Open Mic: key style

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    Posted: 27 August 2013 at 3:11am
i dont run from beef, zin stay on some fuedal shit
my back against the wall like babies in the uterus
who culd sit? through these spits, witout a doobie lit
flow so holy i could prolly saint a lunatic
niggas dont appreciate southern flow in l.a.
but bar for bar im with the elite; i could do this shit in my sleep
and actually its obvious, i have to be on bossy shit
so zin(xen) can make niggas understand like japanese philosophy
abuse l.a till orion says zin u the best that done it
and drop more "oms" then yoga classes wit expectin mothers
just cause i dont take shit they think zinaiis a thug
but in my battles they judge my record like a biased judge
everybodys ammo be quotes from previous battles
but when i vote; i dont even think that matters
but im not one to complain, plays cards how they dealt
guess i gotta go at niggas neck, for my bars to be felt
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That saint a lunatic line was sick as fuck homie u started off strong on this then flow kinda died out... think if u polished it it woulda continued to read smooth but its a keystyle so thats expected good shit though fam keep droppin
I'll explode at the drop of a dime like proximity mines
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Step ya game up bruh.
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yeah bro, it was pretty good at the beginnin' but like lev said, it died out.
I wonder how Orion is gonna respond to the line yah made... if he does...
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N o how bout u drop a verse on ur n brenns battle n dig it outta nml instead of bein a coward
I'll explode at the drop of a dime like proximity mines
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o im jus fukn around and check in to the battle fag
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lol he wont i had a few beers and i barely drop any open mics....nobodys respondin to my callouts so i was like fuk it...that was literally off the dome
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I agree with levy and iziah to an extent but overall dope 
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good look fred
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no problem
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ayo Z this was nice for a quick key...

the flow was on and you had a few nice bars in there. I liked the closer.
 
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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote Point Blank Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 27 August 2013 at 4:31pm
Yea this was pretty impressive man, you've upped your game a lot recently. Your multies seem a lot more natural now, your flow has improved and you had some nice wordplay in here (xen/oms). Nice work man keep it up
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Not bad,you did your thing here. i know it was quick but your last few bars were pretty cool.keep workin on your multies,there comin along better.
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