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    Posted: 19 May 2021 at 2:12am
30 Bars 3 Votes win like U said bro good luck
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 23 May 2021 at 7:59am
A Bounded Slave you Know the Crave,
I stalk your Soul from Beyond your Grave,
Death Row Bards Taking it all if you Don't Behave,
Nothing or all but again you've lost cowards and Found the Brave,
Leave your skull looking like a Dug out Cave
When letting something burried Curse Engrave,town
Depraved ghost
Isometric I Treat all victims the Same,
Never thinking twice when having an Imbecile Slain,
Bringing the Reign ripping your vein and stripping a Brain,
Striking your spirit as it leaves the body Tripling The Pain,
No hopes in Diminish ing the Flame that's Eating your Frame,
Blood Drips the flow slick Lick my tongue quick as it Drains,
After getting Hit by the Trains,
Throw you in a furnace If any Liquid Remains,
That's how the Wicked Explains not Sane have you torn to Little pieces of miniature Grains
With Limbs constricted, Restrained, Slowly beaten to a pulp on verge of nonexistent Domains,
Force you to eat your own Lips in the Game,
But it don't stop there I'm entering the site and permanently Deleting your Name,
Evidently shielding in Shame trapped in a Distant Plain,
I'm profane a beast unleashed to feast in any Domain,
Crimes are scary nothing linking to Lame,
All in pitty Grail get Peeled the Same,
Make your Drink Propane and Sniff Cocaine
That Eat through your core like distinguished Crane,
And leave your clipped in a Lane
With your throat stabbed with a piece of Pane,
Like Neutral Boss Your crushed bones? I seek it
Whenever it's time to Explode in secret?
Secrete Bars that bash your Spleen Fast,
Dropping bombs wired to Exterminate a Brutal Cast,
The Sarge Mole take on thspread your flesh across Cores
Break your hands and shuv em in your Asshole
Then sodomize it with a Large Pole
Making sure you take it all on scene like a Fat Whore,
Clean Particles of your Slammed head falling form a Dam Door,
Splattered all over the Stall Floor,
This is pass gore... weirdly its not enough I Seldomly Want More,
Switching to evil drastically wanting a Mad Choor,
When it comes to Savagery You Fall Poor,
I cut up a sword and have the giant parts in your Gland Stored
With your chest center Holly and all Bored,
So deep It wasn't a test sheep bro even a Shark Implored
But in the end way inside seems a metal Shaft Explored,
While your technique is so boring old a whole team going to War Snored,
I'm Wrath Sold making a Path Gold
Bending backs Cold or digging like a Carver in Flaw Mode it's like watching a Straw Fold,
Don't try midevil tactics from the past my son Arthur I'm That Old
The omen that Hold Grudges here gash your neck open Infront of Judges
No need to play it discreet Swallow this bunch of poisoned roses while you roast beneath Burning Churches...

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 28 May 2021 at 1:16pm
Finally someone  let him out of his cage, As Empty as his fridge and dramatic as his name his ass  has been horrorcored up in A cave
 like a slave
 along  with the sexy britney spears whom ,
oops ill tell the whole world that you smelt her farts 
again and again is to why your horrorcored ,cold,and stink like a bomb
but thats better,your at ease 
 while we get the  schematic covid 19  disease
your last verse then  up in the hearse 
thats why  its so lame so wipe your name your game and that smirk off of ur face 
 what you rap about  aint the shit u was scared 
 live your life rap about it bail  and sale your life on  a BIll of Sale
maybe your an example of live  fast die young cause you sound  like your in a horror flick sausage fest infestation.
 this a battle about  you what u think im lost on what station
 about you at random cost, i dont know you all i know is  your one schematic son of a bitch the horrorcore witch
 if it was human it would be the cannibal bitch.  
your  like a physcho path on a wrath
 that never made it anywhere but to his own bloodbath
 when he got there he was already insane in the membrane  
one side  was heavier than the other side of the brain
  like the earths   moon his ass  is the fullmoon 
Schematic the physcho only time he is calm when he watches sailor moon 
after that nature calls channel to watch his ancestors the babboons fight for the last of the bones, pretty savage like as i ravage you like spiderman when he fights carnage 
eat you up and shit you out  like garbage
 in a bag that i throw like a 
 flying saucer to your plate
 meatball sauce with all my hate
 because  this aint no horrorcore 
 cause  i will turn shit  comedy u feel me ,if you dont 
ill get a baseball bat let it go you flinch
 while "i Gotcha hat"and run  like  jake paul 
make a quick left  while u hit the wall
 grab my baseball that i dropped to bat your security hero in the face with my ken griffey stance 
I aint scared ill bone crush your both your hands  
curb stomp ya face  make you eat yourself 
including your weiner your butthole and your  butt cheeks you beavis and butt head  pest 
you have so much tipis in your  banghole asshole
 schematic like a big mole you centipide come out of your own hole
 ill fry roast ya like a pig on a bamboo stick pole connected to your  bestfriends smashholes 
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 31 August 2022 at 2:36pm
Advice for both writers here since you both have similar flows styles structure and even rhythms.

You both are below average for the LA standard:

Your flows read choppy at best. Stretched in places. try conforming to a syllable structure.

Now Concepts: you both use a lot of pop culture references to "diss" your opponent but nothing personal to tie to said opponent unless you know for a fact one of you two is actually gay?
Joffy your set up was a bit more structured and the whole verse wasnt just a run on.... you made a point eventually. which helps you here.
S- you had bits that just dragged on and never made any real punch.

Joffy gets my vote after review for more punches over all and a touch of complexity.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 29 October 2022 at 9:39am
Under the Fixed Battle Rules a battle that is decided within 4 weeks gets closed. On that basis, since we have a vote and it's a legacy battle I am closing it as a 1-0 victory. No KO was achieved therefore regular win.

Congrats to Joffy for breaking your duck.
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