Open Mic: The Last O.G

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    Posted: 16 October 2020 at 3:23pm




I'm Tracy Morgan; my knowledge you'll miss when you're older
You're Ikea shit that i fold up make you admit i am colder
Uncontrollable unsocial media bitch that's a troller
You are a 'Storm' brewing, I'll be the 'Chip' on your shoulder
And it doesn't stop at death I'll push at your Wake
I'll Eminem your Rule, be the 'Push' to your Drake
You're Jared Kush; you're a snake, a George Bush by mistake
Go Guerrilla for corrupt cops, some 'Black-ish' for these fakes
We-are-long like VietCong, our 'Empires' cause 'Scandals' coz we are strong
Fuck this Rudy Giuliani we need a newer Giuliana like Nia Long
Fucking Republican, i wouldn't go to the pub with him
Can't string 2 sentences together, like Trump; he's mumbling
Just like these mumble rappers, this is how trouble happens
My 'power's' got these 'dear white people' 'insecure'; shuffling backwards
Blacking up coz i'm 'BlackAsFuck' got you 'MaryJanes' backing up
'Grown' like Tyler Perry in 'Atlanta' I'm not acting up

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"I just tackle the subject, the flack of the public/
Nothing!I know real N***** just happen to love it"

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I thought that this was really good in term of rhyme scheme and stuff it really went well but I think I might be a little stupid or something because your references in your similes i just don't get what your meanings were in aloy of them I thought that the second half of the post what better than the first. Your best bar was

Fucking Republican, i wouldn't go to the pub with him
Can't string 2 sentences together, like Trump; he's mumbling

To me because it rhymes well but this is the bar where the references made sense to me and it was a good clear solid bar.
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