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    Posted: 03 November 2003 at 12:19am

My life’s like one big, giant clock,

If it’s not that and this it’s ticks and tocks,

I’m suffering from some sort of mental block,

Cos I forgot you get power from books not glocks,

I don’t give a fuck what’s hot or what’s not,

I’m just shocked at the abysmal state of pop,

Shit, I hate the lot, them fakes should stop,

I’ll make their faces look distraught,

I’ll replace shit music with the kind that rocks,

This kiddie shit to me is like join-the-dots,

I’ll put them on the spot, they’ll get medical clots,

Cos what they’ve got are not lyrical thoughts,

I’m not a criminal caught and I don’t fight gangs,

And I won’t use guns cos I don’t like bangs,

But like I told you once before I’m not a white man,

I’m a one man army with a fight plan,

I’m an Eminem fan but my name’s not Stan,

And my name’s not Dan though you can call me The Man,

I got more rhymes than all of Wu-Tang Clan,

So I’ll tell y’all now how it all began,

Like Snot, I was born and raised in a mosh pit,

Life sucked, but I couldn't change or let go of it,

Why the fuck did people tell me to get over it?

I didn’t get it, until I beat up a bunch of older kids,

I was a KoRn-kid, I did whatever the fucking law forbid,

I battled motherfuckers before I learnt how to spit,

Gained respect cos I constantly refused to ride dick,

But people pissed me off so they wonder, am I sick?

It's like a card-trick, you won't get it until you know how it's done,

And when you know how it's done, you find it's no longer fun,

And when the weather gets better and there is plenty of sun,

You'll find me under a shade tree waiting for rainfall to come,

And the thunder, it merges with the sound of the drums,

I'm unable to crumble cos I'm already numb,

Each person that hurt me and made me what I've become,

I'll add them to my list but they're not as great as the sum...

 

Adios...

 

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pretty good. flowed well and was fairly interesting to read. tho i would have prefered more of a topic/story
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I was very stoned so I think it jumps suddenly in places...

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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote Louie Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 04 November 2003 at 1:24am

its quiet decent flow does go west but yo typin when u blitzed aint the thang to do..

i liked it thou

 

all my life ave been tryin to defy whats wrong and whats right, i jus hope now producing, can sequence my life.....
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No way, man... if I can concentrate long enough then I prefer typing stoned!

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Typing stoned is the way to go fella,
for getting a flow as smooth as barbarella.
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Moreover have you tried typing sober?
Click "Send" and you'll know it's game over!

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