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daydizzle89
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Posted: 12 February 2016 at 3:15pm |
ROAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Edited by daydizzle89 - 12 February 2016 at 3:23pm |
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Neek
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this shit was hilarious as fuck. very well played.
only usage I was meh on was your rickshaw play, but overal I felt this was a nice cohesive unit. the ending had perfect timing. well done broham!! |
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Venomonology
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this made me laugh out loud a few times man, very humourous approach that worked quite well. I liked the aeromancy / golden shower play, that was pretty slick. only thing that seemed off to me was it seemed like there was a line missing, or maybe one too many in the rhinoceros / vociferous / phosphorous part that threw me off the flow a bit, but it picked up again after that.
nice one.
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