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    Posted: 14 December 2017 at 2:30am

https://soundcloud.com/user37035975/the-wolf




The Wolf

your a sheep and I'm a wolf, that's why you ride in silence
ill, make it rain pain, have this fool think he's drowning
looks, like scripture on the wall but these are just my writings
pick a carcass off the floor, and ill lay you where you found it

feed the bones to the pack, I keep 'em close like Corleone
they stepping wrong they head is blown, they high strung, I string 'em up
I'm headstrong, up on my throne, if I swung, you'd die young
not die now but die young, like whoop bloah, there was no son

now look how, you begin to fade
couldn't coexist, nor integrate
not an imprint in a world of clay.

you shook now, but its too late,
had a need to resist, that was too great
you ceased to exist, I undo fate (Aye)
Aye

if you search, with a microscopes, you'll never find, a shred of hope
I put the pressure, on the microphone, I'm pulverizing, all ya bones
till there's nothing left and I've double checked
that I've vaporized, your entire soul (whoa)
whoa



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Edited by Lord Puente - 14 December 2017 at 2:53am
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This the best shit I've ever heard. 
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My man, this is your best sounding verse imo. Your lyrical quality is always on point but you sound so fresh on here, I dig it.
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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote Neek Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 16 December 2017 at 2:32am
I thought the same as Kairo. probs my fav joint ive heard from you.
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yea this is dope. Props
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Appreciate the feed fellas
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Yeh this was dope dude. Nice beat choice, was really vibing to it. Your delivery is always different to the usual which I always appreciate. I like how you mix it up and being a bit of personality to it. Overall one of your best if not your best.

Good shit man.
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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote SELF ACTIVATE Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 31 December 2017 at 7:47am
Theatrical and overtop, per usual. I love how you add background sound effects to your songs. I think doing that gives off a real movie-like quality. Which is super entertaing for us listeners. Your vocals in this particular instance were really charismatic and full of energy. Lyrically your content was experimental, but fasinating. In fact, it was like a topical verse, but instead of text, you graciously chose to blessed us with a quality performance via audio. I enjoyed it from "press play" to all the way until the end. God stuff, LP. This is another track from you that'll be getting multiples listens from my end. Peace.
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I appreciate the feed Rutter and self. Glad you enjoy the added sounds/Adkins whatever you wish to call them. It’s always fun doing those. Except the sound of matches, they a bit harder to get recorded. I’m sure there is a way to download them but that’s too advanced for me. I’ll just sit there with 20 matches until I get it just right.
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This was pretty dope mr LP. Defo feeling the vibe and your theatrical delivery. dope shit here man
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dope. Prefer the prodigy tracks but again this is solid. Salute my dude
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If there ever was a 'best of LP' compilation this song makes the list. This type of track was right up your alley. You embodied the savagery of a wild animal..
Namely a wolf lol. You didnt get off topic and stuck to the rhyme scheme water tight. It's a perfect track tbh. Good work
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Yo digging this up to say I really enjoyed it, this is a lesson in delivery for anybody looking for presence and/or delivery on the mic. Absolutely loved that aspect of it, fire. The ABAB on the first stanza was cool, you don't see that too often, but geez this was hot all the way through.

As someone else said you stayed on topic the whole time, the lyrics bleed aggression, just a really good track overall. Listening on laptop speakers but the production seemed clear but not overpowering, I get a problem where a lot of guys say my vocaals need to be turned down.

Anyways I really enjoyed it, my only problem was it was too short lol.
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