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Sammy
Site Moderator Beacon of Light Joined: 24 October 2015 Status: Offline Points: 2222 Crew: Elision Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 1-1-1 Form: LNW |
Topic: WWC Week 13 Posted: 15 November 2018 at 11:19pm |
Due date: Due to Holiday Week, due date will be Saturday 11/24 @ 11:59 (Eastern) Post your verse in this thread! Line limit: 12-16 lines. …:::Voting:::.. Once this week has ended, I would like for everyone to PM me with their top 3 for the week. You do not have to be a participant to vote. No voting for yourself. And just so there is no confusion, the line limit rules are in full effect. I will reveal who everyone voted for in the magazine. Here is your topic, best of luck |
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iLL ScriptureZ
Standard Member Joined: 13 May 2014 Location: NJ Status: Offline Points: 2477 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 11-5-1 Form: LWWLWW |
Posted: 16 November 2018 at 2:48pm |
Lady in Red …Her cherry lips twinned her gown as a garnish Blushing cheeks redden with the sound of her smartness She’s made the rounds to paint the town in her scarlet Heart flickers like humming wings, eyes astounding & starlit Gushing from her Si Passione as it remedied the java jolt Men paying rubies handsomely for potentially the common goal To plant their precious seed, the parody of Janis Joplin’s soul Each suitor alike, losing their life carelessly to havoc’s soften’d hope Melting is a jackpot, unwittingly imprisoned to tango & cash Dwelling in the last shot – drowsy – decisions for angels to have In this parlor, fitting a halo as the threshold strangles & gags Tremors dance elegantly, fool’s gold wrangles him mad He sinks so slain, she slinks sweetly through the bistro exit Unresponsive & silent another sufferer’s ego death wish Addicted to her crimson kiss, a vividness I’ve seen so endless Another victim stricken by the kilo temptress
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Crimson Juice
Site Moderator Joined: 20 December 2015 Location: U.K. Status: Offline Points: 3258 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 6-11-0 Form: LLWLW |
Posted: 16 November 2018 at 7:20pm |
Jessica Rabbit has a bad habit,
late at nights she runs a racket, When Roger puts on his jacket, she's goes with men & cohabits, A frame from a cartoon caught the scene, Her shame looms as she chases the green, Popeye wants to serve her more than a drink, But he's shy 'n' reserve uncool & out of sync, Bruce Wayne's by her side ready to pay 'n' play, Vain & lacking pride wantin' to 'cram her airway', With his private 'dick' intuition he senses victory, Thinking he's the next in line client & beneficiary, But wait across the way sits the man Clark Kent, Lookin' for a date with the clit & filled with intent, The atmosphere is tense in the air there's strife, Now knowin' who framed & fucked up Roger's life, |
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"You need to learn how to make an exit,
before you can dare make an entrance". |
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Sammy
Site Moderator Beacon of Light Joined: 24 October 2015 Status: Offline Points: 2222 Crew: Elision Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 1-1-1 Form: LNW |
Posted: 20 November 2018 at 4:03pm |
come on ya pansies! one of you write from the perspective of the coffee...now!
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rhetorical
Site Moderator Joined: 14 February 2014 Location: Florida Status: Offline Points: 807 Crew: Elision Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 2-1-0 Form: WWL |
Posted: 20 November 2018 at 5:26pm |
... the corner of Laura and Ninth I remember that
night. Sunk to the lowest point in my life
Edited by rhetorical - 21 November 2018 at 7:27pm |
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Neek
Site Moderator Super Mario Slaughterer Joined: 05 October 2004 Status: Offline Points: 3862 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-1-0 Form: LWWW |
Posted: 21 November 2018 at 9:36pm |
classic tale, traditional saga - cops and robbers money get laundered in an upstairs apartment shades raised is phone line open, vacant appointment shades drawn is barstool on corner awaits your enjoyment …..they never changed how to arrange a courtship. ive surveyed this ritual for months…. my sensible side says - they arent idiots, you dunce maybe there's a bigger picture, it all hits me at once brains over braun, and a genuine feminine touch man in the window is a ploy - hes a visual crutch the diner is a point, in which instructions are touched and milkshakes dissipate the letters to dust… doggybags is how they plan carrying out the funds or im just going fucking crazy as fuck.. maybe my instincs are just…or im sensing a flub I just cant be the putts fudging a precincts big bust |
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#Bananas
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Nigma
Site Moderator Joined: 25 March 2013 Location: Canada Status: Offline Points: 4077 Crew: Elision |
Posted: 25 November 2018 at 3:07am |
Some say it seems like stalking, that’s nonsense, I call it people watching Got my easel cocked with some glossy colours in heaps across it Compress the scene in my memory, each deadly detail, it feeds the rawness I weep while mixing the deep acrylics, and melancholy’s what leads the project In paint, there’s pigments, solvents, there’s binders and additives They’re combined on the canvas and it’s a sight full of sacrilege I’ll draw a guy on the left who might quietly ask for gin When hat’s are tipped downwards it disguises the man within But he is just a prop, he’ll witness apocalypse, sipping espresso Across the bar, a sinful fellow about to pay penance on biblical levels You see, his mistress is my reason for resisting the devil But... I’ve painted up this plan that is affixed within my mental They’ll.. fear me as a prophet, it went just as I stencilled I can nearly see the future, bleeding, stiff as he lets go I can almost hear the future, full eclipse in my temple I feel the steel click, and lock a clip that’ll echo |
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Sammy
Site Moderator Beacon of Light Joined: 24 October 2015 Status: Offline Points: 2222 Crew: Elision Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 1-1-1 Form: LNW |
Posted: 25 November 2018 at 4:18pm |
thanks for submitting everyone. please pm me ur top 3.
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