Open Mic: [WD#2] Less Is More |
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Smoothtung
Standard Member Joined: 09 December 2012 Status: Offline Points: 2222 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 25-8-3 Form: WWWLWN |
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Posted: 04 April 2016 at 3:17am |
Cool start to what should be a much more complete piece. I have a feeling that's what it is though, just the beginning?
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Though you never even had the chance to witness it |
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Stalin
Site Moderator Joined: 24 November 2003 Location: United States Status: Offline Points: 2587 Crew: Renegades Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 34-12-2 Form: LNWWLW |
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Thanks for the feed guys. Appreciate it
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+Sick-Witted+
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daydizzle89
Superior Member Joined: 23 July 2014 Status: Offline Points: 3805 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 6-11-0 Form: LWWLLW |
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Ok Ok OK
5 bars you sonna bitch. Thats dope. Great use of words and you used them very well. AND IN 5 LINES. Whats Next? 2 lines? I'm ebola how my flows cause rappers to emaciate I'll debunk the deficit, suture the hands of fate ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ THATS DOPE SHIT good work and you can keep the vet status cuz you deserve it bruh |
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Neek
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Renegades stand the fuck up :)
thata boy Stal... didnt get the tree talk line..but im stupid so thats normal. the politicians line and the hands of fate lines were nasty tho. |
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#Bananas
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Stalin
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I'm unmitigated with ya hatred and reputation
Been impatient, instigated by their regulations I'm ebola how my flows cause rappers to emaciate I'll debunk the deficit, suture the hands of fate Politicians are debonair, with a silver platter My lectures be for rest like sylvan natter |
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+Sick-Witted+
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