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Stalin
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Posted: 27 June 2008 at 6:45pm |
Sorry I aint been able to get online, I'm livin somewhere else now and aint got the net, plus they blocked the shit at work. Also dont got much time for nothin since my son was born
When I was younger so many voices led me to you didnt get too close, sat at the table instead of the booth but I observed u, and witnessed how everybody treated u but I could tell u wanted realness, u needed truth pictured me and u, comin together to make it happen I knew I loved u when u forgave my bad mistakes and actions the placed ur trapped in was doin u harm So I tried to ease the burden wit u in my arms only few were alarmed to what was growin between us I knew too many cats wanted to fuck u wit a mean thrust So I had to do my best to hold u down properly cats try to keep me away from ya, but aint no stoppin me So I started fightin cats reachin for ur love tired of u gettin disrepected by people in the clubs So I promised I'd always stay real, never abandoning ya heart It was like a race to u, and I was scramblin to the start but things got different, gettin stuck in positions I neglected u when I fell in love wit another woman u didnt question my motives but all the stressin was growin the whole time away from u I was feelin upset and unfocused I still found time to write to u once in a while whenever u'd reply, instantly my frowns becomin a smile still had hope, apologized for what I do to u baby but now my hearts stuck between 2 beautiful ladies so u call me to come over and I rush to your place I forgot how good it felt to be touchin ya face it happened so fast, had to see if the sparks were there It was better than ever, wishin your hearts repaired departed scared..what if my girl finds out I'm unfaithful didnt think of it then, couldnt stand to see u ache still Now I had to choose, 2 women but who do I stay with? Can I pick one of u without the others heart breakin Made my choice..I was completely sure wit no question then my life changed..I'm sorry but my girls pregnant I had to let u go but im prayin u'll be better off One day u'll come back to me, I havent lost u forever love thinkin of u, I aint the same since our shit stopped I just ask that ur treated right, til next time Hip Hop Edited by Stalin - 27 June 2008 at 6:48pm |
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DressToKill
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It was like a race to u, and I was scramblin to the start
Loved that line..this whole peice was fucking dope man..the flow was there and your ability to stay on topic is incredible..I wish you would drop more stuff man haha..Anyways I was hooked up from the title and wasnt disapointed..btw congrads on your son man I hope everything works out
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The original comeback kid
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Fatal
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Yea Stal, this whole piece was dope....great flow and emotion....props
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D.king
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wow this was really deep... had me thinking then i got it lol
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I resemble the tooth fairy by the way i am taking your crown!!
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bad karma
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hayo this shit woz hot!! tha whole way thru i was hooked, n ya could feel da pain flowin thru this it was sweet. props 2 u stalin i couldnt even pick a favorite line....
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stuck here wit a damaged back,
how tha fuck i manage that? its savage that woz a hit n run, this shit aint fun almost chipped me bum :( |
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