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Senor Perfecto
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Posted: 29 October 2008 at 3:41pm |
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My words are dark... but I've worked so hard to create a work of art, If destruction breeds creation then I'ma tear the world apart, Strip down nations and rebuild foundations then start again, Less the struggle and inject some muscle into the heart of men, Learn from past events... Ignorance must only be your last defence, You took your time to reach the top and peaked... Now prepare for a fast descent, Hit the bottom... You can't even pretend that shit's forgotten, After forcing a minority in poverty to pick your cotton, And from another source we had all sort of wars and, of course, the Holocaust, And all because of one man and we've seen what the horror cost, A lot of lost lives so Jews were offered a separate nation as reparation, But we're seeing the evidence of that revelation now during our generation, Education is wasted... This is as good as it gets, Don't mind crying cos the tears help wash away the blood and the sweat, We shouldn't forget the many sacrificed and bludgeoned to death, ¿What piles higher... dead bodies or government debt...? Adios... |
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NepentheZ
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Stand out bar right there. Hot piece, loved the flow, multis, internal multis, delivery. Awesome. Always enjoyed readin' your shit. This is on another lever to 90% of Open Mic. Well done. |
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I'm so fucking intelligent, half the time I don't even know what I'm saying... |
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Fatal
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^Word...
Opener shut it down...great content...flow was hot...dope peice most def... |
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Cuba
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A lot of lost lives so Jews were offered a separate nation as reparation,
But we're seeing the evidence of that revelation now during our generation, ^ On point!! You know what you do...and you done did it,
...and its government debt!!
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JBrenn
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Happy Birthday to a LA legend!!
Great Drop worth a read by the new heads
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