Open Mic: LA X verse

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    Posted: 13 November 2013 at 10:12pm
Wrote this for LA X when I thought I had Kon's slot in the collab...

We are the genesis of relevance...
With premises so effortless...
Got a framework till the death with this...
The size of the skeletons of elephants...
But this aint Cote D'Ivoire we choke with our bars
Like smoking foie gras or explosive firebombs
It's like The Wire where I'm from...
Tapping out the capers the culprits cultivated
I'm like an ulcer undulated...pulsing punctuated
From the stomach where it punctured unabated
That's the LA, make way for a decathlon of decadence
Running essays harder than a marathon of Mexicans
I'm a paragon of excellence standing in a Parthenon of Presidents
The número uno coming out the blue like the producers of Juno
I'm seducing it too bro like Medusa at funeral nouveaus
Nod to Chain...that dude was the greatest
Give me a decade to indisputably raze him
And the next man? I'll scholarly define him
Send FreeDa5th to solitary confinement
Let him rot away, coz once my cursives thrown
We'll call it quits and send Hanging to a nursing home
Act like I ain't the reason Point's suddenly vanishing...
Hack the site take Scotty and permanently banish him
Flip the records like haters with warped minds...
And make Frank White the greatest of all time
This ain't the usual Big Game style delusional prattle
And some shit that ain't gonna happen like J504 losing a battle...
Fast forward to 2023 and the sceptics'll whither
Like "Holy shit that Cuba was fucking prophetic with writtens"

#justsaying
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That hanging/hanging bar was fuckedd up. Made me laugh. Dope drop
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Hanging/scotty *
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ridiculous flow. loved the alliteration and vocab. was fucking sickness. read it a few times now and every time im like o shit ha.. mad props
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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote J504 Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 14 November 2013 at 12:44am
Ha! I wasn't even expecting a J5 mention in this

First off, flow in this was so nice, it was just firing. Rhyming was on-point and references were dope. You did a good job of taking a walk down memory lane with this while still keeping shit relevant. Frank White and Hanging references were perfect. Only thing that coulda made this stronger were a few more names being dropped, it mighta added to the history factor of it all. No big complaint mind you, this was pure entertainment.
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yo cube your flow here was bananas man....fo' real!
 
The beginning was what really pulled me in and kept me reading through it.
Shit was on point the whole way and mix that wit your schemes and shit was dope.
 
good read
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Yea, you killed it
. . . Now who said they fuckin' with me?
They just said that FUCKIN' with me
They didn't mean it
Nah . . .
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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote -Que- Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 14 November 2013 at 11:59pm
Uh OH! Thats that Cuba shit right there. Rumor has it when you even semi focus your writtens Kill shit. Like that Horseman drop you did. Tell me why you had to dead'em with this bar:

"I'm like an ulcer undulated...pulsing punctuated
From the stomach where it punctured unabated"<---Nassstyyy!

Then followed with Essays/Mexicans bar...ahh shit!
I could keep snaggin quotes but you already know. Shit Blazed!

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Ill give ya this one Cube's fire verse bruh
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Originally posted by Cuba Cuba wrote:

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The size of the skeletons of elephants...
But this aint Cote D'Ivoire we choke with our bars
Like smoking foie gras or explosive firebombs  Stern Smile

That's the LA, make way for a decathlon of decadence
Running essays harder than a marathon of Mexicans Stern Smile

I'm a paragon of excellence Stern Smile standing in a Parthenon of Presidents
The número uno coming out the blue like the producers of Juno
I'm seducing it too bro like Medusa at funeral nouveaus Stern Smile
Nod to Chain...that dude was the greatest Wink


Clap@ the alliteration. It was too dope. too effortless....easy money.
It's all about saying shit that has never been said before, in rhyme form.
That's why the Cote D' Ivoire bar had me like Stern Smile *fuck him*






+Sick-Witted+
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