Text Battle Archive: Witt22 Vs NoMEDiC [txt]

6 bars
48 hours
Rest is house
No flips

If there aint no medic, then this shit really pains me.
Leave you beat insanely and with more wholes than a chain link.
I didnt want to have to do this. I'll give you some MeDz, man.
Kill the circulation to your fat brain like a tiny headband.
I really couldn't wait til I fucking fought with you.
And now I just cant wait til the I.R.S. audits you.
You need to see a medic. You've been exposed to ill bars.
Your gonna need. tablets, capsules, ampules, and lots of pill bars.
We need an ambulance! NoMEDiC battled Witt22!
He's gonna die because he still has to battle Boss too.

    I bet your mother gets smothered giving
                 brain gackin sperm
    That's where he got '22' From Witt is
                    named after her
    Your last battle had no punches cause
                  he cant land one
    The Only caliber that comes Wit 22's
                 must be a Hand gun
    He'll get smacked so fuckin bad he'll start
                    bleeding within
    I'll put an L to 22's Like stashing
                    Weed in my rims
    I'll easily win We all Believe this Diva
                 has the worst rhymes
    He needed the tutorials like playing FIFA
                     for the first time
    You're what we pick on And NoMEDiCs way
                  harder to mess with
            If Wit play's written well blame
                    Margaret Edson
        Judgin from your verse He just
            displayed he's An infant
    So i Wonder why Witt's Gassed like
                  safety Equipment

Expo'
Bar 1>22's a prostitute
Bar 5> margaret edson wrote a play entitled wit
Bar 6> witt gas is a saftey equipment co.

Witt: you had a lot of statements but not really a single personal. The rhyme scheme didn't really wow me either. Over all it just didn't get much of a reaction from me

Medic: your punches were clearer, you had more personals, and your bars flowed better. I got a good chuckle off bars 3 and 6

Mvgt; nomedic

Love the references Nomedic, im also new here so, this gives me a nice idea of how to structure bars.
Witt had a nice direction to go in but just didn't quite put it together right.

Wtf^^^^^

This is a KO, nomedic spilled gore around this field. That weed stash line made me chuckle... Had more wordplay and better structure plus more punches that landed

Witt u gotta be more clever with your plays bruh
None hit for me there

Mvgt Nomedic