Open Mic: A Quick spit to whoever the fuck it may concern

Fuck the AMMO....
I was just sitting smoking and spitting... And suddenly I got my eye stuck on the tattoo i have, of my ex...( she made the excuse that i am self destructing by smoking too much lol. Lamest!!)
I felt strong vibes that i should write something so here is a quick dick  in her clit.

TiTu  trips?- not now shit he is barely pissed,
Never sensed the ugliness under the beauty of this bitch,
Its too late to fix-I've lost my faith,
And bought the hate at relatively discounted rate, 
Set my brain to the flames- my only gain was the pain,
Dried the glands in my eyes now they acidic rain,
i do toke- the way you used it evil but dope,
Perfectly hid the fact that I'm broke under the rag that i smoke,
Taunts haunted my thoughts nervous breakdowns and strokes...
Grounded the hope inhibited my skeletal growth, 
Horrific screams laced my sleeps  its harder to beathe,
Crazy dreams brought the agony n heat to my speach,
You was supposed to console but you did a increase,
Atleast this green heals T when wounds openly  bleed, 
stress depressed my chest produced destructive strings,
Im like a fire spitting Siamese who burned its wings,
I lit my last blunt n hit- fit the gun with  slit wrists,
Before i temper my temple- i guess I told you bitch.... ( gunshot) 

Haha Thanks for peeping in and giving feedback bro. Encouragement really helps improve a lot.
These are nothing but raw emotions.
And yeh riddle, i will have a look at it later... with a sober head lol
Thanks man.

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Ill and relatable nice

Shit is dead. Really need some critiques and feedback on this..

Thanks dawg bro..really appreciate yo feed and encouragement man. It really keeps me motivated and helps to elevate. And yeh man, props for that masterpiece topical verse n Best of luck fo yo battle with manc. Stay blessed and active my man..

Thanks a lot Brotha, you know i always appreciate yo feed.

Youre welcome