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Cuba
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Posted: 13 November 2013 at 10:12pm |
Wrote this for LA X when I thought I had Kon's slot in the collab...
We are the genesis of relevance... With premises so effortless... Got a framework till the death with this... The size of the skeletons of elephants... But this aint Cote D'Ivoire we choke with our bars Like smoking foie gras or explosive firebombs It's like The Wire where I'm from... Tapping out the capers the culprits cultivated I'm like an ulcer undulated...pulsing punctuated From the stomach where it punctured unabated That's the LA, make way for a decathlon of decadence Running essays harder than a marathon of Mexicans I'm a paragon of excellence standing in a Parthenon of Presidents The número uno coming out the blue like the producers of Juno I'm seducing it too bro like Medusa at funeral nouveaus Nod to Chain...that dude was the greatest Give me a decade to indisputably raze him And the next man? I'll scholarly define him Send FreeDa5th to solitary confinement Let him rot away, coz once my cursives thrown We'll call it quits and send Hanging to a nursing home Act like I ain't the reason Point's suddenly vanishing... Hack the site take Scotty and permanently banish him Flip the records like haters with warped minds... And make Frank White the greatest of all time This ain't the usual Big Game style delusional prattle And some shit that ain't gonna happen like J504 losing a battle... Fast forward to 2023 and the sceptics'll whither Like "Holy shit that Cuba was fucking prophetic with writtens" #justsaying |
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Vib.Klean
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That hanging/hanging bar was fuckedd up. Made me laugh. Dope drop
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Vib.Klean
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Hanging/scotty *
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fuckoff
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ridiculous flow. loved the alliteration and vocab. was fucking sickness. read it a few times now and every time im like o shit ha.. mad props
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J504
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Ha! I wasn't even expecting a J5 mention in this
First off, flow in this was so nice, it was just firing. Rhyming was on-point and references were dope. You did a good job of taking a walk down memory lane with this while still keeping shit relevant. Frank White and Hanging references were perfect. Only thing that coulda made this stronger were a few more names being dropped, it mighta added to the history factor of it all. No big complaint mind you, this was pure entertainment. |
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Trizzy Tre
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yo cube your flow here was bananas man....fo' real!
The beginning was what really pulled me in and kept me reading through it.
Shit was on point the whole way and mix that wit your schemes and shit was dope.
good read
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-Orion-
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Yea, you killed it
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They just said that FUCKIN' with me They didn't mean it Nah . . . |
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-Que-
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Uh OH! Thats that Cuba shit right there. Rumor has it when you even semi focus your writtens Kill shit. Like that Horseman drop you did. Tell me why you had to dead'em with this bar:
"I'm like an ulcer undulated...pulsing punctuated From the stomach where it punctured unabated"<---Nassstyyy!Then followed with Essays/Mexicans bar...ahh shit! I could keep snaggin quotes but you already know. Shit Blazed!
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Brotha Goose
Standard Member Joined: 07 July 2013 Location: San Diego, CA Status: Offline Points: 2318 Crew: Kratos Kind Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 10-10-0 Form: LWLWLL |
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Ill give ya this one Cube's fire verse bruh
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CHAIN
Standard Member Joined: 14 November 2006 Status: Offline Points: 2769 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 8-4-0 Form: LWWLWW |
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@ the alliteration. It was too dope. too effortless....easy money. It's all about saying shit that has never been said before, in rhyme form. That's why the Cote D' Ivoire bar had me like *fuck him* |
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