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Mitch.Wagwaan
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Posted: 13 October 2019 at 10:46pm |
5 bars due Midnight Tuesday, Good luck G.
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Mitch.Wagwaan
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Listen Faggot... I'm not a drug fiend you can bully, there be no smoooth sailing, Although my jabs like crack the way they leave ya jaw trailing. I gotta hunch ya gonna come wid that "I'll punch you n smash ya head" Shit. Five years since ya hit Shank n Flame wid it, still runnin wid it, how original prick. Seen cats call it the "Trademark Beans Way" Fuck what they say, This cunts stuck in Groundhog day, using the same old play. Nothing you write holds merit, it's all fucking generic, A despicable trade that your shitty excuses inherit. From "Sorry for the late key" to "Writing now forgot about this". Shut ya mouthpiece, Makes me crease, How ya show as much creativity as the next IPhone release. |
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Beans
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Beans vs Mitch wagwaan
LISTEN FAGGOT! All your bars are laughable, clown! this game your weak & a dense Fuck “All Jokes Aside”, that’s jus one way of telling you to “take a seat on the bench!” 1 Bar-you outa gas! So be Audi with that skill of the weak, sir You’ll never be B, MW... but I’ll pull your body parts out the grill of my Beamer! Oh so you on that dad thrill? Take you & your fam an smash grills Your kids are already weak, immature & lack brains...hopefully they don’t take after your rap skills You’ll need more than scripts after this beating..tho this merkin is slim Only reason your mentioned w/the word “ILL” is because you dissed the same person as him I throw bullets @ champions... you struggle on yardage you stupid hoe You winning a battle? We got a better chance seeing the Dolphins win the Super Bowl |
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1-2 Season 1 Final Champ
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Crimson Juice
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i'll get to this later today or tomorrow (double busy at the mo), i'll also edit
this post with a vote, nice tussle guys...peace |
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"You need to learn how to make an exit,
before you can dare make an entrance". |
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D.Von Doom
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Mitch
I'm not a drug fiend you can bully, there be no smoooth sailing, Although my jabs like crack the way they leave ya jaw trailing. Good opener and the Best setup and punch of your verse. Though it's kind of generic (can be said to anyone) I gotta hunch ya gonna come wid that "I'll punch you n smash ya head" Shit. Five years since ya hit Shank n Flame wid it, still runnin wid it, how original prick Poorly written...big drop in quality from the first bar. Though this one was more specific to beans. You just didn't execute. Don't just go through the motions mitch...use your lines with purpose Seen cats call it the "Trademark Beans Way" Fuck what they say, This cunts stuck in Groundhog day, using the same old play. Started off like it was going somewhere but yet again you settled. It's like a long setup with no pay off. Nothing you write holds merit, it's all fucking generic, A despicable trade that your shitty excuses inherit. I like this bar and how it's written. Somewhat personal but not much sting. From "Sorry for the late key" to "Writing now forgot about this". Shut ya mouthpiece, Makes me crease, How ya show as much creativity as the next IPhone release. Potential in the setup. But You settled for a simple punch so the impact was nothing to write home about Beans All your bars are laughable, clown! this game your weak & a dense Fuck “All Jokes Aside”, that’s jus one way of telling you to “take a seat on the bench!” Okay opener. Decent punch. Pretty normal for you though. 1 Bar-you outa gas! So be Audi with that skill of the weak, sir You’ll never be B, MW... but I’ll pull your body parts out the grill of my Beamer Like the theme in this one alot. The punch and setup payed off. A step up from your first bar. Oh so you on that dad thrill? Take you & your fam an smash grills Your kids are already weak, immature & lack brains...hopefully they don’t take after your rap skills The Disrespect made this bar okay. Wasn't really feeling it You’ll need more than scripts after this beating..tho this merkin is slim Only reason your mentioned w/the word “ILL” is because you dissed the same person as him Good personal. Good punch overall though its too wordy . I throw bullets @ champions... you struggle on yardage you stupid hoe You winning a battle? We got a better chance seeing the Dolphins win the Super Bowl Eh. Okay bar, written could've been tighter. MVGT: Beans For more solid punches and better personals. Mitch has potential just needs more time in the lab. |
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I can only fall off in space...
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levy420
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Mitch
I'm not a drug fiend you can bully, there be no smoooth sailing, Although my jabs like crack the way they leave ya jaw trailing. I like this bar but like the guy above me stated its rather generic an can be applied twords anyone if u would have connected it to beans directly then it woulda hit harder but good concept for a opener I gotta hunch ya gonna come wid that "I'll punch you n smash ya head" Shit. Five years since ya hit Shank n Flame wid it, still runnin wid it, how original prick. The wid it gwice took alot away from this love the concept could of hit harder if worded better Seen cats call it the "Trademark Beans Way" Fuck what they say, This cunts stuck in Groundhog day, using the same old play. Taking from the last concept an making it hit this was your best bar Nothing you write holds merit, it's all fucking generic, A despicable trade that your shitty excuses inherit. Not working at all rhis was a miss From "Sorry for the late key" to "Writing now forgot about this". Shut ya mouthpiece, Makes me crease, How ya show as much creativity as the next IPhone release. Decent closer a better attempt from the concept created in the lines before it but it didnt hit hard at all wording took away from the punch made it seemed dragged out Overall ok battle verse unfortuinatly only one bar really hit Beans LISTEN FAGGOT! All your bars are laughable, clown! this game your weak & a dense Fuck “All Jokes Aside”, that’s jus one way of telling you to “take a seat on the bench!” Seen way better from u flow was off cuz it felt stretched but decent opener 1 Bar-you outa gas! So be Audi with that skill of the weak, sir You’ll never be B, MW... but I’ll pull your body parts out the grill of my Beamer! This was pretty hard Oh so you on that dad thrill? Take you & your fam an smash grills Your kids are already weak, immature & lack brains...hopefully they don’t take after your rap skills This missed to me i get the concept but not a fan of the bar homie You’ll need more than scripts after this beating..tho this merkin is slim Only reason your mentioned w/the word “ILL” is because you dissed the same person as him Eh I throw bullets @ champions... you struggle on yardage you stupid hoe You winning a battle? We got a better chance seeing the Dolphins win the Super Bowl Way to close strong this was the best bar of the battle imo Mvgt beans |
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Rapper T
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Yo I wanted to see Michelle Wigger do better cos he DONE been doing this a while now. Fuck jaw and smooth don't even rhyme homie. Single syllable weak schemes. FUCK YOU. You better try if you follow-up on your CO to me cos this shit was WEAK you PUSSYHOLE you got fucked trying to flick a bean. Look like you can't come correct on some American Pie shit IMPROVE SON
Beans you fair murked it. Man I ain't know when we battled you'd get to number one. This was a weak verse from you really. Throwing bullets ain't that effective on a Battlefield. The BM concept was cool. Inners and outers and scheme present. Could've been smoother but yeah again you did enough MVGT Beans 3-0
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Crimson Juice
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3-0 ko awarded to Beans..
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