Text Battle Archive: The Law Vs Shankley |
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The Law
Site Moderator God of the Minions Joined: 15 June 2013 Status: Offline Points: 5504 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 64-8-8 Form: LNWWWW |
Topic: The Law Vs Shankley Posted: 20 November 2013 at 10:01pm |
4 Bars
24 hours Rest is house rules.
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Shankley
Superior Member Joined: 03 September 2013 Location: Leeds, England Status: Offline Points: 3369 Crew: Kratos Kind Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 37-43-1 Form: WNLWWL |
Posted: 21 November 2013 at 1:01pm |
I am about to preach to Law like I already passed the bar
he was a big hitter in battle royale but didnt get very far This Law guy, his win loss percentage is quite respectable dude but his respect will fall faster than houses from a Philippines typhoon imma stop Vis faster than the editor of the newspaper can print it Shanks wil bè printed on his face like I used his head to stamp it Imma deliver his 3rd defeat make you wanna jump out ya seat leave your heart like Fuckoff when he audio battled ya without a beat |
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The Law
Site Moderator God of the Minions Joined: 15 June 2013 Status: Offline Points: 5504 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 64-8-8 Form: LNWWWW |
Posted: 21 November 2013 at 10:25pm |
shit I just missed this by 20 minutes. I worked later than I was supposed to.
If you want to take the no show its whatever cause I did go over the timelimit at this point. But I'm on now, I can write my verse real quick, if you'd like.
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Titu
Superior Member Joined: 04 July 2013 Location: 🔥 Hell 🔥 Status: Offline Points: 4522 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 47-19-0 Form: WWWWWW |
Posted: 21 November 2013 at 10:38pm |
Sorry for jumping outta nowhere... Even if its late, the battle will be moved to NML where you can drop yo verse within one week. So i think its aight if ya drop yo verse now... |
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Fuck That Fat smelly cunt Donald Trump, a racist asshole who is fucked in the head.
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The Law
Site Moderator God of the Minions Joined: 15 June 2013 Status: Offline Points: 5504 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 64-8-8 Form: LNWWWW |
Posted: 21 November 2013 at 10:58pm |
Thought that was only for house rules. Not when there is a set due date?
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Titu
Superior Member Joined: 04 July 2013 Location: 🔥 Hell 🔥 Status: Offline Points: 4522 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 47-19-0 Form: WWWWWW |
Posted: 21 November 2013 at 11:03pm |
Err, i guess so... Ive seen battles with time limits in NML. Im sure you can key a quality verse quick. |
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Fuck That Fat smelly cunt Donald Trump, a racist asshole who is fucked in the head.
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Shankley
Superior Member Joined: 03 September 2013 Location: Leeds, England Status: Offline Points: 3369 Crew: Kratos Kind Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 37-43-1 Form: WNLWWL |
Posted: 22 November 2013 at 12:15am |
Law just drop a verse when you can i have problem with that.
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Shankley
Superior Member Joined: 03 September 2013 Location: Leeds, England Status: Offline Points: 3369 Crew: Kratos Kind Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 37-43-1 Form: WNLWWL |
Posted: 22 November 2013 at 11:20am |
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Shankley
Superior Member Joined: 03 September 2013 Location: Leeds, England Status: Offline Points: 3369 Crew: Kratos Kind Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 37-43-1 Form: WNLWWL |
Posted: 26 November 2013 at 10:37pm |
BUMP FOR THE LAW!!!
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Shankley
Superior Member Joined: 03 September 2013 Location: Leeds, England Status: Offline Points: 3369 Crew: Kratos Kind Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 37-43-1 Form: WNLWWL |
Posted: 29 November 2013 at 11:38am |
Where is The Law at?
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Shankley
Superior Member Joined: 03 September 2013 Location: Leeds, England Status: Offline Points: 3369 Crew: Kratos Kind Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 37-43-1 Form: WNLWWL |
Posted: 01 December 2013 at 6:21pm |
BUMP FOR NML
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The Law
Site Moderator God of the Minions Joined: 15 June 2013 Status: Offline Points: 5504 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 64-8-8 Form: LNWWWW |
Posted: 05 December 2013 at 7:38pm |
From the 'light work', its been predicted that your getting blind For speaking about christmas, when it's obvious you ain't gifted at this present time He thought he could come quick, and create a crew to be in a slump with but hesss still Chump-less with no promise.. It's about time to Jump Ship In all honesty, Shank? You can't stomach my mass like a belly of cancer When your writing open mics about "school" and can't correct your Spelling and Grammar -____- Smh.. Taking a stab at me, is like jumping in the voluntary hearse Since the "law came to confiscate shank" and turn his bars to a solitary verse Expo Bar 3: School OM Bar 4: If you got caught with a shank in prison you would get put in solitary.. Double entendre :D |
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Shankley
Superior Member Joined: 03 September 2013 Location: Leeds, England Status: Offline Points: 3369 Crew: Kratos Kind Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 37-43-1 Form: WNLWWL |
Posted: 05 December 2013 at 9:10pm |
Cool drop Law Glad you pulled through didn't want a no show. Thanks man
Vote up people
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The_Guy
Standard Member Joined: 18 May 2013 Status: Offline Points: 1014 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 16-12-0 Form: WLWWLL |
Posted: 05 December 2013 at 11:40pm |
Shank
You had some decent concepts but didn't form into the punches they could have been...my advice would be to work on wording your concepts into some good punches...just play around with it until you feel that is the best possible verse you could lay down Law You came with some heat from start to finish...consistent as always and your punches landed pretty nicely...battle is pretty much one sided vgt law
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Beans
Superior Member Joined: 12 October 2013 Location: MA Status: Offline Points: 6718 Crew: EMPIRE Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 95-24-5 Form: WWWWWW |
Posted: 05 December 2013 at 11:50pm |
Shank liked your verse, some
Of your bars had some multis and your flow was on point Your opener was your best bar, good personal to Law... Solid drop your opener was the best bar in the battle Imo Good personals multis an flow Vote law for harder punches and personals |
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1-2 Season 1 Final Champ
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The Law
Site Moderator God of the Minions Joined: 15 June 2013 Status: Offline Points: 5504 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 64-8-8 Form: LNWWWW |
Posted: 06 December 2013 at 1:06am |
2-0.
Thanks for those that have voted so far.
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Flossaurus
Standard Member Joined: 04 November 2013 Location: WithYourMother Status: Offline Points: 1222 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 22-9-0 Form: LWWWWW |
Posted: 06 December 2013 at 7:04am |
Shank - Had some cool concepts in there but the punches were lacking
in my opinion, try and reword things, delivery and flow will help you a lot. The battle royale bar was your best. The Law - Pretty solid verse. It was a lot of hit or miss imo, but that diss on his OM had me laughing. Overall came in more personal and more polished verse. MVGT The Law, looks like he took this battle a bit easy. But had enough personals, flow and polished verses for the win. Stay up Shank. |
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Allow me to retort, you cowards is just learnin the shit we been teachin
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Shankley
Superior Member Joined: 03 September 2013 Location: Leeds, England Status: Offline Points: 3369 Crew: Kratos Kind Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 37-43-1 Form: WNLWWL |
Posted: 06 December 2013 at 7:07am |
3-0 KO The Law
Great battle man your verse did make me lol
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hanGing
Veteran Not to be Fucked With. Joined: 28 October 2003 Status: Offline Points: 5008 Text Rank: #8 Stats: 30-10-6 Form: NNWLNL |
Posted: 09 December 2013 at 9:03pm |
Ko Law
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