Open Mic: **The ballad of Patrick Tre-zee**

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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote Exoduzt Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 18 November 2013 at 5:24pm
fucking best diss verse I have read in a long long time....damn...smh

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^^^Trizzy Tre in in there somewhere Burnt the fuck up!!Dead

Good Job Manc!!Clap

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hahaha @ que

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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote TURTLE Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 18 November 2013 at 6:27pm
Dope drop MANC but I think this line would have been enough to slaughter trizz
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Don't come apologize to LA - go take that through ya crew
 they're the one's made to look stupid for recruiting you
ya seeming foolish too - people can tell Dave hit the nail
one minute O "put lots of work in"... next he's "LAsBiggestFail" ?????

Geeezz, you came sick on this, you might as well shoot up trizz with an HIV injection!!!

LMAO..
                     
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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote -Orion- Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 18 November 2013 at 7:42pm
I genuinely don't know the last time I read anyone write any diss this savage on here... I gotta say I just was not expecting anything at a level quite so ridiculous...when I saw the title I had no fuckin' idea how you could make Patrick Swayze relevant at all but that Ghost shit was fucking brilliant...I don't even know who got the pottery wheel line but omglmfaorofl...damn

And I don't know who will believe me, but this feedback has nothing to do with the fact that I went at Trizzy a couple of times last week...genuinely...I mean, I wouldn't big up one guy, just 'cuz he went at some other guy who's acting like a bitch...I don't do that... Shiet, I don't know the last time I was this positive, but I would have been proud to have written this, is all I can say...and I can't remember the last time I said that about a diss

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. . . Now who said they fuckin' with me?
They just said that FUCKIN' with me
They didn't mean it
Nah . . .
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Nice one for the feed lads. The positive comments are greatly appreciated.
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Yeah this one gotta go to classics, it's ridiculous
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this shit was solid bro!

like DTK said.. loads of concepts here all merged in to perfection! the wordplay was off the hook! the Saville play was pure jokes! Best diss i've seen in a while on here!

Damn!
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You go from the perfectly flowed wordplay-

So - Patrick Tre-zee went all GHOST & did a missed appearance
n though I don't hold him in high regards, I'm lifting spirits
so don't be sad the loner's back - was it the timing confusing him? 
or the thought of my lines dropping him? - the finest Peruvian 

To just straight truth- regarding the 'Grudge no show being worse than a loss' bar.. 

Flawless technique bars + Humour + Truth = Great diss. 

Well done man.
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Yep.

True Classic.


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Dave da gawd.
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(it's in classics by the way - I've just found the fucking button)
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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote Manc Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 20 November 2013 at 10:16pm
Shit Cee!! Where u been ?? Appreciate the feed and the possitive comments Ki and Cee.

Classics eh?
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