Topic ClosedOpen Mic: WWC Week 13

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    Posted: 15 November 2018 at 11:19pm
Due date: Due to Holiday Week, due date will be Saturday 11/24 @ 11:59 (Eastern)
Post your verse in this thread!
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…:::Voting:::..
Once this week has ended,
 
I would like for everyone to PM me with their top 3 for the week.
 
You do not have to be a participant to vote. No voting for yourself.
 
And just so there is no confusion, the line limit rules are in full effect.
 
I will reveal who everyone voted for in the magazine.
 
Here is your topic, best of luck





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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 16 November 2018 at 2:48pm
Lady in Red

…Her cherry lips twinned her gown as a garnish
Blushing cheeks redden with the sound of her smartness
She’s made the rounds to paint the town in her scarlet
Heart flickers like humming wings, eyes astounding & starlit
Gushing from her Si Passione as it remedied the java jolt
Men paying rubies handsomely for potentially the common goal
To plant their precious seed, the parody of Janis Joplin’s soul
Each suitor alike, losing their life carelessly to havoc’s soften’d hope
Melting is a jackpot, unwittingly imprisoned to tango & cash
Dwelling in the last shot – drowsy – decisions for angels to have
In this parlor, fitting a halo as the threshold strangles & gags
Tremors dance elegantly, fool’s gold wrangles him mad
He sinks so slain, she slinks sweetly through the bistro exit
Unresponsive & silent another sufferer’s ego death wish
Addicted to her crimson kiss, a vividness I’ve seen so endless
Another victim stricken by the kilo temptress 
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 16 November 2018 at 7:20pm
Jessica Rabbit has a bad habit,
late at nights she runs a racket,
When Roger puts on his jacket,
she's goes with men & cohabits,


A frame from a cartoon caught the scene,
Her shame looms as she chases the green,
Popeye wants to serve her more than a drink,
But he's shy 'n' reserve uncool & out of sync,

Bruce Wayne's by her side ready to pay 'n' play,
Vain & lacking pride wantin' to 'cram her airway',
With his private 'dick' intuition he senses victory,
Thinking he's the next in line client & beneficiary,

But wait across the way sits the man Clark Kent,
Lookin' for a date with the clit & filled with intent,
The atmosphere is tense in the air there's strife,
Now knowin' who framed & fucked up Roger's life,
"You need to learn how to make an exit,
before you can dare make an entrance".
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 20 November 2018 at 4:03pm
come on ya pansies! one of you write from the perspective of the coffee...now!


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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 20 November 2018 at 5:26pm

... the corner of Laura and Ninth

I remember that night. Sunk to the lowest point in my life
Standing outside. Loaded 9 in my waist. Mask hanging at my side
Trying to hide the nervousness, or push the jitters aside
Finger rest’n on the trigger. Almost feel'n alive
State of mind is frantic, stay focused on your sites
Counted to 10 and back at least a half a dozen times
Each GO! . . .
Resets //// as I play out the event inside my mind
Envisioning the score in forward motion then <<<< rewind


Visions of mother speaking … ‘life is owning your decisions’
While my empty stomach rumbles counter argues her position
Mixed emotion, especially with ya consciousness is kick'n in
Angels perched on my shoulders debating if it’s worth the risk again?
 
Don’t do it!
Think about your family before you open up that door
Hoe, do it!
Rush that fucking clerk and make those bitches eat the floor
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..
... 
Now 40 years later and I relive it every day
From behind these prison walls, watching my existence fade away

 



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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 21 November 2018 at 9:36pm

classic tale, traditional saga - cops and robbers
money get laundered in an upstairs apartment
shades raised is phone line open, vacant appointment
shades drawn is barstool on corner awaits your enjoyment

…..they never changed how to arrange a courtship.

ive surveyed this ritual for months….
my sensible side says - they arent idiots, you dunce
maybe there's a bigger picture, it all hits me at once
brains over braun, and a genuine feminine touch

man in the window is a ploy - hes a visual crutch
the diner is a point, in which instructions are touched
and milkshakes dissipate the letters to dust…
doggybags is how they plan carrying out the funds

or im just going fucking crazy as fuck..

maybe my instincs are just…or im sensing a flub
I just cant be the putts fudging a precincts big bust



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Some say it seems like stalking, that’s nonsense, I call it people watching

Got my easel cocked with some glossy colours in heaps across it

Compress the scene in my memory, each deadly detail, it feeds the rawness

I weep while mixing the deep acrylics, and melancholy’s what leads the project

In paint, there’s pigments, solvents, there’s binders and additives

They’re combined on the canvas and it’s a sight full of sacrilege

I’ll draw a guy on the left who might quietly ask for gin

When hat’s are tipped downwards it disguises the man within

But he is just a prop, he’ll witness apocalypse, sipping espresso

Across the bar, a sinful fellow about to pay penance on biblical levels

You see, his mistress is my reason for resisting the devil

But... I’ve painted up this plan that is affixed within my  mental

They’ll.. fear me as a prophet, it went just as I stencilled

I can nearly see the future, bleeding, stiff as he lets go

I can almost hear the future, full eclipse in my temple

I feel the steel click, and lock a clip that’ll echo


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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 25 November 2018 at 4:18pm
thanks for submitting everyone. please pm me ur top 3. 


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