

When I read your verse for this I was immediately inspired.
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CJ: nice intro, bit choppy flow.. 

Que: rhyming and flow was on point.. meta's were cool here like the way u use the site (open mic) reference with complexity. 

CJ: better than your last intro.. message was much clear here.. you got my attention

J504: damn you're piece had me laughing coz it's so true and at same time its funny.. 

Chain: lol dam using the cleaning  material reference to kill these newbs.. that's creative.. 
Kosmosis: Kos, I like your aggressive comments toward the newbs.. I think you cover almost all the mistake that other didn't mention.. lol

Kay: rap wise it was ok.. this turns out be different than how others were approaching for. Your verse seem  decent like giving compliments/giving orders. Not like dissing the newbs in aggressive manners.. that's how I see it

Kiki: first half of verse had some hard diss, then it's all about giving props to your crew members and others. 

CJ: Nice way of finishing up the collab.. I think with newbs sees this it'll have there intention and they'll know what you are trying to say? 


Overall: I like this collab it's a good way of telling newbs how you feel about them? looolLOL
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Ram, you say my intro was choppy, you do realise that only 4 lines of the first part i do is actually me rapping? those lines being the last 4 of my section.. the bits before it are italicized which are meant to be spoken and not rapped...

just making that clear. Appreciate the feed
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oh i see now.. ops.. my bad.. I was just reading as a verse..lol
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The whole idea of this wasn't to diss noobs ram..but thanks for the feed 
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Yo Ram! Preciate you taking the time to feed the whole thing.

Respect.
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First off....The intro was so fuckin clever! Was like getting ready
for a Quinton Taratino flick. It was humorous and at the same time
entertaining to the point that even if I wasn't familiar with everyone
I would be really excited to see what they have in store,...was still excited
anywayz.


ceejay - Love how you was havin fun with it. The laid back Captain Morgan
type of style with a smidgeon of Full Metal Jacket flair. I know you be
commin with those crazy metas and flips. Loved the Hucker and the Grime lines
plus that dope line in lames terms you just slid in plain. Added agressiveness.

J5 - Wow!! You fuckin owned this shit ! Damaging muthafuckas bar after bar. The
Part that had me dyin was the Open/Whats this Hoe smokin bar...LMAOO!!!! I
was feelin the heat and the inferno only grew in intensity as you went on. Really
 Impressive J5.....fuckin animal!!


Chain - Ha!! Cain't nobody do it like the Fonze of Flow! You came totally different and
commanded respect only a real niggah can obtain. You always embody a crispness
and the sharpest of common sense intellect. My fav bar was the Brillo Padded Gloves
 bar. That was the Ultimate set up to go all out. Then went in again with those witty
 NNon filler daggers.


Spume- Came Late to the Jam but was still on point ...was diggin the fact that you
showed and not only that brought nice material. Crazy how you name dropped
came thoo rippin muthafukkahs!! The set up about Scams and Acid was clean.Also
Dug the A.K.A Corrupt the Incinerator...LOL....cool.


Kosmo - You already know.....any collab you and J5 are on is always flames. You two
 have the most chemestry out of any two I ever seen working together besides a
few older cats I know.That click it bar was def a stand out. Fire bro! Lyrical Bleach and Metaphorical Seed?....LOL... Shit was mad insane!!


Keek - You know Imma fan of your drops bro. Yes yes..Imma late feeding muthafuccka but I always read mostly everything. I got ADD when it comes to shit so I'm always movin. But I
Usually find time to slow down and show my crew love fasho. But on that note. LMAO @
 waste of a coat Hanger...lol. That was just plain disrespectful. And really bro...TY for all the
props you showed everyone in on this. Very much appreciated.


KBeez - Whuttup Beez! Loved how you kept it clean ....added so much to the feel of
the whole collabo. Gave everyone the cleanest idea of what this whole thing was about. Plus when it comes to directness...I always admired that aboutcha bruh. ROTFLMAO @ them
how clean is your house bitches!! OMG!! I seen those hoes and fell out laughin! Good Job Beez!!

Overall...TY everyone for jumpin in. It was fun to see L.A. come together on some shit.

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