Open Mic: The Ruler's Back

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    Posted: 24 August 2016 at 7:37pm


Read as minus; equality, justice? believe there's silence
You seek a bias and discriminate like the Zika virus
Don't heed with violence, we can all be the pious
There's a 'Scandal' everywhere, they all need a Cyrus
End of the world? The recession showed us the times near
Wanna trump each other, 'Rushin' to take over 'crime here'
So quick like a lightning 'bolt' what the fuck are 'You-Sayin'
Donald and Vladimir in the same line and a mention of Ukraine
Double entendres everywhere, what the fuck are you playin
Do it right, cut cultural appropriation. Who do you blame?
All these petty raps just serve as reminders
That all you Fetty Wap's are all fake designers
I pander to no one - so am not susceptible
To fall in line, or forced to respect the rules
Set by corrupt leaders, who forget the jewels...
...are with the people but wanna set the 'views'
Twits in uniform look us in the face and book us
When not firing shots, that's how they took us
Used to be Kings and Queens now following trends
Decline in society, we swallow what they send

It's time to up the stakes, you're punching for punching's sake
Punching above your weight, your punches are not that great
In these times, at least to me. There's people bringing us woe
The narcissist knows. When the grass is cut, the snakes will show!
...So   ...off we go   ...let the trumpets blow   
Let's make it more than just the rhymes that flow.





Jay-Z:
"I just tackle the subject, the flack of the public/
Nothing!I know real N***** just happen to love it"

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This was cool technically. Notice the jay influence in your writing.however that designer/pander was a reach. Besides that it was a cool read. And everyone using trump lines in om...it's pretty played now.
I can only fall off in space...
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Sick flow, nice multis, some clever lines here and there. You grabbed me with the opening Zika virus line. Smooth read all the way through. Good work
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Love to battle your to serius mam!!!
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Battle?
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Originally posted by Nazelsprayz Nazelsprayz wrote:

Battle?


Watch out lil bitch *2 chains voice*
I can only fall off in space...
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