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Neek
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Posted: 17 March 2018 at 4:47pm |
a legend for eons, straight enter the Dragon
"be aquatic" pulsates, the mindstates enamored humanity has a flair for dramatic, concise theatrics binary object, cubicals trench the combatants the gravel been traveled, the path is enslavement "be water my friend" - but all we see is Oasis. bottomline, its so basic.. the freedom were chasing replaced by technology, and the mind has been wasted |
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spume corrupt
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Honestly
You just went pole position with this little insertion The read was grimey in its feel and the use of given words was on some superior level Loving that gravel stuff unraveled In context this was dope It is the benchmark I will aim for in my upcoming TWD 3 |
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Crimson Juice
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Neek as you know i do around up when this event closes,so I won't leave feed
at this time,but damn,this right here is "ICY"..peace. |
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"You need to learn how to make an exit,
before you can dare make an entrance". |
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Sammy
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"humanity has a flair for dramatic, concise theatrics."
dope "binary object, cubicals trench the combatant" nice turn of phrase. "cubicals trench". boxed in? for a short piece, this packed quite the 1 inch punch. dope as usual sir.
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Bruh, I sincerely wish you wrote more often. Your pieces are so fluent it's crazy. I don't know what it is, but this tiny display of text came across so natural and conversational to me. I legit feel like you just Bruce karate chopped us with your textual wisdom. I could read this all day. Always a pleasure, man. Always.
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I didn't even realize until now that this was a Word Drop Challenge. I just saw the name Neek and immediately clicked the link. However, now that I know what's up. I'm even more amazed by what you did here. Props. |
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Sammy
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^^ on the real, i didn't realize it either. that made this shit even fresher.
neek lets get on an audio collaboration, sir.
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daydizzle89
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a legend for eons, straight enter the Dragon
"be aquatic" pulsates, the mindstates enamored Dope slant humanity has a flair for dramatic, concise theatrics binary object, cubicals trench the combatants the gravel been traveled, the path is enslavement "be water my friend" - but all we see is Oasis. Bruh, you slanting hardcore bottomline, its so basic.. the freedom were chasing replaced by technology, and the mind has been wasted The Technological Singularity is a real thing. Be scare Neeko |
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Lord Puente
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This was dope. Best part was the cubicles trench the combatants. Well done amigo. Only word I wasn’t feeling was aquatic.
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