Open Mic: [WD#5] The Pew Used For Truth
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    Posted: 24 July 2016 at 11:50pm
misanthropic, distant populous is my respite
nepotism connected, impish relentless
peasants that iconoclast, ossify my presence
pro taggin this antagonist, philosophize message
christen me transient, bizzy bone infringement
osmosis from 'no mad', this solve it so fast
conjugal with a pot of gold, still never broke back
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Form: WWWWLW 		Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote Rutter knows best Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 26 July 2016 at 4:24pm
This wS abut more obscure than the other entries, interesting rhyme schemes and very compact content. I felt the meaning of the words could of been better overall but you came with an interesting technique. Definitely brought something different to table here.
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Form: WWWWLW 		Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote Cuba Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 27 July 2016 at 9:03pm
lol @ broke back...you're always super compact when you do these type of things (WD to pyramid schemes)...the philosophise message bit just sounds dope in my head. I see what Ruts is saying, it does feel like a purely technical exercise for you...almost like you bang it out quick time. Know you're more creative than that so it'd be interesting to see what different directions you could take it in next time. You don't need to be as brutally compact, just my view though.
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Form: WWWWLW 		Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote -Que- Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 28 July 2016 at 5:32pm
Neek you crazy muhfukkah lol. In my head I had an old Tribe called Quest beat playin...ha the shit melded perfect. Dug the humor and freestyle ability.

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interestingly, like Que i had a tune going. .but it was the instrumental for queens gets the money. ..and i kept repeating your lines over Jay Elec's hectic progression..and it at least seemed to bring insight.   hard to tell, tho. .this drop was reminiscent of some ginsberg pieces...

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Wasnt as concise with meaning than the ones i have read through. What stood out is you used less than the prescribed 10 lines. Woah, Its tough to do so especially with the vocabulary that you had to use. This was definitely a flew joint and very very tightly squeezed. Nice work here

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Form: WLWLLL 		Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote spume corrupt Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 29 July 2016 at 10:09pm
Damn you Neekski
I thought I was taking the piss knocking mine up in twenty mins!!!
You done put the 60 second shovel over eveybodys bonce
Crazy maybe even deep.....I dun know, me no scuba
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spume, I got you bro. the first two minutes of this interview really helps decode this verse.





I am glad that you picked up on the vibe tho. I appreciate that.
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Oh dear lmfao
I already got this shit on some daily loop shit
Should'a seen this coming
Double damn you playskools

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