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rhetorical
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Posted: 30 October 2018 at 5:29pm |
"picture this: frame of mind Right out the
gate, Neek came into this verse with the perfect opener. In one line, he
embodied the entire image. He wrote from the perspective of a photographer that
has had his fair share of losses, and a vast collection of memories. The photos
serve as still shots of those memories, captured in time and through his
artistic view. This was an extremely detailed and polished entry. I feel like
Neek really set the tone for this week’s challenge when this verse dropped. "Exposing his battle cry. A gallery of portraits with felonious faces Developing stages from the skeleton basis. Descriptions identify Melanin, ages, and relative basics for elements to trace with. Troubled with coping attempts from a shot in the dark."
"i realize.. we never grow. Only when necessary...and even that's subjective, no?
"I'm leaving this Earth, but keeping a mark Daemon had a
really good take on this topic. He wrote from the perspective of a man who is
leaving his life on film so-to-speak as a remembrance of him when he passes.
The argument being he has wasted his life with his photography, and his counter
argument that documenting his life is his accomplishment. The flow was a bit
formulaic in areas, but the concept was strong and well executed. "Captions of time slow to erode like Uranium Dntplywelwitothers "I have no intention to to end it, I indulge in this thievery.... Look at the images you love, before I smuggle the scenery... Draining your cranium, turn your kin to outsiders... I am a thief, I confess. You can call me Alzheimer's"
Edited by rhetorical - 30 October 2018 at 10:44pm |
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rhetorical
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I really tried to condense the video down and make it brief this go around. . hope everyone enjoys the mag. Great job to all the writers and voters. Thanks
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iLL ScriptureZ
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This was fire.. Dnt had the best verse hands down
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Neek
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iLL speaks the gospel.
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#Bananas
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Lord Puente
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Congrats to Don’t ply wood. Rhet, hats off to you for keeping this going. You not only saved sammy event but made it better with better mags. Like way better. Different level better.
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Sammy
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as always, dope mag, Rhet. The effort is appreciated, for real. And congrats on DNP! well deserved win, sir.
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Dntplywelwitothers
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Appreciate it fellas, good luck to all participants for 11.
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"My name has the most shout outs in the history of rap...."
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