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Real Hip Hop
Groupie Joined: 18 March 2014 Location: London Status: Offline Points: 278 |
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Posted: 24 August 2016 at 7:37pm |
Read as minus; equality, justice? believe there's silence You seek a bias and discriminate like the Zika virus Don't heed with violence, we can all be the pious There's a 'Scandal' everywhere, they all need a Cyrus End of the world? The recession showed us the times near Wanna trump each other, 'Rushin' to take over 'crime here' So quick like a lightning 'bolt' what the fuck are 'You-Sayin' Donald and Vladimir in the same line and a mention of Ukraine Double entendres everywhere, what the fuck are you playin Do it right, cut cultural appropriation. Who do you blame? All these petty raps just serve as reminders That all you Fetty Wap's are all fake designers I pander to no one - so am not susceptible To fall in line, or forced to respect the rules Set by corrupt leaders, who forget the jewels... ...are with the people but wanna set the 'views' Twits in uniform look us in the face and book us When not firing shots, that's how they took us Used to be Kings and Queens now following trends Decline in society, we swallow what they send It's time to up the stakes, you're punching for punching's sake Punching above your weight, your punches are not that great In these times, at least to me. There's people bringing us woe The narcissist knows. When the grass is cut, the snakes will show! ...So ...off we go ...let the trumpets blow Let's make it more than just the rhymes that flow. |
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Jay-Z:
"I just tackle the subject, the flack of the public/ Nothing!I know real N***** just happen to love it" |
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D.Von Doom
Standard Member Joined: 18 June 2014 Status: Offline Points: 1534 Audio Rank: #1 Stats: 15-4-0 Form: WWWWWL |
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This was cool technically. Notice the jay influence in your writing.however that designer/pander was a reach. Besides that it was a cool read. And everyone using trump lines in om...it's pretty played now.
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I can only fall off in space...
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Konflict
Groupie Joined: 12 June 2006 Status: Offline Points: 48 |
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Sick flow, nice multis, some clever lines here and there. You grabbed me with the opening Zika virus line. Smooth read all the way through. Good work
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Nazelsprayz
Newbie Joined: 29 August 2016 Location: London Status: Offline Points: 5 |
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Love to battle your to serius mam!!!
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Nazelsprayz
Newbie Joined: 29 August 2016 Location: London Status: Offline Points: 5 |
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Battle?
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D.Von Doom
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Watch out lil bitch *2 chains voice* |
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I can only fall off in space...
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