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    Posted: 31 May 2005 at 8:19pm
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No name child, no same smile, no resemblance
No crime, no time, only a death sentence
No father, that's too big a title, no one's worthy of it
No mother, just a brainwashed yet dirty puppet
Conceived in rape, after a month and week erased
Vaccumed out... the new embryo meets its fate
And as it bleeds away, the seed's replaced
When she's raped again, he doesn't bear to see her face
His own daughter, the one he always leaves disgraced
Asking g*d every night, "Can I please escape?"
And the freaks she dates... they don't help the situation
They can't even save themselves but they wanna fix a nation
Her friends are torn like her insides
She has good friends, good grades, but she was born just to win twice
No more living means no more sex crimes
Choose to die, a suicide means no more next time...


It's a cold world, life is sadder when it starts
Even the closest ones can throw daggers at your heart
There's no justice when the little ones are battered in the dark
Does life matter when it's so easy to shatter every part?


No carriage for the miss, as she cries in her home
3 of them were forced out, 3 have died on their own
One of them survived but it won't make her smile today
Cause she died too, aged 3... 3000 miles away
Pulling at chains with all her force exerted
But ends up tired, asking what she's done to deserve it
All that shit will get the best of most from the start
Cause even national tragedies hit close to the heart
And she gets up another day wondering why
Asking how can there be so much evil under the sky
Will she get plundered and die? heart of a hunter's inside
Rain can't hold her bad, even lighning and thunder have tried
Seen in 16 years what most are fortunate to never see
She's tired of asking for brighter days an better weeks
but... she's felt dizzy a few times, it's the third today
Runs to the bathroom one more time to regurgitate


It's a cold world, life is sadder when it starts
Even the closest ones can throw daggers at your heart
There's no justice when the little ones are battered in the dark
Does life matter when it's so easy to shatter every part?


Things were looking up this week, is she the next to be blessed?
Not if there's a blue line on this pregnancy test
At age 18 it's college, at 18 she's free
Tells herself "that's what happiness means to be"
Boys are too much like her dad so herquest begins
Settles for on-again, off-again lesbian
Men ain't gentle, she wants that soft touch
Innocense is being naive... she hasn't lost much
Yet, she's lost it all, she was caused to fall
She's got a girlfriend AND a boyfriend bouncing off the wall
Fuck the world, no guilt, with whomever she would make out
Nothing's fair anyway... she follows her escape route
So she takes doubts and casts them away
But it's a matter of time before she's raped, harrased or betrayed
They try to take action, her friends will finish and break him
Treat her mental damage and avenge her innocence taken


It's a cold world, life is sadder when it starts
Even the closest ones can throw daggers at your heart
There's no justice when the little ones are battered in the dark
Does life matter when it's so easy to shatter every part?




And I wish somebody would turn on the light
And I hope to find the guilty ones and burn them tonight
And I wanna just STOP ALL THE BULLSHIT, STOP ALL THE SUFFERING
wHEN WILL WE HAVE THE CHANCE TO FUCKING WIN?
START A REVOLUTION, FIGHT FOR ALL YOU'LL GAIN
kILL THE MUTHAFUCKAS WHO HAVE CAUSED YOU PAIN!
Skies have faded, we wanna know why we're jaded
It's cause we've been beaten down and violated

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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote -Orion- Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 31 May 2005 at 9:53pm
Deep... very deep... Felt it from start to finish, flows pretty much on-point and the expression is straightforward but still powerful as hell, the ending real nice too... Another classick for the collection... peace
. . . Now who said they fuckin' with me?
They just said that FUCKIN' with me
They didn't mean it
Nah . . .
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jeez jehu

do u not listen to 20?
get in da Fuckin Booth.

nuff said.
no more
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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote Ryder Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 01 June 2005 at 11:00am

jehu man that's ice cold and really DEEp, the flow is good man. you really elevated and congrats for that man, real tight props to ya

 

$orry Mom

I broke your heart to please my friendz

$orry Dad

For the same love of money i fell in love with crime
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thats hot man the first verse had me stuck into it, its tight it flows so well and as said it real deep{i havent read it off the beat speakers are a lil messed}


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