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    Posted: 16 May 2008 at 2:29am

ya nuttin t'tig, ayo i'm runnin this shit
i'ma murder ev'ry motherfuckin cunt in ya clique
fuckers jump when i spit, yo i'm punkin 'em quick
like an a-bomb ev'ry motherfucker runnin from this
i'm old school, that's why all my drops is historical
and every fuckin verse i ever write is allegorical
phenominal, don't need t'be hard when i free bars
when half the motherfuckers on this website is a retard
so be smart, coz you aint want none o'this shit cuz
i'll punch right through ya stomach'n then tear out a viscus
i'm pissed kid, n'none of y'all can phase me when i'm irate
i've plagued upon ya mindstate'n slayed all ya devine faith
i've got gods'n mortals forced t'kneel t'my wrath
liquidate dimensions as they feelin the blast
that i unleashed from hades with my demonic army
rendered blitzkreig on the heavens 'fore st peter could bar me...
 
a succubi, i'll drain'n deconstruct ya pride
n laugh at ya horror as i come finger-fuck ya wife
fuck blasphemy, my actions only wrong if i say so
knocked out jesus christ'n strangled god with a halo
been left unchecked, the leader of an unholy sect
sold my soul t'satan'n then dissed him'n broke his neck
called my minions up'n raised myself as an idol
wiped my ass with the quran'n rolled a blunt with the bible
i heard that ghandi preached peace, but then i came to disturb it
exhumed his corpse t'sell it off to necrophiliac perverts
i've enslaved the world with bonds of iron'n violence
n poked through the eyelid t'blind the eye of osiris
i'm riddling the cosmos with the ashes of war
stand at the forefront of th'warhost with the hammer of thor
black t'the core, upend existence'n extend my insanity
and constitute designs to'bring an end to reality...

 



Edited by SwordedStylez - 16 May 2008 at 2:40am
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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote Fatal Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 16 May 2008 at 12:40pm
This was fuckin dope. I like your style as your flow is always fuckin hot and never comes off as forced or un natural. Loved the second verse man...great read seriously. Dont sleep on this one yall.
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shit, that was dope aside from the fact that i was a little bit offended by it. that selection of words was straight grimey. 
Got the style even insomniacs are dreaming of...
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Never knew you where the audio type...

Like Fatal said, seriously hot flow... Seems natural to you... Bastard... lol..

Ghandi line was funny... lookin' foward to hearin' you on the mic..
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haha i've been an audio head since before i first joined LA way back Jr, good looks on the feed.
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Dope as said above the flow was hot all the way, general content was dope looking forward to hearing the audio
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good looks on the feed.
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Both verses were pretty good and each gave something new. Flow was dope, and vocab was good. Only bar I didn't like was:

i'm old school, that's why all my drops is historical
and every fuckin verse i ever write is allegorical

Didn't fit into that first part as well as the other bars. Only little problem I saw, the second verse was really dope no problems there.
I believe in myself, so count out ever callin me an atheist
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good looks on the feed spell, kinda agree with you a bit on that bar, i only really kept it coz i liked it when i wrote it haha.
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fuckin killed it.
Now lets see the audio.
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it's comin, don't worry on that.
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final bump for any last feed.
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