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    Posted: 14 September 2013 at 8:19pm

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Got that bakin soda bubblin', I'ma take the road of smugglin
Taking risks and playing chips, makin dough from hustlin
Dragged up on the streets where even 8-year-olds are thuggin
This hood ain't been regarded as a danger-zone for nuthin
I come from a place where only families remain tight
Homies play it cool but could attack you on the same night
I get them faggots back in scenes as savage as a cage fight
Only vengeance can act as a bandage for a snake-bite
Banana clips will take flight at those who chose to dishonour
This noble marauder as potent as the bow of an archer 
See I'm a son-of-a-gun who'll always stay close to his father
With weed a cut above the rest, I buy my dope from the barber
The hood has raised us up, it's acted as a mother
Attracts us to the gutter like some cattle to an udder
But there ain't no messin round within the families that suffer
I strive to keep it real when I'm hanging with my brother
Or the honeys in the hood...I endeavour to attract those
Sinister but beautiful like petals of a black rose...

Exoduzt
I ain't from the Bronx or Brooklyn I'm from the Island to the east....
Violently we feast on fiends who live their lives vile in the streets...
Old school trash can fires   no denial when I speak....
I beat up a crackhead over a rock now I got trial in a week...
no lie my mentor told me to do work until my hustle's earned...
so when I was a kid I moved weight until my muscles burned...
but what I yearned was  not get fucked over hit spit and beat on...
I'm the one who sold the rock to my father  on which he OD'd on!...
Thats the truth I was homeless so I relate and stay close to bums...
Use to fight with my brother over the abundance of toaster crumbs...
I thought cocaine was suppose to numb the pain but here I am posting some...
 The only cracka' on the street but got treated blacker than a smoker's lung...
how would MY streets react if I was born gay? If I was  just a fag and brittle...
Holy shit what if I was Trayvon on his best day?  jus' tryin' to buy a bag of skittles...
Rainbows are colors but in the darkness they do all look the same...
but fuck what they look like cus with baking powder they all cook the same...
left jab left cross then absolutley uppercut and right hooked they're frame...
I shook the game on the L.I.R.R strait up Point Blank I looked and took they CHAINS....

CHAIN
Wealth made me heinous but hey, who the hell cares? 
Had to make haste ‘cause the hate was doing well here 
Demons in my dreams tell me “Hades isn’t elsewhere”
Halos for the heathens bringing Haiti to my Bel-air 
Puffing on that hazel, niggas hanging by an elf’s hair 
Shooting up H with they neighbors that’s on welfare 
12 stepping everyday, won’t make the next 12 pair…
Of hours, their resume of L’s are a health scare 
Hell yeah, my old friend shot another man dead 
Now he’s on the run ‘cause they only understand led 
Stuck at his girl’s crib with a bloody pants leg 
Won’t snitch, white chick that the brothers hand fed 
Hash tag goonies still dropping dimes on Facebook 
Strangers know exactly how niggas got they chain took
Place, time and everything, tryna solve them cases 
Like the cops ain’t online bookmarking pages 
Y’all gon’ have the team playing football in cages 
In real life I can’t say my crook’s hall of famous 
Keep my act smooth ‘cause I ain’t tryna blast tools 
Think about the hassle a good brawl could save us

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Sick collab, love how you came together with your styles and pulled it off. We really need to see more inter-crew collabs, the fact this had 3 different crews being repped was dope.

PB - You had some sick schemes going on, and got a solid message across.
Exo - You did your usual thing and got the imagery going to paint a picture
Chain - Chain/10.

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Cheers Jay, bump
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all yall went in but i liked this one the most but all ya had nice shit

anana clips will take flight at those who chose to dishonour
This noble marauder as potent as the bow of an archer 
See I'm a son-of-a-gun who'll always stay close to his father
With weed a cut above the rest, I buy my dope from the barber
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exoduz i felt ur whole verse i liked that coke scheme u cooked up in the kitchen rite dere bringin sum serious heat with that whole thing,

chain u had a nice 1 i liked that facebook thing u had that was serious,

like is aid all yall was nasty but damn @ blank "i buy my dope from the barber"
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dudes snore'n on this? SMH......

This was hot fellas! 3 totally different styles, tell'n 3 different stories
yet all 3 are mirroring each other......thats sick! Picked a few lines,
hard to do lot of gud ones, but these stood out.

PB-Fuk a cage fight, this bar a savage!

"I get them faggots back in scenes as savage as a cage fight
Only vengeance can act as a bandage for a snake-bite"

Duzt- Not even Jay-z could of put thst better fam!

"no lie my mentor told me to do work until my hustle's earned...
so when I was a kid I moved weight until my muscles burned..."

Chain-I'm not sure if they know'n that this truth rooted gangsta shit! Feel'n ya

"Hash tag goonies still dropping dimes on Facebook 
Strangers know exactly how niggas got they chain took"


Good shit fam, drop'n that real life horocore!
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good looks on the replies so far...much appreciated

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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote -Que- Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 17 September 2013 at 2:38am
First...I like how each of you took the reader to a different Local. Put together different instances of the same scenario.


PB
Dragged up on the streets where even 8-year-olds are thuggin
This hood ain't been regarded as a danger-zone for nuthin
I dig how that came off^^
I get them faggots back in scenes as savage as a cage fight
Only vengeance can act as a bandage for a snake-bite
This was nice also...good job PB

                               See I'm a son-of-a-gun who'll always stay close to his father
^^This was the dopest line yet ha ha

Sinister but beautiful like petals of a black rose...
Closer was nice too

Exoduzt

Old school trash can fires   no denial when I speak....
I beat up a crackhead over a rock now I got trial in a week...
Cool for how this came off flawless
no lie my mentor told me to do work until my hustle's earned...
so when I was a kid I moved weight until my muscles burned...
LOL...I know you was cheezin when you seen how fly this last line was...NICE!I thought cocaine was suppose to numb the pain but here I am posting some...
 The only cracka' on the street but got treated blacker than a smoker's lung...
I liked Blacker than a smokers lung...
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left jab left cross then absolutley uppercut and right hooked they're frame...
I shook the game on the L.I.R.R strait up Point Blank I looked and took they CHAINS....
NICE closer too...good work Exo!

CHAIN
Wealth made me heinous but hey, who the hell cares? 
Had to make haste ‘cause the hate was doing well here <--Likin that phrase bro
Demons in my dreams tell me “Hades isn’t elsewhere”
Halos for the heathens bringing Haiti to my Bel-air 
Puffing on that hazel, niggas hanging by an elf’s hair
This whole set was sick
Shooting up H with they neighbors that’s on welfare 
12 stepping everyday, won’t make the next 12 pair…
Of hours, their resume of L’s are a health scare
LOL@ Resumes of L's are a health scare...clean

Won’t snitch, white chick that the brothers hand fed
Ha Ha!
Hash tag goonies still dropping dimes on Facebook 
Strangers know exactly how niggas got they chain took
I remember that shit!
Place, time and everything, tryna solve them cases 
Like the cops ain’t online bookmarking pages <--Truth
Y’all gon’ have the team playing football in cages 
In real life I can’t say my crook’s hall of famous
Nice^^
Keep my act smooth ‘cause I ain’t tryna blast tools 
Think about the hassle a good brawl could save us
^^^Again Nice

You guys came together and made a great Collabo!!


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Just had time for a quick read and comment here but I really enjoyed this fellas, each with styles you've made your own paired with segregated insight into individual lives. Great idea for a collab and excellent execution of the chosen concept. Three of my favs!
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This is exactly what I expected when I saw this trio. Each did their thing as always. Great drop. 

Points: I thought this middle section was vicious. Really tight. As was the closer.

I get them faggots back in scenes as savage as a cage fight
Only vengeance can act as a bandage for a snake-bite
Banana clips will take flight at those who chose to dishonour
This noble marauder as potent as the bow of an archer 
See I'm a son-of-a-gun who'll always stay close to his father
With weed a cut above the rest, I buy my dope from the barber

Exo: Everyone has already mentioned the moving weight bar, but yea that was an ill bar. I thought this set was the real high point for me, great lines in here:

but what I yearned was  not get fucked over hit spit and beat on...
I'm the one who sold the rock to my father  on which he OD'd on!...
Thats the truth I was homeless so I relate and stay close to bums...
Use to fight with my brother over the abundance of toaster crumbs...
I thought cocaine was suppose to numb the pain but here I am posting some...
 The only cracka' on the street but got treated blacker than a smoker's lung.

Chain: Your opening 4 bars or so were killer. I don't wanna just quote the whole damn thing but you already know the facebook bar was on point and I loved this line:

Won’t snitch, white chick that the brothers hand fed 


Ya'll killed it. 
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Man, it's great to see you 3 still writing awesomely. Brought a smile to my face seeing a collab from you three together. No disappointments here. I particularly loved Blank's verse the most but you all did a great job illustrating in words your experiences and natures and it was all easy to follow and very enjoyable to read throughout. Glad to see you guys still doing you what you do so well. This is Freeda5thdawg, by the way. Free. Freeda. Whatever you called me. Here are my favorite lines from each:

PB: But there ain't no messin round within the families that suffer
I strive to keep it real when I'm hanging with my brother

Chose this in particular because I can relate to it closely.

Exo: Thats the truth I was homeless so I relate and stay close to bums...
Use to fight with my brother over the abundance of toaster crumbs...

Just a look at a reality that must have been emotionally draining and scarring. I could appreciate the openness of expressing this.

Chain: Keep my act smooth ‘cause I ain’t tryna blast tools 
Think about the hassle a good brawl could save us

It's a truth I've always wondered why it wasn't put to practice more. I could relate seeing as I've seen and lost all because these so called men relied on a gun. 

Great job, guys.
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good looks Freeda...good to see ya around

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yoooooo....this shit was dope fellas!!!
 
PB - I like the way your verse flowed overall, and really had a nice theme to it. You stuck to the story telling part andit worked well.
Fav barz:
The hood has raised us up, it's acted as a mother
Attracts us to the gutter like some cattle to an udder
But there ain't no messin round within the families that suffer
 
 
 
Exo - Dope schemes and your wording was nice. Mix that with your ability to blend bars together and tell a story was fresh.
Fav bar:
I thought cocaine was suppose to numb the pain but here I am posting some...
 The only cracka' on the street but got treated blacker than a smoker's lung...
 
Chain:
Your verse was fresh as fuck! Your vocab and angles to each bar was bananas. The inners too were solid.
fav part:
Demons in my dreams tell me “Hades isn’t elsewhere”
Halos for the heathens bringing Haiti to my Bel-air 
Puffing on that hazel, niggas hanging by an elf’s hair 
Shooting up H with they neighbors that’s on welfare 
12 stepping everyday, won’t make the next 12 pair…
 
 
 
Dopeness all the way through fellas good collab
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sick collab guys. the flow on yall were great, and multis were good.
idk what to usualy say on open mics like these cuz they barely have any flaws.
 
so yeah... good shit yall. keep writing!
 
 
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First off, I don't know how I missed this.

Second, this was nice as fuck. All 3 of y'all are dope writers and do ya thing on this one. When I'm not on this phone and can get at a pc, I'd love to drop back it and give some breakdowns.

Just want to let y'all know I see this and ain't sleeping on it.

Props
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Loved this.

PB- You came with a brilliant flow, good narrative, but kept it simple.

I get them faggots back in scenes as savage as a cage fight
Only vengeance can act as a bandage for a snake-bite

Dope.

Exo- You killed this my man, probably my favourite verse, but it's all down to opinion. You're one of those guys where it's dangerous to collab with, cos whilst you're not seen as being an Orion or a Manc, on your day, you can renegade anyone on the site.

I thought cocaine was suppose to numb the pain but here I am posting some...
 The only cracka' on the street but got treated blacker than a smoker's lung...

Disgusting.

CHAIN- Your wording is everything, you ooze class, and even though your shit is very technical, it's said in a way that neglects from that fact, and makes it seem like you've written your shit casually in 10 minutes. That's quality there.

Hash tag goonies still dropping dimes on Facebook 
Strangers know exactly how niggas got they chain took

Preach.



Amen.


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put me in mind of dome AoTp shit...
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Thanks for the replies much appreciated

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I thought cocaine was suppose to numb the pain but here I am posting some...

DOPE LINES
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@ Que...good looks on the read my dude...and lmao I was cheezin like crazy when I thought that line up...collab soon Que

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Raw.

PB - got a really Uk grime/real talk vibe from this, bit like that Ghetto - Acoustic freestyle, just rugged with the rhythm/imagery, loads of quotables

Exo - this was pretty dope as well, not as rugged as PB but you're definitely a beast with creating an image ...blacker than a smokers lung stood out for me, ill

Chain - lol, Haiti to my Belair, insane, off the scale...thought the first half was awesome and then the second half dropped a little, was still really good but nothing that made me go 'Whoah'

Dope collab though, awesome trio to see linking up
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