Battlefield: Wagwaan Vs Noumenon

 Post Reply Post Reply
Author
Mitch.Wagwaan View Drop Down
Groupie
Groupie
Avatar

Joined: 21 June 2014
Location: England
Status: Offline
Points: 313

Voter of The Month

Text Rank: Unranked
Stats: 0-4-1
Form: LLLLN
Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote Mitch.Wagwaan Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Topic: Wagwaan Vs Noumenon
    Posted: 07 October 2019 at 5:05pm
5 bars, due Midnight Wednesday 9th October latest.
Back to Top
Mitch.Wagwaan View Drop Down
Groupie
Groupie
Avatar

Joined: 21 June 2014
Location: England
Status: Offline
Points: 313

Voter of The Month

Text Rank: Unranked
Stats: 0-4-1
Form: LLLLN
Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote Mitch.Wagwaan Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 08 October 2019 at 10:05am
Beans wanted a three way, But Mitch dont share Bitches,
Year since I became a dad n again I'll leave a pussy in stitches.

Ya Home Tutored Inbred Country ass beard is deformed,
Claim your a lyrical genius, boy you've been ILL informed

Shit ya Elementary, must be that hash ya still tweaking on.
I Felt like Sherlock when ya dissed me, The way I'm Shouting What son?/Watson

Rhetorical question. Are you as much of a lil bitch as it seems?
Its grim son, the way you rubbed up Crimsons dick to intervene.

And What's your obsession with Big foots Big Dick?
Silly Git, Clearly compensating for your own prick.



* 1. Beans suggested a triple threat battle.

2.Home Tutored. You seen that bum fluff on his face!?! No? Check his Anti-Conservative song. ILL Scripz called him out on his absolute dribble he calls lyrics.

3. Reference to his Wagwaan 'Diss'.
Sherlock Holmes partner is Dr Watson. His catchphrase is 'Elementary'.

4. Had a bitch fit at Rhetorical and licked Crimsons ass clean on the same thread. Pussy.

5. Posted twice about Big foot including one about BF's penis. Non related but pretty sure it was his dad presenting it?

Back to Top
Noumenon View Drop Down
Suspended
Suspended
Avatar

Joined: 15 September 2019
Status: Offline
Points: 101

Text Rank: Unranked
Stats: 0-2-0
Form: LL
Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote Noumenon Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 08 October 2019 at 7:00pm
irony prevails quick, "Mitch don't share bitches"
are you aware Mitch is defined as a "male bitch" ?
fuck your frail diss, you're an embarrassment
you've got nothing but arrogance, you pale in comparison

it's no surprise you're shouting "what son" cause' not unlike Watson
you're confounded by elementary conundrums, your fucking name is "Wagwan"
for instance you couldn't calculate the quantum state of your johnson
when paired with your measly two text drops, son

  so why you hating on Bigfoot and what are you whingin' for?
in all probability, he makes you feel insecure

 https://www.urbandictionary.com/define.php?term=mitch

"Wagwan" is a Jamaican word for "what" and is often used to express confusion.

His dick is so small, it has the properties of a quantum particle. Thus the "probability" that he is in a state of insecurity when seeing bigfoot's dick is high. Also, he has been here since 2014 and only has two text drops (which both suck btw).





Back to Top
Crimson Juice View Drop Down
Site Moderator
Site Moderator
Avatar

Joined: 20 December 2015
Location: U.K.
Status: Offline
Points: 3019
Crew: Lyricist Inc.

Text Rank: Unranked
Stats: 6-11-0
Form: LLLWLW
Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote Crimson Juice Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 10 October 2019 at 7:44pm

This vote has been accepted by a moderator.


Good tussle here fella's.

Mitch Wagwaan.

This drop was creative in the sense that you've included alias that have had
dealings with Noumenon within your verse, you also in parts used them by
doubling them up to serve as personals, which i thought was a nice touch,
it seems like you had/have something to say here to Nou, each bar was direct
and aimed, you wordplay was cool also, yeah i like this verse, gritty in its app-
roach, there was no fucking about or subliminals, just streight at him, cool piece.


Noumenon.

Now to be honest i wasn't expecting you to drop a verse that is clearly leaps and
bounds better than the previous one, although that wasn't to bad really, the trouble
i see with your drops are as follows,firstly your over writing your bars, you need to
trim back on the words, (a bar on the norm is 2 lines) ,and talking of words, this is
probably one of your strengths, you seem to have a good pool of them to dip from,
now your creative in this department what you need to do is to formulate them into
harder and relivant punches, as i've said before leave out the gay-ish especially in
battles because their nothing more than fillers or light disses at best, even when ppl
are highly creative with the subject matter, it still feels out of place in a tussle, be-
cause your reaching to make a punch/personal out of them, work on the punches
and you'll pick up wins for sure, your word play at times gets missed i've noticed
because of the jargon before and after them, you seem to have a habit of making
them get lost via this process, the next thing is research, dig into your opponents
posts you'll be surprised what turns up that you can then use as a punch/personals,
shit look into their profiles, you'll find pictures past beefs alsorts of wonderful things
to use, and always take your time when writing anything, be it a post battle verse or
topical, this was a better verse thou...



Overall, i see improvement in Noumenon's verse here, but i feel the more experienced
battle won here, nice tussle guys, in truth i quite enjoyed this....

Vote... Mitch Wagwaan....peace.
"You need to learn how to make an exit,
before you can dare make an entrance".
Back to Top
Mitch.Wagwaan View Drop Down
Groupie
Groupie
Avatar

Joined: 21 June 2014
Location: England
Status: Offline
Points: 313

Voter of The Month

Text Rank: Unranked
Stats: 0-4-1
Form: LLLLN
Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote Mitch.Wagwaan Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 06 November 2019 at 9:05am
2 days off 4 weeks since drop so thought I would up it.
Back to Top
 Post Reply Post Reply
  Share Topic   

Forum Jump Forum Permissions View Drop Down