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King Jehu
Veteran Joined: 23 January 2004 Status: Offline Points: 6088 Crew: Renegades Text Rank: #4 Stats: 54-18-1 Form: WLWWWL |
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Posted: 02 November 2004 at 8:46pm |
Let's Begin... I'm an elite spitter, I make you and your peeps bitter and I'm not just against ex smokers, but I do beat quitters Girls tell me I'm a sweet kidder with a sense of humor i dispel haters as well as offensive rumors And change lives like I treated patients I'm trying to drop bombs verbally on you defeated nations My rhymes speed creation But your flow stinks, it makes me raise my nose and squint like conceited asians I work your body like Pilates and karate, yo Chill in the party and be naughty but ignore the snotty hoes Most MC's are potty though.. so I don't deal with 'em and half of you here don't even understand real spittin Firgive me if my complexity shows your fucking slowness but most clubs in NY have more hoes(holes) than Dunkin' Donuts! So I'm always sorrounded by little cowards and shook elves so much insane intelligence, my ears are bookshelves Stick to battling little girls cause you'll lose when you battle dudes We're animals and we ain't gotta be mad at you to rattle crews and we're goin to a hood near you, on our way to smack you cause you suck more ass than heavy-duty anal vaccums! I'll convince you of my greatness with deft telepathy Still talked about when I'm gone, like dead celebrities I battle infants and grownups, maybe some kids Seen as good but slept on by more babies than cribs My main objecvive's to remain respected Your game's defective, fool, read book and gain perspective ... Thinking you're hard cause you're quick to smack a bitch, You gangsta? Kill with a deal but STILL can't rap for shit Clap you quick with no gats or clips Cause i'm like the plague the way I make them say "that's just sick" How sick? we'll I've been killing lately Cause I'm sicker than fucking a pregnant chick and getting head from the baby! It's Crazy... I spit enough bars for 3 cells, break down your weak cells and make hot instrumentals until every beat sells your favorite form of retail is weed sales but you sold your cold soul like prostituted she-males Industry making zombies like they're controlling the dead so I'll free your mind... with a hole in your head! cause a soul that is led by material filler is physically rich, but their spirit be sick, like serial killers don't mimic me bitch, I'm the one that's unique Yeah, I'll say your flow is tight (with my tongue in my cheek) if you're out with the freaks your outlook is bleak But ya dumb asses don't know what i talk about when I speak It's not that I'm unclear... ya just stupid and my name's the smartest thing you'll ever say, just loop it for 100 lines over a beat... I'm just that nice My mind's a gun and I ain't afraid to bust that twice no food chain, but I eat MCs with cyclical carnage Leave only bones, skins, intestines and minimal cartilage Cremate remains, leave no clues, I'm no criminal target Yo, I'm the king of black holes, subliminal darkness motherfuckers can't aproach my lyrical mastery you know by now who the most satirical bastard be Virtually indestructible, I cause physical massacres Miracles and prophesies in my biblical cast of words Let me take a break to let you catch up... breathe deeply Peeps meet me and say I must've caught an ILL disease easily Please beat me! Shiiiiit, I guess you'll die trying Why lie? I'm able to hit your balls farther than five irons (golf clubs) Ain't no subliminal mind-fuck, your rhyme sucks The number 1 spot's always been mine, don't climb up, your time's up King Jehu's the name, don't forget or be officially disgraced Would you remember if I carved my initials in your face? KJ... Style Switch... I mug you nerds, not matter who the toughest were, either way your luck's deserved and I guess you'd much prefer getting stabbed cause a slug is worse you're in the club for sure, burning and sucking herbs, spitting a sluggish verse This is a restaurant on father's day the way I have you motherfuckers served I'd tell you to kiss my ass, but you'd rather touch it first Fag, I'll make your blood disperse, and as you're laying there, i fuck the nurse Your head and guts will burst... your actions are garbage, they're only rubbish verbs I'll make your temple resemble a keyboard the way you're struck with words Back... That's all it takes to accomplish, I don't need days to acomplish My mission's to use nuclear fission as a way to admonish I burn niggas till there's nothing left, are you fucking deaf? I'll make your leader an example just to have you frontin' less I was born a renegade, to me the word means I kept my mother in labor 3 days just to be born in the 13th Rearranged time and space, I see the future is hotter Time traveled enough eras to have sonned you and your father Cause every single verse is a stroke of genius So every time you open your mouth it's to choke on penis You know you've seen us... Renegades owning the boards Check my spit on open mic whenever you're at home and you're bored I entertain crowds, my spits ablaze and keyed and end your game now, with quick amazing speed Fell from high, got much love and hate, potential redemption I seldom lie, but I'm fucked up like States's presidential elections Mood Change... I see that our hoods are so damn corroded, it's scary but i know it won't all change though I voted for kerry but leave the politics behind and see the things around you cause although we make asses of ourselves like clowns do the young people have power to change the world as well and tell others that a revolution only starts with themselves But while you we try to change the world, I'm multi-tasking asking for answers, basking in victories, never blast king Lemme Finish This Off I'll change the face of hip hop with no plastic surgery most of you steal dead rappers' style like it was casket burglary yo, I kill it in the open mic forum despite a lot of haters Now That hanGing's gone, for this forum, you can make me moderator... Peace and good night, Fuckers |
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Cuba
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Cause I'm sicker than fucking a pregnant chick and getting head from the baby! ^^^ CrAzY lInE Yeah, I'll say your flow is tight (with my tongue in my cheek) ^ Tha truth... I'll change the face of hip hop with no plastic surgery ^ witty shit most of you steal dead rappers' style like it was casket burglary ^ rof Dope shit, started off a bit slow but in the middle you had some sick multis...like i sed u started off slow but held my interest and built up well near the end, real nice...reminds me of the missing linx 100bar keystyle on WannaBattle... PEace |
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King Jehu
Veteran Joined: 23 January 2004 Status: Offline Points: 6088 Crew: Renegades Text Rank: #4 Stats: 54-18-1 Form: WLWWWL |
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Thanks Ice man, for reading all of it. I know it's kinda long.
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2smooth
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damn bro, that shit was raw. ice was right, started slow but from the style switch on was pure heat. very nice drop!
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20theTruth
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wow....yall hurd da audio "je----WHO da illest rhymer?" A: Jehu...
SYK WIT IT SPIT....nuff said. Man's on top of da world wit that one. Last bar wuz KILLER... Fuck Jehu for Mod ... Jehu for Prez... nice ..bigupz |
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Sick... Quotables...? All the lines Ice quotes were the best ones... this just flowed hard from start to finish... apt name... Brilliance. 1
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They just said that FUCKIN' with me They didn't mean it Nah . . . |
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BiggStankDogg
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Goddamn, son... It was a little slow in the beginning, and you had me a little worried, but it snowballed and got better and better. You're one of the chosen few here that continually come up with orioginal shit that's actually GOOD, and it shows through in this verse, man. Hot, hot...
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Demonic
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very nice man was a long read but well worth it i like d it alot showed some intellegence in there and some sick multis vocab was nice overall same as the rest original and nice
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King Jehu
Veteran Joined: 23 January 2004 Status: Offline Points: 6088 Crew: Renegades Text Rank: #4 Stats: 54-18-1 Form: WLWWWL |
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Thanks ppl
Aaaaaaaaaaaaand we uppin dis beeotch |
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TeQuiLaSunRiSe
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eh...you might not like me but...
you remind me of immortal technique when you spit...nothing else to say but "dope" |
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POP POPPITY WHAT, I Know Yall Aint Poppin At Us
Cuz One or Two Punches Will Leave You TALKIN LIKE SEAN CONNERY DOES |
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King Jehu
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Thank
you... I'm trying to contact immortal Tech , actually. I'm going to his
next show in NYC, cause he's going on tour soon. I have another piece
I'm almost done writing, and that's more Immortal Tech-type stuff,
except I'm not trying to be him, I heard him and found the Mc that I
can relate to most and became an instant fan.
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TeQuiLaSunRiSe
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yo jehu, beef squash?
im tryin squash beef like steppin on burgers |
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POP POPPITY WHAT, I Know Yall Aint Poppin At Us
Cuz One or Two Punches Will Leave You TALKIN LIKE SEAN CONNERY DOES |
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King Jehu
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There was never any beef... I posted that verse cause you no-showed...
as for steppin on burgers, WHY THE FUCK WOULD YOU DO THAT?
There are starving children in ... Harlem |
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TeQuiLaSunRiSe
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because it makes them more spread out...so its easier for the children to pick at the squashed up remains...
sorry. im roasted like coasters... <--what the fuck was that? |
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Cuz One or Two Punches Will Leave You TALKIN LIKE SEAN CONNERY DOES |
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Anubis
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all i have 2 say is u ppl realy need 2 seek help(n yes this is commin from me)
but bak 2 the spit i think "dam" sums it all up |
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LaWleSs
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Been a while since i checked the forums, and im glad i did for this one...Your style is nice, Mixture of cocky intelligence that balances with good flow and rhyme scheme, and this was a prime example, alot of quotables, and consistent in keeping the reader intrested....good drop |
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