Open Mic: [wd4] Fossil of war

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    Posted: 11 April 2018 at 3:54pm
Ridiculous fortunes with prehistoric origins
Regions go to war to forage it
Warlords work in unison to score a lick
Its a practical force driving sorcerers
in its purest form, vague concepts of earths forfeiture
Vibrations of sulfur, oil is torturing us
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Nice and to the point. I liked the delivery on this joint. Strong use of the words, I really liked the shorter bar structure in comparison to your other drops.
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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote Slip Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 12 April 2018 at 1:35am
Yo dizz nice drop short to the point really packs a punch
See no evil speak no evil silent echo alter ego
inner demon violent beast so
warn the mother fucking people
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Your one is Shoter than Mine
No doubt you are Smarter in Rhyme
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First, starting with the title, this magnifies an issue in a very short straight to the point approach. Really good use of the words, and the opener was strong, you said a mouthful in five words. Flow and rhyming were on point,
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