Audio Mic: When times get tough - Project worked on with dal |
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Kay B
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Posted: 23 April 2008 at 7:04pm |
Lyrics by me....audio by dal
Shit's real....cop the mixtape....or become a rock fan http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default.cfm?bandID=828984 Edited by Kay B - 23 April 2008 at 7:05pm |
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Fatal
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This track is sick...seriously Lyrics were dope and presented perfectly. Dal killed it riding the beat well and jus sounds very comfortable. Def can see his improvement on the mic. The only thing that i found fault with was how dal sounds on the hook. He jus sounds weird on that part...but yea, seriously dope shit here...beat was hot as well. Props to both of you's... |
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DressToKill
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This would be 100 times better without the dubs because they seem to just throw everything off..Dal's flow/swagger is nice but it seems the dubs ruin the track..also the chorus is sketchy cuz the beat's voice is louder than Dal's so you cant understand what hes saying..but this has potential to be dopeness
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The original comeback kid
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dalinquent
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Props on the feed, This will be remastered before the tape drops... Just wanted to get it done for my pal kay :)
I hear what ya saying dress, bout the females voice overpowering mines over the hook... It will be taking care of when I remaster it... The dub problem will be tooken care of too... |
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Swift Styles
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i fuckin love it seriously.
powerful... BIIG ups to Kay for the lyrics Dal you did fuckin awesome putting just enough emotion when it was needed. female voice puts it in the mood. imma replay it again. just powerful and well voiced. BIG ups. |
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Swift Styles
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(recommended for LA radio)
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Kay B
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Props thanks for the feed, real credit should go to dal since the emotion he put in when this was a personal piece to me....was dope
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dalinquent
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Nope, You got the credits, If it wasn't for dope lyrics, I wouldn't of been able to connect with em enough to put that emotion in... I just went off all the emotion u put in while writing
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Swift Styles
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so modest
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Scotty32
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Awww group hug
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