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King Jehu
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Posted: 31 May 2005 at 8:19pm |
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No name child, no same smile, no resemblance No crime, no time, only a death sentence No father, that's too big a title, no one's worthy of it No mother, just a brainwashed yet dirty puppet Conceived in rape, after a month and week erased Vaccumed out... the new embryo meets its fate And as it bleeds away, the seed's replaced When she's raped again, he doesn't bear to see her face His own daughter, the one he always leaves disgraced Asking g*d every night, "Can I please escape?" And the freaks she dates... they don't help the situation They can't even save themselves but they wanna fix a nation Her friends are torn like her insides She has good friends, good grades, but she was born just to win twice No more living means no more sex crimes Choose to die, a suicide means no more next time... It's a cold world, life is sadder when it starts Even the closest ones can throw daggers at your heart There's no justice when the little ones are battered in the dark Does life matter when it's so easy to shatter every part? No carriage for the miss, as she cries in her home 3 of them were forced out, 3 have died on their own One of them survived but it won't make her smile today Cause she died too, aged 3... 3000 miles away Pulling at chains with all her force exerted But ends up tired, asking what she's done to deserve it All that shit will get the best of most from the start Cause even national tragedies hit close to the heart And she gets up another day wondering why Asking how can there be so much evil under the sky Will she get plundered and die? heart of a hunter's inside Rain can't hold her bad, even lighning and thunder have tried Seen in 16 years what most are fortunate to never see She's tired of asking for brighter days an better weeks but... she's felt dizzy a few times, it's the third today Runs to the bathroom one more time to regurgitate It's a cold world, life is sadder when it starts Even the closest ones can throw daggers at your heart There's no justice when the little ones are battered in the dark Does life matter when it's so easy to shatter every part? Things were looking up this week, is she the next to be blessed? Not if there's a blue line on this pregnancy test At age 18 it's college, at 18 she's free Tells herself "that's what happiness means to be" Boys are too much like her dad so herquest begins Settles for on-again, off-again lesbian Men ain't gentle, she wants that soft touch Innocense is being naive... she hasn't lost much Yet, she's lost it all, she was caused to fall She's got a girlfriend AND a boyfriend bouncing off the wall Fuck the world, no guilt, with whomever she would make out Nothing's fair anyway... she follows her escape route So she takes doubts and casts them away But it's a matter of time before she's raped, harrased or betrayed They try to take action, her friends will finish and break him Treat her mental damage and avenge her innocence taken It's a cold world, life is sadder when it starts Even the closest ones can throw daggers at your heart There's no justice when the little ones are battered in the dark Does life matter when it's so easy to shatter every part? And I wish somebody would turn on the light And I hope to find the guilty ones and burn them tonight And I wanna just STOP ALL THE BULLSHIT, STOP ALL THE SUFFERING wHEN WILL WE HAVE THE CHANCE TO FUCKING WIN? START A REVOLUTION, FIGHT FOR ALL YOU'LL GAIN kILL THE MUTHAFUCKAS WHO HAVE CAUSED YOU PAIN! Skies have faded, we wanna know why we're jaded It's cause we've been beaten down and violated 1 |
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Insert something rappy here
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-Orion-
Veteran Joined: 08 April 2004 Location: DisturbinLondon Status: Offline Points: 9598 Crew: Renegades Text Rank: #1 Stats: 90-4-1 Form: WWWWNW |
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Deep... very deep... Felt it from start to finish, flows pretty much on-point and the expression is straightforward but still powerful as hell, the ending real nice too... Another classick for the collection... peace
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They just said that FUCKIN' with me They didn't mean it Nah . . . |
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20theTruth
Superior Member Joined: 10 August 2004 Location: United States Status: Offline Points: 2155 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 16-6-0 Form: WWWWWW |
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jeez jehu
do u not listen to 20? get in da Fuckin Booth. nuff said. |
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no more
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Ryder
Standard Member Joined: 06 December 2004 Location: South Africa Status: Offline Points: 575 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-6-0 Form: LWLWWL |
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jehu man that's ice cold and really DEEp, the flow is good man. you really elevated and congrats for that man, real tight props to ya
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Demonic
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thats hot man the first verse had me stuck into it, its tight it flows so well and as said it real deep{i havent read it off the beat speakers are a lil messed}
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