Open Mic: My First Love

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    Posted: 27 June 2008 at 6:45pm
Sorry I aint been able to get online, I'm livin somewhere else now and aint got the net, plus they blocked the shit at work. Also dont got much time for nothin since my son was born
 
When I was younger so many voices led me to you
didnt get too close, sat at the table instead of the booth
but I observed u, and witnessed how everybody treated u
but I could tell u wanted realness, u needed truth
pictured me and u, comin together to make it happen
I knew I loved u when u forgave my bad mistakes and actions
the placed ur trapped in was doin u harm
So I tried to ease the burden wit u in my arms
only few were alarmed to what was growin between us
I knew too many cats wanted to fuck u wit a mean thrust
So I had to do my best to hold u down properly
cats try to keep me away from ya, but aint no stoppin me
So I started fightin cats reachin for ur love
tired of u gettin disrepected by people in the clubs
So I promised I'd always stay real, never abandoning ya heart
It was like a race to u, and I was scramblin to the start
but things got different, gettin stuck in positions
I neglected u when I fell in love wit another woman
u didnt question my motives but all the stressin was growin
the whole time away from u I was feelin upset and unfocused
I still found time to write to u once in a while
whenever u'd reply, instantly my frowns becomin a smile
still had hope, apologized for what I do to u baby
but now my hearts stuck between 2 beautiful ladies
so u call me to come over and I rush to your place
I forgot how good it felt to be touchin ya face
it happened so fast, had to see if the sparks were there
It was better than ever, wishin your hearts repaired
departed scared..what if my girl finds out I'm unfaithful
didnt think of it then, couldnt stand to see u ache still
Now I had to choose, 2 women but who do I stay with?
Can I pick one of u without the others heart breakin
Made my choice..I was completely sure wit no question
then my life changed..I'm sorry but my girls pregnant
I had to let u go but im prayin u'll be better off
One day u'll come back to me, I havent lost u forever love
thinkin of u, I aint the same since our shit stopped
I just ask that ur treated right, til next time Hip Hop


Edited by Stalin - 27 June 2008 at 6:48pm
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It was like a race to u, and I was scramblin to the start
 
Loved that line..this whole peice was fucking dope man..the flow was there and your ability to stay on topic is incredible..I wish you would drop more stuff man haha..Anyways I was hooked up from the title and wasnt disapointed..btw congrads on your son man I hope everything works out
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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote Fatal Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 28 June 2008 at 4:58am
Yea Stal, this whole piece was dope....great flow and emotion....props
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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote D.king Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 07 July 2008 at 5:21pm
wow this was really deep... had me thinking then i got it lol 
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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote bad karma Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 07 July 2008 at 5:26pm
hayo this shit woz hot!! tha whole way thru i was hooked, n ya could feel da pain flowin thru this it was sweet. props 2 u stalin i couldnt even pick a favorite line....Clap
stuck here wit a damaged back,
how tha fuck i manage that?
its savage that woz a hit n run,
this shit aint fun almost chipped me bum :(
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