Open Mic: [WD#1] skeetin' on yo bitch

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   I'm with this chick, Givin her tonsils work,  intrikits monsterous
Dick Massaging her clit, but  her kitty reaks of garganzalas,
Cock back bust from the waist, stuff her face til she suffocates
The sluts disgraced, stab her gullet until it punctuates 
Her lungs with haste,endorphins are high, I'm in orbit
The kids from my balls quickly dissolves on her lips like dissolvant
Shit, I'd even dick a hoes grandma that still uses a dictaphone
Cuz nowadays,I'm so horny for sex, I'll even dick the phone
Have her producing my kids,,
I'll lick the the toes of your hoe til ur despising me
Have her producing my kids, 
Now she's my personal sperm refinery
Bruise throats badly, gagged with plan b, and viciousness
Deliver this contraceptive rest assured I'm vociferous
She knows that my dick long, so I tested that slick jaw 
Went down on my big balls, sent her home in a rickShaw
I'm slick yall, with pimp movements, lucid with scripts, 
I'm kid cupid, script music for plays ima bit  ludicrous
This lyricsists Inc will have u battered badly
Corpses will fall from the sky, that's aeromancy

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intrikit Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Newbie I am Vib. Klean Joined: 11 September 2015 Status: Offline Points: 370 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 1-4-0 Form: WLLLL	Post Options Post Reply Quote intrikit Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Topic: [WD#1] skeetin' on yo bitch Posted: 12 February 2016 at 1:01am
	I'm with this chick, Givin her tonsils work, intrikits monsterous Dick Massaging her clit, but her kitty reaks of garganzalas, Cock back bust from the waist, stuff her face til she suffocates The sluts disgraced, stab her gullet until it punctuates Her lungs with haste,endorphins are high, I'm in orbit The kids from my balls quickly dissolves on her lips like dissolvant Shit, I'd even dick a hoes grandma that still uses a dictaphone Cuz nowadays,I'm so horny for sex, I'll even dick the phone Have her producing my kids,, I'll lick the the toes of your hoe til ur despising me Have her producing my kids, Now she's my personal sperm refinery Bruise throats badly, gagged with plan b, and viciousness Deliver this contraceptive rest assured I'm vociferous She knows that my dick long, so I tested that slick jaw Went down on my big balls, sent her home in a rickShaw I'm slick yall, with pimp movements, lucid with scripts, I'm kid cupid, script music for plays ima bit ludicrous This lyricsists Inc will have u battered badly Corpses will fall from the sky, that's aeromancy

intrikit Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Newbie I am Vib. Klean Joined: 11 September 2015 Status: Offline Points: 370 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 1-4-0 Form: WLLLL	Post Options Post Reply Quote intrikit Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 21 February 2016 at 11:55pm
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Slips_138 Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Groupie Joined: 27 June 2014 Location: Ohio Status: Offline Points: 157 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 1-2-0 Form: LLW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Slips_138 Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 22 February 2016 at 12:11am
	I'll give you some input just make sure you reciprocate. Overall that piece flowed very well. Nice rhymes about sex. I laughed a couple times. I liked "cuz nowadays I'm so horny for sex I'll dick the phone." made me chuckle. Overall good job bro. Just keep writing and be sure to feed others of you want feedback.