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    Posted: 20 November 2013 at 10:01pm
4 Bars
24 hours
Rest is house rules. 
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 21 November 2013 at 1:01pm
I am about to preach to Law like I already passed the bar
he was a big hitter in battle royale but didnt get very far

This Law guy, his win loss percentage is quite respectable dude
but his respect will fall faster than houses from a  Philippines typhoon

imma stop Vis faster than the editor of the newspaper can print it
Shanks wil bè printed on his face like I used his head to stamp it

Imma deliver his 3rd defeat make you wanna jump out ya seat
leave your heart like Fuckoff when he audio battled ya without a beat
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 21 November 2013 at 10:25pm
shit I just missed this by 20 minutes. I worked later than I was supposed to. 
If you want to take the no show its whatever cause I did go over the timelimit at this point. 
But I'm on now, I can write my verse real quick, if you'd like. 
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 21 November 2013 at 10:38pm
Originally posted by The Law The Law wrote:

shit I just missed this by 20 minutes. I worked later than I was supposed to. 
If you want to take the no show its whatever cause I did go over the timelimit at this point. 
But I'm on now, I can write my verse real quick, if you'd like. 


Sorry for jumping outta nowhere...

Even if its late, the battle will be moved to NML where you can drop yo verse within one week.
So i think its aight if ya drop yo verse now...
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 21 November 2013 at 10:58pm
Thought that was only for house rules. Not when there is a set due date? 
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 21 November 2013 at 11:03pm
Originally posted by The Law The Law wrote:

Thought that was only for house rules. Not when there is a set due date? 


Err, i guess so... Ive seen battles with time limits in NML.

Im sure you can key a quality verse quick.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 22 November 2013 at 12:15am
Law just drop a verse when you can i have problem with that.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 22 November 2013 at 11:20am
Originally posted by Shankley Shankley wrote:

Law just drop a verse when you can i have problem with that.
Sorry correction... NO problem with that LOL My bad
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 26 November 2013 at 10:37pm
BUMP FOR THE LAW!!!
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 29 November 2013 at 11:38am
Where is The Law at?
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 01 December 2013 at 6:21pm
BUMP FOR NML
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 05 December 2013 at 7:38pm
From the 'light work', its been predicted that your getting blind
For speaking about christmas, when it's obvious you ain't gifted at this present time
He thought he could come quick, and create a crew to be in a slump with
but hesss still Chump-less with no promise.. It's about time to Jump Ship
In all honesty, Shank? You can't stomach my mass like a belly of cancer
When your writing open mics about "school" and can't correct your Spelling and Grammar
-____- Smh.. 

Taking a stab at me, is like jumping in the voluntary hearse
Since the "law came to confiscate shank" and turn his bars to a solitary verse

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Bar 3: School OM
Bar 4: If you got caught with a shank in prison you would get put in solitary.. Double entendre :D

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 05 December 2013 at 9:10pm
Cool drop Law Glad you pulled through didn't want a no show. Thanks man
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 05 December 2013 at 11:40pm
Shank
You had some decent concepts but didn't form into the punches they could have been...my advice would be to work on wording your concepts into some good punches...just play around with it until you feel that is the best possible verse you could lay down

Law
You came with some heat from start to finish...consistent as always and your punches landed pretty nicely...battle is pretty much one sided

vgt law
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 05 December 2013 at 11:50pm
Shank liked your verse, some
Of your bars had some multis and your flow was on point
Your opener was your best bar, good personal to


Law... Solid drop your opener was the best bar in the battle Imo
Good personals multis an flow

Vote law for harder punches and personals
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 06 December 2013 at 1:06am
2-0.
Thanks for those that have voted so far. 
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 06 December 2013 at 7:04am
Shank - Had some cool concepts in there but the punches were lacking
in my opinion, try and reword things, delivery and flow will help you a lot.
The battle royale bar was your best.

The Law - Pretty solid verse. It was a lot of hit or miss imo, but that
diss on his OM had me laughing. Overall came in more personal and
more polished verse.

MVGT The Law, looks like he took this battle a bit easy. But had enough
personals, flow and polished verses for the win. Stay up Shank.
Allow me to retort, you cowards is just learnin the shit we been teachin
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 06 December 2013 at 7:07am
3-0 KO The Law
Great battle man your verse did make me lol
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 09 December 2013 at 9:03pm
Ko Law
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