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Zinaii
Standard Member Joined: 15 June 2013 Status: Offline Points: 2957 Crew: Tha Syndicate Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 47-27-10 Form: WLNNNL |
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Posted: 27 August 2013 at 3:11am |
i dont run from beef, zin stay on some fuedal shit
my back against the wall like babies in the uterus who culd sit? through these spits, witout a doobie lit flow so holy i could prolly saint a lunatic niggas dont appreciate southern flow in l.a. but bar for bar im with the elite; i could do this shit in my sleep and actually its obvious, i have to be on bossy shit so zin(xen) can make niggas understand like japanese philosophy abuse l.a till orion says zin u the best that done it and drop more "oms" then yoga classes wit expectin mothers just cause i dont take shit they think zinaiis a thug but in my battles they judge my record like a biased judge everybodys ammo be quotes from previous battles but when i vote; i dont even think that matters but im not one to complain, plays cards how they dealt guess i gotta go at niggas neck, for my bars to be felt |
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levy420
Superior Member Joined: 22 May 2013 Location: San Antonio TX Status: Offline Points: 3443 Crew: Tha Syndicate Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 39-33-4 Form: LWWLLN |
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That saint a lunatic line was sick as fuck homie u started off strong on this then flow kinda died out... think if u polished it it woulda continued to read smooth but its a keystyle so thats expected good shit though fam keep droppin
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O Block
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Step ya game up bruh.
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IZIAH
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yeah bro, it was pretty good at the beginnin' but like lev said, it died out.
I wonder how Orion is gonna respond to the line yah made... if he does...
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~Insight The Inspired~
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levy420
Superior Member Joined: 22 May 2013 Location: San Antonio TX Status: Offline Points: 3443 Crew: Tha Syndicate Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 39-33-4 Form: LWWLLN |
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N o how bout u drop a verse on ur n brenns battle n dig it outta nml instead of bein a coward
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Zinaii
Standard Member Joined: 15 June 2013 Status: Offline Points: 2957 Crew: Tha Syndicate Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 47-27-10 Form: WLNNNL |
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o im jus fukn around and check in to the battle fag
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Zinaii
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lol he wont i had a few beers and i barely drop any open mics....nobodys respondin to my callouts so i was like fuk it...that was literally off the dome
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Fredstycoolan
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I agree with levy and iziah to an extent but overall dope
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Zinaii
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good look fred
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Fredstycoolan
Groupie Joined: 25 August 2013 Location: p.g. county Status: Offline Points: 197 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 0-2-0 Form: LL |
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no problem
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Trizzy Tre
Superior Member Joined: 28 March 2013 Status: Offline Points: 5101 Crew: EMPIRE Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 30-7-1 Form: WLWLWW |
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ayo Z this was nice for a quick key... the flow was on and you had a few nice bars in there. I liked the closer.
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Point Blank
Superior Member Joined: 20 May 2005 Status: Offline Points: 7234 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 92-27-5 Form: WWNWWN |
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Yea this was pretty impressive man, you've upped your game a lot recently. Your multies seem a lot more natural now, your flow has improved and you had some nice wordplay in here (xen/oms). Nice work man keep it up
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Vib.Klean
Standard Member Joined: 29 April 2013 Location: NYC Status: Offline Points: 1780 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 35-28-0 Form: LLLLLL |
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Not bad,you did your thing here. i know it was quick but your last few bars were pretty cool.keep workin on your multies,there comin along better.
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