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    Posted: 03 September 2018 at 5:49am

(stealing Rhet's intro haha)

Due date: Saturday 11:59 (Eastern)
Post your verse in this thread!
Line limit: 10-16 lines.

 
…:::Voting:::..
Once this week has ended,
 
I would like for everyone to PM me with their top 3 for the week.
You do not have to be a participant to vote
No voting for yourself
And just so there is no confusion, the line limit rules are in full effect.

 
I will reveal who everyone voted for in the magazine.
 
Here is your topic.




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I'm not a lady of leisure but i do get the bends from pressure,
Quiet is pleasure,as i view the city lights like a shining treasure,
I absorb them like solar panels sitting here by a water channel
Illuminating my scandal attacking at my receptors like a vandal,
Let me reveal how I feel,after closing a very lucrative arms deal,
To a 3rd world country intent to kill,& the populist wait for meals,
I work for BAE Systems where I am a pawn and another victim,
Seen as a apt negotiating vixen I reflect & shed light like a prism,
On contracts where the acts causes casualties via their impact,
& every dictator is seen as a contact they say opposites attract,
I remain tall like I was on stilts,but I'm plagued by my grief n guilt,
Contemplating suicide by drowning minus the quilt laying on silt,
This is my 4th visit to this location,as death becomes my fixation,
Perhaps I'm due an evaluation as each visit stretches my duration,
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Just a kindly reminder during these tense moments here at LA...Bump.
"You need to learn how to make an exit,
before you can dare make an entrance".
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Here I Am
 
Contemplating plans, life was a delusional start
Escaping was beautiful, confusion was the usual art
Substituted its parts; love, health, enriching my life
Each step ripped apart as the stitching was preyed
While the stench lye’s, lingers like age over my youth
Stenciled rage, governed by me to martyr your truth
Every brick placed, I laid down mortar and glue
Drew borders with barricades to shorten our view
Renewed my vox populi, lost, the numbness inside
Stuck in webs spun over this crumbled city of mine
Prisms dying; your lights dim cognitive rhythm
Eyes wide shut. your streets augmented my vision
Used to love Chicago when autumn has risen
Now a prostitute, at rock bottom locked in its prison
Sending a wish downstream in a bottle, drifting
Hoping someone notices this note I have written
 
Or at least knows . . I am still here

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Linda wasn't typical in the cosplay
sure, she thought the costumes are great; but blasé
got an idea to Kill Patrick, no Kwame
used dialogue on tape to detail the heart break

video starts: "when we first met, on *this* bridge
never guessed, it would end before we'd spend a Christmas
..suppose thats just how *it is*.." next clip is intense

Mr Sanders, clothes tattered, looking worse for wear
"I am what happens when Wednesday Addams perserveres"
twitch crowd funding, coins keep uppin', massive cheers
"Fuck Sexism!" sticks the knife in em - "cant get JACK from Jill"

"im switching my channel to the I R L - lets see if they can catch me still…"

"unlike all these other bitches.. IM ACTUALLY REAL"

headlines show the last thing streamed, headline: have you seen this girl?
#Bananas
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Listen carefully The picture speaks a fitting scene,
The bridge that sits between ass cheeks n titty street,
Where fowl broards pay compliments through gritted beaks
It's Trickin week, chicken heads handing out that chicken meat
praising watered down shots, i'm tellin you, ya spirits weak
You'll tell me that i'm wrong, I smell a theme ya shittin me
Cos Ya'll a disgrace Sloppy from the floor to your face
I see you flowers all around here like a florist display
Awkward n fake, the ring girls to the sport that i play
Clawing away, Tell any man he raw for the same talk as the pay
If you weren't all ladies of night..I'd say please Call it a day, 
..In dedication sincerely yours..to the whores of L.A
#bananas
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To The Bridge

I first came to you with, my neighbours two kids ... we were great at Pooh-sticks!
And late on tuesd'ys, we played our music ... you had great acoustics!
A wayward school kid, a waif, reclusive ... left my home when it became abusive.
That ain't conducive to creative juices, so at 8 and two-fifths ... I came to you Bridge.

Years later, not a 'late to bloom' chick, became a woman with the frame to prove it.
Played the game, not ashamed to do it, but I traded beauty, just to make a few quid.
Won't make excuses, it's the way I choose it, when you look this good you gotta shake-or-lose-it!
Now the life before my eyes is my favourite movie ... just a pornographic montage, with 80's music.


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Did you know the deceased?
Yeah, she was way deluded, her father used to beat her till it made her stupid.
She still thought she was that dainty tulip, in the fishnets, stilettos and the lacy tunic.
Though now she's 82ish we still paid to do shit, it'd take some doing, but we laboured through it!
So let it say in her eulogy: her main contribution be the sale of her booty to the vagrant community.
And let's raise our hooches ... and take a few sips ... she died of gonorrhea ... and a case of hubris!


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*Inhale* ..... *Exhale*
She thought she had it handled, hid her madness in the paint
Wore her smile like a mask, but that's a candle at a grave
Of the girl she'd been before all the damage and decay
Before a pattern of mistakes fed that phantom in her brain
That'd trap her in a canvas where the palette is just grey
Where she chased a sense of passion round the gallows in a maze
Where she lost her sense of self, and found sadness and disgrace
Where she drowned her innocence just like a mattress in the rain
Where she learned to let love die, and to massacre with hate
An yet they'd put her on a pedestal, unraveling in place


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My Fair-Lady the Sultan of Beauty her Favorite Color Aqua,
Seen Herself in the Mirror, Reflection Looking Back from the Agua,
Bittersweet Tears Dripped in this Slowly Dying Saga,
She Cried When Listening to Blue Eyes by Sinatra, 
She Strolled Solo Dancing to the Music of the Phantom of the Opera,
When the Lights Fade, She Segued Under the Street Bridge,
She Reveled at the Prospects of Making it Big, 
Sung at the Local Street Fair and at the Town's Square, 
Shared intimate Feelings with the Mayor, 
Paused for Photographs, Kodak Shots, These Photo Op's are Rare,
True Love is in the Air, Her Husband was Working Late Unaware,
The Smell of Smoke Danced in her Hair,
X-Rated Scenes of this Casual Love Affair Replay Often in Her Dreams
Had a Brief Relationship Scare but Everything isn't always what it Seems.


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AAAIIITTTTEEEEE s'what dafuck im talkin'bout! One more day, yall!


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don't forget to pm me ur top 3 bestest :)


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Did this ever get a conclusion? xD
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yes. mag and announcement drops tomorrow, sir.


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CHAIN verse has been removed at his request. Apologies for any inconvenience.
#Bananas

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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote rhetorical Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 11 September 2018 at 6:53pm
Originally posted by Endeavor Endeavor wrote:

CHAIN verse has been removed at his request. Apologies for any inconvenience.

o.k. . . well im sure that fucks up votes 

want me to resubmit with the current verses sammy? 
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Originally posted by Endeavor Endeavor wrote:

CHAIN verse has been removed at his request. Apologies for any inconvenience.


Lmao, again? Stop selling your shit chain.
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Originally posted by Rutter knows best Rutter knows best wrote:

Originally posted by Endeavor Endeavor wrote:

CHAIN verse has been removed at his request. Apologies for any inconvenience.


Lmao, again? Stop selling your shit chain.


G shit
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my bad guys been mad busy today but yea if any of you had him in your top 3, would you mind adjusting it and resend it to me? thanks, familia!


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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote Nigma Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 12 September 2018 at 12:46am
I think the site should adopt the "a card laid is a card played" rule. I'm all for people making moves but to submit something for a contest and then retroactively removing it during the voting process is kinda a dick move and unnecessary headache for the bro running the thing
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Originally posted by Nigma Nigma wrote:

I think the site should adopt the "a card laid is a card played" rule. I'm all for people making moves but to submit something for a contest and then retroactively removing it during the voting process is kinda a dick move and unnecessary headache for the bro running the thing

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