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$n00z
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Posted: 30 May 2011 at 7:14am |
Ya boy been on hiatus, but of course I still got flow
I'm back to lay my game down flat. Your's got potholes
I bust top dollar rhymes aka prada bra
Real niggaz up front, bitches in back like they on yamahas
You'll see my flow's immortal upon dissection of my lines, plus
You must be 'sick in the head' thinkin labels dont wanna 'sinus'
The consequence for tryin to 'cross' me like we're 'perpendicular'
Is manslaughter, 1st degree, far past vehicular
So rappers need to quit 'trippin', this aint an 'adventure' bruh
An my eccentricity will be the reason fans stay tuned into us
Edited by $n00z - 30 May 2011 at 9:28am |
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$n00z
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sorry for the edit but for i had repeated my opening line at the top for some reason..... now its ready
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U already know...
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-Que-
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Good shit Snooz!
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-Que-
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9 - loved the line :
"You'll see my flow's immortal upon dissection of my lines, plus
You must be 'sick in the head' thinkin labels dont wanna 'sinus'" ^^Word play was nice! |
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rapdisup
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nic potholes werent as good as Mancs but ya yamaha line was prob the best line from that as of yet also liked the 'sinus' nice play there simple an effective ima play ya an 8/10 also..
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The Dr said it can't be beaten,I replied it 'can-sir'!
It aint over till I Rapdisup |
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spume corrupt
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8.5/10 on this one
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J504
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Yeah, 8.5 sounds right on for this- For me, the Yamaha line was my favorite, loved that shit! Dope shit.
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Manc
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haha! Prada/Top Dollar - Bra/Bust lol...... loved the wordplay ere.
9/10 |
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Cuba
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8.5/10...contender for line of the week as well
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U.N.L.M.
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you used yamaha in probably the best way haha, 9/10
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Lucky D
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8/10
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