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    Posted: 16 November 2011 at 11:59am


“There is nothing worse than aggressive stupidity” – Goethe

Weakness got you tagged up, but they aint feds under covers
They’re fake, bunch of hicks in combat like the Dudley Brothers (Whaddup Spike?!)
Netflix or scholar, ripple or mistake, filler or insane?
Going monster on these nobodies, Godzilla to Kid Kane
Mod Killah to ingrate, explode like fucking Pompei
While they tryna ride high, s’why they’re sucking on J’s
Stopped posting links, but for you I’ll make an exception
If I’m Sergei you better hide your fuckin’ face for protection
The fuck you on about Tetsujin? Like that shit’s new to me
Wooden was the metaphor dummy, shows LI’s buffoonery Lamp
I’m supposed to sit back and let these bastards mimick me?
Online, hooking up with each other? They’re Match Affinity
“We’re the guys without photos, writing love letters”
“I like his reference to balls, so he might’ve done better”
They keep tryna flip, hating like “man you missing”
If you got all these shots why use the same ammunition?
It’s scams you’ve written, man on a mission to drown ‘em forever
They’re fresh, that’s why they keep using a picture from 2007
Compounding ya errors, trust I’m never suffering threats, no
Without the expo’s, they’re retired models...nothing but exposed
Metaphor becomes filler, when before it was hyped up
Clowns going ohhhh when Que’s saying “he’s on my nuts”
You guys are hunting a myth, like “man I gets the yeti”
Recruiting J, Q & Kay...the fuck you on, alphabet spaghetti?!
Just call me Brodie Clark, the hardest there’s ever been yet
Cause I keep cutting them queues, man, fuck a terrorist threat
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Wow great verse I liked the other guys better though dawg!
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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote -Que- Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 17 November 2011 at 1:37am
“There is nothing worse than aggressive stupidity” – Goethe
lol

Weakness got you tagged up, but they aint feds under covers
They’re fake, bunch of hicks in combat like the Dudley Brothers (Whaddup Spike?!)
ha...I like the wuddup spike at the end...added sting
Netflix or scholar, ripple or mistake, filler or insane?
Going monster on these nobodies, Godzilla to Kid Kane
no hit but a nice rhyme
Mod Killah to ingrate, explode like fucking Pompei
While they tryna ride high, s’why they’re sucking on J’s
Stopped posting links, but for you I’ll make an exception
If I’m Sergei you better hide your fuckin’ face for protection
video was funny
The fuck you on about Tetsujin? Like that shit’s new to me
Wooden was the metaphor dummy, shows LI’s buffoonery Lamp
I get it
I’m supposed to sit back and let these bastards mimick me?
Online, hooking up with each other? They’re Match Affinity
“We’re the guys without photos, writing love letters”
“I like his reference to balls, so he might’ve done better”
They keep tryna flip, hating like “man you missing”
If you got all these shots why use the same ammunition?
^^LOL
It’s scams you’ve written, man on a mission to drown ‘em forever
They’re fresh, that’s why they keep using a picture from 2007
Compounding ya errors, trust I’m never suffering threats, no
Without the expo’s, they’re retired models...nothing but exposed
I like this line...fuckin bastard ha ha!
Metaphor becomes filler, when before it was hyped up
Clowns going ohhhh when Que’s saying “he’s on my nuts”
You guys are hunting a myth, like “man I gets the yeti”
Recruiting J, Q & Kay...the fuck you on, alphabet spaghetti?!

^^Best bar Clap
Just call me Brodie Clark, the hardest there’s ever been yet
Cause I keep cutting them queues, man, fuck a terrorist threat


cool diss CubeCool

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Godzilla Monsters Kid Kane
Yeah that bar was nice rhymes
Models Expos was a clever lil number
Good one this time

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cool diss here, much better than your pervious shit.. the j Q and kay was the best bar i liked
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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote Kay B Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 17 November 2011 at 3:59pm
Nice diss some hard hits...same as what everyone else said really best bar was the alphabetti spaghetti one mainly cause my name was used, tho i used AS play already n mine was doper (ofcourse)

Oh and The dudleys were dope

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Fifteen minutes of my life I'm not getting back...

Seriously, nobody read this...it's completely pointless
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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote Madeye Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 18 November 2011 at 10:51am
Decent drop. I'm sure I've read better shots from you, though.
References were cool. Nice opening, creativity was good.

Stay up.
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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote PoeticAssassin Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 18 November 2011 at 4:24pm
Good job Cuba..I haven't read a whole lot from you..you should post more.  Opener was funny as hell with that picture.  

Compounding ya errors, trust I’m never suffering threats, no
Without the expo’s, they’re retired models...nothing but exposed

This was the best bar I thought...

It’s scams you’ve written, man on a mission to drown ‘em forever
They’re fresh, that’s why they keep using a picture from 2007

But this one didn't rhyme..but I'm starting to get that people have different accents around here so its all good..

Nice job Cuba
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Originally posted by Scotty32 Scotty32 wrote:

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Fifteen minutes of my life I'm not getting back...

Seriously, nobody read this...it's completely pointless

It took you 15 minutes to read that?

Anyway, eh, honestly not great Cubes. From what little I've read of all this shit it's pretty tired
. . . Now who said they fuckin' with me?
They just said that FUCKIN' with me
They didn't mean it
Nah . . .
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