Open Mic: WORD DROP #7

Unto Reality Know the Gravity keep a Bold Mentality in this world consumed by Total Depravity,
Devise a Paranormal Strategy and Maybe you Won't Regret appearing in the middle of wars Shaking like Tourniquet,
Due to getting constantly getting ripped when the Hit Connect through Invicible bars Misshaping your Sillouette,
The Doomed Multitude Imprisoned in Obscurish Solitude with auras radiating the Truest Pulchritude,
drinking Glasses of Bourbon and Sangria with Bosses of Siria while giving children Classes of Onomatopoeia,
Former Dreamer del otro Dia Dosing with a Pharmacopoeia , A gladiator inside Graduating in time after having to follow Precise Orders from the Lodge,
Now the Nice Brother is a Sarge found deemed worthy and wise getting Closer to the Walls that Border the Mirage,
To be solemnly called the Unholy Rap Bard who escaped from a Sunken Dark Ward is easier to spot than a Storming Mad Guard waving a Golden Placard,
The Sickened soul needs to Learn how to Medicate adrift in Clouds of Burried Faith Now Meditate to hear the tick before the Bombs Detonate
And Encryption the Scene, Personality needed for the Mission was Sanguine, No one had seen priceless rembrandts in Condition so Pristine...
You had to bow down upon enetering the temple and greet the Alien Medics Who gazed at magical powers that emanate from the Ancient Relics...
The Fiercest Known Scraping Domes with jade swords made from Scarce Whale Bone, So shine bright and Sail Home or be tossed in pile with Decayed and Failed Clone...

Straight off the bat your imagery was good,and the tempo/vibe was kind of sombre
also,a little more than 10 lines but hey,I still enjoyed the dark tones here,I don't think
it will qualify for the word drop challenge due to that fact, but this was still a nice
expressive piece on the whole,I liked the vocab/contents that you deployed aswell,I thought you made good with the key words though (if only this was 10 lines),I feel
you would of been in the top half of the submissions for this challenge,saying that,
pls feel free to try again,as this challenge doesn't hinge on being allowed only one
shot per member,just so you know,I'm going to hash out a few lines that I found that
stood out to me in a moment,but i just want to type good effort still,and I look forward
to reading more of your writtens.


'Devise a Paranormal Strategy
and Maybe you Won't Regret
appearing in the middle of wars Shaking like Tourniquet,
Due to getting constantly getting ripped when the Hit
Connect through Invicible bars Misshaping your Sillouette,"


'To be solemnly called the Unholy Rap Bard
who escaped from a Sunken Dark Ward is easier to spot than a Storming Mad Guard
waving a Golden Placard,"

To be fair there is more I could hash out,but today I feel lazy,(and this is a rare thing I'll
state),nice work,a enjoyable read where the pleasure was mine..peace.