Open Mic: The Measure Of Slip.

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   Slip Alter your Ego and replace the hate with respect,
Now alone in your crew which for 2 yrs I kept in check, 
Ya attitude the reason they all abandoned you & defect, 
BG showed up the bitch in you like a cause and effect,

ANNi dropped a diss verse and then called your ass out,
He wanted to beat you like he's brewing a Guinness stout, 
But you disappeared like Casper or a stream in a drought,
Now down to me i filled in gaps left by you like Im grout, 

Understand punk I'll leave ya all shook up like a spray can, 
Stick to fittin air con its the closes ya'll get to having a fan,
Shit when I finish blazin ya Ill even leave you with a sun tan, 
You take flight in battles whilst acting like a child not a man, 

I felt we had a good set up ppl were solid some ferocious, 
I also had vibes that we could become what the most is, 
Now here's a list of past members Alter Egos once boasted, 
Sky
Gambino
ANNILATOR
AXY and Flame
The latter like his name left you totally burnt up & roasted, 
A full glass for him I raise up as I smile to him i toast this, 

ANNI now me exposing you like the Harry Weinstein affairs, 
Childish cunt saying 3 strikes to BG for making him aware,
Cuz of spelling mistakes in an OM acting like rouge khmer, 
Saying shit like that's 1 thats 2 bitch get the fuck outta here, 

Expo, ANNI/BG are one in the same person,

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Crimson Juice Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Site Moderator Joined: 20 December 2015 Location: U.K. Status: Offline Points: 3258 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 6-11-0 Form: LLWLW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Crimson Juice Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Topic: The Measure Of Slip. Posted: 19 February 2018 at 6:59pm
	Slip Alter your Ego and replace the hate with respect, Now alone in your crew which for 2 yrs I kept in check, Ya attitude the reason they all abandoned you & defect, BG showed up the bitch in you like a cause and effect, ANNi dropped a diss verse and then called your ass out, He wanted to beat you like he's brewing a Guinness stout, But you disappeared like Casper or a stream in a drought, Now down to me i filled in gaps left by you like Im grout, Understand punk I'll leave ya all shook up like a spray can, Stick to fittin air con its the closes ya'll get to having a fan, Shit when I finish blazin ya Ill even leave you with a sun tan, You take flight in battles whilst acting like a child not a man, I felt we had a good set up ppl were solid some ferocious, I also had vibes that we could become what the most is, Now here's a list of past members Alter Egos once boasted, Sky Gambino ANNILATOR AXY and Flame The latter like his name left you totally burnt up & roasted, A full glass for him I raise up as I smile to him i toast this, ANNI now me exposing you like the Harry Weinstein affairs, Childish cunt saying 3 strikes to BG for making him aware, Cuz of spelling mistakes in an OM acting like rouge khmer, Saying shit like that's 1 thats 2 bitch get the fuck outta here, Expo, ANNI/BG are one in the same person,
	"You need to learn how to make an exit, before you can dare make an entrance".

Slip Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 04 June 2013 Location: St Johns. N.L. Status: Offline Points: 1612 Crew: Alter Egos Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 14-33-0 Form: LLLWLW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Slip Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 19 February 2018 at 10:01pm
	Yo crim I'll give you props on the quick response But this has the same problem as most of ya drops The flows off its awkward ,the way you word it The syllables don't line up, mite be different if I heard it But I doubt very much you could carry a rhythm Lame punches played conceps rushed and pourly written Take your time re read it let it flow off ya tounge Because reading unpolished verses aint that fun Seriously tho you need to work on your wording ,trim it down a bit There's a lot of unnecessary words that just don't fit
	See no evil speak no evil silent echo alter ego inner demon violent beast so warn the mother fucking people

spume corrupt Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member Joined: 27 April 2011 Location: UK Status: Offline Points: 3163 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 20-7-1 Form: WLWLLL	Post Options Post Reply Quote spume corrupt Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 19 February 2018 at 10:09pm
	Yeah bro I appreciate the quick rebuttal But Slip has pretty much nailed it with the feedback You should have spent a little more time if you wanted to come back at him Plus we need to fix up your flow and wording issues Otherwise it’s nothing but respect due for your passion and drive Props