Open Mic: Tribute

They say I'm past my prime fuck it that's half a line
Lookin at ya rhymes, I rush em like a mastadon
Attack ya mind, spit truth til the facts rewind
His crew packs the lines til I collapse ya spine
Breakin slow, greatest flow until I surpass ya time
My audibles intact I'm slaughtering cats
Your audio tracks, I couldn't be as awful as that
I'm callin it wack, u want war my Barrio's intact
I'm quick to flip the script witness this kid missing
I diss him hittin wit his fiction like he went to prison
Ask anybody when I'm robbing, lent a shottie, I'll end u probly.
Then I proudly send ya body to the bx then I'm dodgin
I'm leaving the premise, handed off the can with ether that's in it
My squad be eager to finish, while I'm about to feast in a minute
Jake's become the latest ones to forsake my son
Swayed ya fate it's done if you tried facing Pun


I'm the kid that'll rip ya dome off, with no prob
Your girl wouldn't go to work, that's what I call a blow job
We been grinding now, she don't want u finding out
So I been hiding behind the couch tryna get the timing down
My guns'll burst leaving someone hurt for coming home early from your work
I punch with verbs, today's rap.. there is nothing worse
I'm lunging forks, until ya stomach burst
Tryna see my keys but couldn't get past the tumblers first
I do it harlem style cats can't harm me now
Or they get touched quicker than a tarnished child
I'm the meanest to the mic, you see what I can write
Hoes stuck to me more than fiends is to a pipe
This rhyming takes a legend, you only trying to cop a place in heaven
But I'm the type to snap in church and rape a reverend
Just for the power of course, you a coward I toss
Battlin Big L, you'd even be proud of a loss

I loved the schemes you employed here and your opening segment was particularly great. The 'swayed ya fate' bit was one of the highlights to me. Nice to see you posting. 

solid work here man, again this is another one I had read earlier this past week but just haven't had time to feed.

Ha this had that OG swag. Love how u imitated pun and L. And it was so identical to their trademark style too.

"Spit truth till the facts rewind" ha! That was godly!

I've always love these punchline type verses and with the overall concept, this was def one of my fav And fun read of recent.. Thanks for the read, sir.