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    Posted: 20 July 2017 at 7:19pm


I brought the truth this time though...

C...U, B, A
Who's this fool tryna come my way
C...U, B, A
I got my mojo back, Trizzy, dig his grave
C...U, B, A
Who's this fool tryna come my way
C...U, B, A
I got my mojo back, Trizzy, dig his grave



Can't y'all see that he's fake...the rap version of eat these cakes...waffle irons and greasy shakes
Can't break a crumb off the little piece that he bakes
And I don't mean diet pills when he's on the take
I put dollops on mine (ask his concubines)
Except he don't have any coz he's collosal size
So is it...Exoduzt or Exo ducks again
A fourth cheeseburger or a line of coke with friends
All this "real talk", what's this a bunch of menopausal men?!
Let him roll out some weak shit let em applaud it then
I'll put this fat fuck in a body bag if there's room for him
The coroner like "cause of death? That was Cuba's pen"
How the fuck you going ghost and turning up again
The fucks all this midnight oil?! You been burning up again?
Spending weeks in your room like "oooo he's gonna get it, then
I'll recover all the respect I lost from my truly lovely friends"
You look like a whale fucked a poltergeist with Downs
And the kid got a train ran on it by half the fucking town
Is that despair in your eyes or the fog from crystal meth
Body him so bad he gets another shot at faking his own death



C...U, B, A
Who's this fool tryna come my way
C...U, B, A
I got my mojo back, Trizzy, dig his grave
C...U, B, A
Who's this fool tryna come my way
C...U, B, A
I got my mojo back, Trizzy, dig his grave



When the coke is cut then Ex'll show
But not when it comes to them tag belts though
And you call this karma catching up to Exo, whoah
Im back before he had a chance to diss me
Mother fuckers like Exo ducks? Bro that's history
Who you know that's as viscous as me?!?
Bet you wish we'd kept it to 10 lines split with a written to Beans
Pleeeeeeeaase you're a slippery fuck...
Used to call him Chuck now he's all The Chunk
You're an actor...playing another victim for me
Dreaming of the days you were the litmus for C
Damn when'd they call you up?
And give you that diagnosis you're a delusional cunt
I'm a legend, you're like Ill ScriptureZ to Neek
A fucking story teller against this dragon with speech
So what's your problem, E? You can't talk to C
Or you just paranoid from a fucking garden of weed?
Figures.
This is like The Departed in speech
I won't rest till this fucking chumps deceased
Fiiiggguuuurrrreee
You want war? This ain't a fucking war to me
I'll make it like The Holocaust repeats
Fiiiggguuurrrrreeee
I just dropped a fucking bomb on him
And all we get is salt from him...

Figures



C...U, B, A
Who's this fool tryna come my way
C...U, B, A
I got my mojo back, Trizzy, dig his grave
C...U, B, A
Who's this fool tryna come my way
C...U, B, A
I got my mojo back, Trizzy, dig his grave

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LA be like, "say hi to Hades for me"

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Chester Bennington just committed suicide. Im not happy but this was something that gave me a smile.

Can't y'all see that he's fake...the rap version of eat these cakes...waffle irons and greasy shakes
Can't break a crumb off the little piece that he bakes
And I don't mean diet pills when he's on the take
I put dollops on mine (ask his concubines)
Except he don't have any coz he's collosal size



You look like a whale fucked a poltergeist with Downs
And the kid got a train ran on it by half the fucking town



'm a legend, you're like Ill ScriptureZ to Neek
A fucking story teller against this dragon with speech





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Go my Minions!


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thank god you put exo diss in the title or id have no clue who this was about.
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Exo we still believe in you, tho
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Holy shit, this was ill. If Neeks raps this it would sound like an ill second coming of Jigga man himself.
I love it when someone writes a verse to an established verse's cadence and flow, and when it still has such killer lines, it's much more enjoyable.
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Originally posted by Cuba Cuba wrote:


I brought the truth this time though...


The truth is cool, but people are huge fans of flutes though (Even though Blueprint 2 didn't technically have any).
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This was strong...really well put together...and altho LA seems to be peak GIF now, they worked well
. . . Now who said they fuckin' with me?
They just said that FUCKIN' with me
They didn't mean it
Nah . . .
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