Open Mic: [WD#5] Irrationalism

This was dope. Slick flow, and all the words fit in and worked well. Had me dying at the Jumanji bar. Respite bar rolls of the tongue with the scheme. 

This was nice, the flow and punchy ness was there throughout. Like law I liked the jumanji line. I thought this worked well as a brag verse and could almost pass off as a normal piece outside of the challenge. This was a solid entry bro.

You know there's a problem when Que comes in...was a weird one because I expect to get pure aggressive and energy coming from your verse & this had your usual signature style but felt a bit more subtle/understated, was cool...you always have real control over your rhyme scheme, like you drop an internal rhyme in there that sits perfectly within the rhythm of the line...you can almost look over it. Your phrasing is always super dope too...this challenge is almost made for you in that regard because your command of vocab is up there with the best I've ever seen. Like one of the above said, you could read this like it was one of your regular drops and you wouldn't tell the difference. I thought it was a really dope drop, seems like a high standard of competition this time around!!

nice piece here.   didn't have the sense that anything was forced to fit and it read really well. had this absurd and violent lilt to it as it progressed with a scheme that somehow managed to maintain its precision. props.