Open Mic: LAX - TTT - "The Bear and Tiger"

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The writer of writers

He walked alone for some time cause he was scared and tired

Holly.... Hot,my man.
I dont know what to say...Dude, this was crazy.
If i have to explain it in one word, it was "dope".
Props bro

im not going to lie is this spoken word   poetry   i couldn't catch the flow  shouldn't this hip-hop text thing be versatile  i mean for real thats nice poetry but its nopt hip hop for real i know you probaly have dick riders on here and all but for real me speaken for myself i think that joint was wack im just here to keep it really it  was hot spoken word but rap it wasnt im sorry dude  im not  90s BABE CANT JUST SETTLE FOR ANYTHING ITS LIKE YOU TRYED TO HARD TO BE LYRICAL BUT IT WAS ALL LIARS FIRES AND CHOIRS FOR ME I KNO WYOU PROBALY MAD CAUSE IM SAYING THIS BUT I HAVE MY OPINION MAN DEAD ASS ITS TIME TO TURN THIS UP A LITTLE LET ME HEAR THAT AUDIO THEN I MITE LIKE IT OTHER THAN THAT I RATE YOU A 7 OUT OF TEN BRUH

Chain: I laughed too loudly for this late at night here. Damn that gif. I appreciate you checking it out, man. Glad to see you still here. And please, writer of writers? Says the writer of writers of writers.

Que: Awesome breakdown, man. Thanks for taking the time and thanks for the feed. Haha, that one "medieval" section, Lord of the Rings literally randomly popped in my head as I was writing.

Kay B: Although appreciated, I beg to differ, dude. I got plenty reason with the way you all captured the topical essence.

Titu: Thank you, man. Glad you're feeling it. 

Spume: Thanks, dude. Appreciate the words...proper enough feed for me, heh.

Nitty: If it's your true and honest opinion, I can't be mad at all, man. I've written for too many years now to receive opinions too negatively. The "dickriders" thing is unnecessary though. I wish I could do audio unless cell phone quality is welcomed, haha. One thing I will defend though is this...don't misunderstand me knowing what Hip Hop is...it's one of my biggest loves. I think stuff like this is exactly the versatility Hip Hop is missing nowadays. Appreciate you checking it out though, man.

U.N.L.M.: Thank you, man. Agreed...I'm humbled that this was received as well as it has been compared to how superbly Kay, Duzt and Stalin delivered their pieces. I'm glad seeing as it's also quite personal since it's inspired by my lady. 

I'm always a fan of good imagery, and this piece has some of the best. This whole stanza

Welcome back man. I missed reading your pieces.

There was a tremendous amount of vivid imagery in your lines, matched with accurate use vocab makes this piece what it is. Very descriptive and smooth through out the whole the piece
There are only a hand full of kats on here that I really enjoy reading. Now that your back doing it, it adds one more.

Verses like this ARE whats missing in hip hop these days.

Loved this drop!! Youre a great writer and im looking forward to our battle. Ill feed this thoroughly when i get the chance bro - but i just wanted to let you know that this was ridiculously good. Really impressive stuff - and congrats on the win. Very well deserved

Don't see many drops of the caliber anymore, sir. Delicious rhymescheme and seamless flow throughout telling an entertaining story littered with literary devices all in the meanwhile using the same multies throughout. I applaud this verse, have read through it a few times and it's one of the top reads I've seen on this site. The topical challenge was filled with consistently high level drops, so forming a verse that clearly stands above them is commendable, well done.