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    Posted: 20 April 2017 at 10:42pm
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Originally posted by Goryo. Goryo. wrote:

I asked my sister Bethany if she'd have sex with me


Wait....what...? Smh.


Fantasy fucking ur sister scriptures? None read it if I recall...
It's another example of how you've become the worst Syn of all!
I'm appalled! Ur an only child? Then he doesn't get laid as much..
Thirsting for options he probably wishes birth into the Brady Bunch!
Gross thoughts, nail this Syn to a Cross ...we see your mission...
Line for Line 'Gor's-all-fucked-up' like Jesus body in every depiction!!
Syn is bitches!! Bunch of ducking no showing hoes, ..not to be modest...
Ur "Crew Run Run" more then tracks with Puffy n Christopher Wallace!
His verse a Suicide Note, watch'em choke cant hear Gor scream for help...
You'll die behind-these-bars, .....think Aaron Hernandez n kill yourself!


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Bitch!


Yet to see you spit hot, so tell me how you're a vet, clown?
Like a bad buffet when I see 'Tre'/tray it's always a let down!
Calling your battles a 'scrap'? Yo that's true to the letter, kid
Cause everything you write? It could be made into better shit!
You're like CM Punk, the way that this ain't life imitating art
Cause you ain't a 'true heavyweight', you just like to 'play the part'
Always bringing up my faction, he tries to attack Syn
And ends up looking like a Pox party... 'desperate for reactions!'
You attention seeking loser, your punches are less than scratches
Folks are only 'down for Tre' if it's Mexican wrestling matches!





(Expos: in the callout thread he said 'who wants a scrap', CM Punk played a heavyweight in WWE but if a welterweight in UFC, parents throw chickenpox parties to purposely infect their kids, and Tre is Spanish for 3 obviously. Probably all speak for themselves but yeah)
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Whuttup yall! Damm I haven't voted in a battle in a lonnnng time. But hey....both of you came through and left me feed so I for sure need to return the favor.

First off I really enjoyed this one. First the quote and then G came off with bitch....reminded me of TTop lol. Both had only one or two stand outs but for the most part yall really got at each other with next to zero general punches. You know...punches that could be for anyone.

Tre your opener was cool. But the first really stand out was how you put together the sin/cross/mission/jesus depiction bar ....really in the pocket for me.The lines after that goin in with the crew run run/Biggie shit was a nice hit lol.The end was ok.

Gor...Never seen you battle before and to see you up against a seasoned player was cool cuz you held your own imo.I give you a pass with the tre/tray hits cuz its your first battling Tre. The first tre play was cool... I even laughed cuz I know how it is when you goto a buffet and the shit looks hella good but you sit down to eat and it tastes like shit lmao.The scrap bar was your stand out. I liked how you executed that.I liked the pox bar but it was just a bar. Still it was nice pox/reactions lol.


All in all a nice skirmish. Imma go with Tre on this one but I'm still crackin up at the buffet shit ha ha. Good shit G

Mvgt Tre

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Tre

Hella consistent combos not letting up.
Relevant, and you kept a good flow with it the whole way


Gor

You had some funny ass lines, and a lot creative attacks, you kept it consistent without any abrupt halts in the verse.
But some of the punches were a bit soft and not accurate enough to answer tre


MVGT Tre

He had a more aggressive piece a consistent idea throughout. It was clear, crisp and hard to the point

Gor I liked your piece man but the thing for me atleast with expos is use em if you're referring to previous battles or posts etc about the opponent, but when your expos explain the bars it's like explaining a joke.

If Gor would of posted a more personal verse it would of been closer IMO.
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Tre had some crazy bars on this but that was to be expected, your last 2 lines seemed a lil bit played out to me i feel like u could have had a better closer it just didnt sound right for real.. But all of them besides the aaron hernandez was tight and that christopher wallace line had me rollin that shit was ill. All in all was a good one.

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Fantasy fucking ur sister scriptures? None read it if I recall...
It's another example of how you've become the worst Syn of all!
I'm appalled! Ur an only child? Then he doesn't get laid as much..
Thirsting for options he probably wishes birth into the Brady Bunch!
Gross thoughts, nail this Syn to a Cross ...we see your mission...
Line for Line 'Gor's-all-fucked-up' like Jesus body in every depiction!!
Syn is bitches!! Bunch of ducking no showing hoes, ..not to be modest...
Ur "Crew Run Run" more then tracks with Puffy n Christopher Wallace!


Bitch!

That closer was DOPE. All in all goryo I never seen anything from u but I see from this you have potential.. I cant call u a rook because i havnt been here in 4 years but I know tre been doin this for a LONG time and honestly i was expectin this to be a blowout but it wasnt. Like i said u actually gave tre a run for his money and thats whatsup.. But as stated above i agree tre came more agressive and his lines just flowed more and that seals the deal for me ... This is tres but it really could have went either way u still get respect in my book bruh

Yet to see you spit hot, so tell me how you're a vet, clown?
Like a bad buffet when I see 'Tre'/tray it's always a let down!
Calling your battles a 'scrap'? Yo that's true to the letter, kid
Cause everything you write? It could be made into better shit!
You're like CM Punk, the way that this ain't life imitating art
Cause you ain't a 'true heavyweight', you just like to 'play the part'
Always bringing up my faction, he tries to attack Syn
And ends up looking like a Pox party... 'desperate for reactions!'
You attention seeking loser, your punches are less than scratches
Folks are only 'down for Tre' if it's Mexican wrestling matches!




MVGT TRIZZY TRE

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Tre wins via 3-0KO

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