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JBrenn 
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 Topic: The 7 Deadly Syns(Group Drop)Posted: 26 November 2013 at 6:30am |
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INTRO: A mad mans on the loose a dispute rooted in truth…. A killer artist cook is it one mad man or a group… The KEY: Levy420 JBrenn Iziah Brotha Goose The_Guy Lucky D Zinaii  Lust(Levy420): most people lust for cash an ass but not me i lust for grass of royalty u know that hash weed pass speeds past what fast be cuz i lust for the thrill its a must that i kill i lust for thirst from the blood spilt our crew keep a solid foundation, witch keeps these herbs in frustration we lust for elevation, motivated to the craft threw dedication with the bars i drop its premeditated, for detonation ripping ya spine because i'll explode at the drop of the dime like proximity mines shit we live an we die, i'm just trying to leave my mark leaving scriptures set in stone like i'm a descendant of pac lusting for recognition that comes from the art pushing limit of imagination threw word's of my thought Gluttony(JBrenn): Gluttonous writer eating the threads-up... not knowing when to stop splitting these heads-up…. I eat until i can't see straight I'm steady gaining weight… I disrespect the fates smash down emcees then refill my plate... Feed me feed me I'm screaming I've got hunger pains... Destroyin youngins no disrespect to J Hom but I'm the real HUNGER GAMES… I hunger for more so i smash whores causing KAOS grief… Fill my plate with BEANS and BUTTER use FLOSS to clean my teeth… Knowing wrist destroy figures with forks I keep tippin forums... Throwing fist in swarms fucking up weight like liftin' porns… I eat Emcees till i burst or slip twist and shit my drawer(droors)…. Got my whole crew gunning for these snakes like Gryffindors… Sloth(Iziah): …… Slothfulness……. Iz Drop!!!! IZ?! Anyone seen IZ? Fucking Sloth! FUCK IT!! Greed(Brotha Goose): Bleed leaves for chlorophyl, green sheen im gettin my fill free Don't color me green with envy, greed is the enemy within me I kill men and reroute streams to furnish blood for money trees Im rip'n through emcees, so go ahead and covet my multis I soul siege, subzero make'n yur soul freeze with ease Y'all mad cuz ya envy this MVP..... Now bow down to MONEY, im yur G.O.D I don't even bleed for free, take a shot at me Scorpion style fatality's Skip formalities, Now get over here!.....and Super Size Me please! Keep feed'n my greed and watch it grow like a Chia pet puppy I'm see'n yur bluff G, I've had enough so i'm uppin the ante Pull up yur pant's B, yur show'n yur ass while im steal'n the scene Ain't take'n a thing from me, so step off mother fuckers I'm GREEDY Pride(The_Guy): 'Pride leads to your demise, but with humility comes wisdom" Maaaaaaannnn Fuck all that! I'm Multifaceted, copyrighted my verses like I'm patented And talented, breaking down bars till they're fragmented Inhabited your minds with rhymes and mini annelids The question is for "Best Rapper Alive" and I answered it Fuck challenges, my Pride too large to mention anyone greater Crippled rappers who weren't saved by the bell like Im AC Slater I'm so vain(vein), my cells fuse with pens and bleed through paper Believe in Syn, sure cause even the devil once sat next to your maker The punishment for excessive pride is to be broken on the wheel If thats true, fuck it size em to 22's and chromed out steel Been hovering over gods, to me Mt. Olympus is just a hill I've been breaking codes in the matrix and I didn't need the pill Envy(Lucky D): It rained upon my parade, tha days are spent contagious Planted rage it came wit basics states faced couragious I see you playin games wit that man who's name remains sin Rejected a poets lines, and gifts of gold my love engrained in Brain spent wet insane drips, in tha shaddows I see you sleep Tears my heart inside when you greet bare feet outside his jeep Told me I was a creep, but these roses should show tha truth Why can't you love me till tha end tha way that I love you I want to hold you tight, but that man just won't let you free Sick of tha way he's got that car, tha money, house with ease Look at him and look at me, clean cut compared to street Brought up wit a golden spoon, my shoes barely covered feet I see now I ain't good enough, to be him there is no hope Please quote my note while I jump down wit this rope  Wrath(Zin): the wrath smashes with the impact of thors hammer a beast in the cage unleashing the rage can be orgasmic its pure passion, super saiyan surrounded by energy waves muscles bulging like steroids entered my veins, simple and plain superhuman strength, so your face; you could never correct that smashing crews heads together as grusesome as celebrity deathmatch malice directed at i.p.s as inhumane as it may seem hateful words aimed at persons i rage against machines punches in succession, my fists of fury can set up a windstorm i stab at will my wrath can kill whatever leader u cling on black out in a rage, all i recall was the intenisty of my direct focus beat within a inch of life, but it didnt "amount to" wat was "left over"
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L.S.D
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Posted: 26 November 2013 at 8:18am |
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You guys killed it!
you went all out,Brotha Goose pulled off some awesome multis,you all have great content in your verses.The verses weren't not predictable,you all stayed on topic,the flow is cool though not bad. Keep it up guys ;) |
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Nigma
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Posted: 26 November 2013 at 8:38am |
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Levy - Felt a few of your lines sacrificed content for flow. You had some really nice concepts and some filler lines (which had really good flow, granted) in between. As it was, still not a bad verse but the next level for you would be to incorporate more concepts like the 'drop of a dime'/'proximity mines' section, felt that was the strongest part of the verse. Good looks tho
JBrenn - Your presence on the verse was pretty dope, I despise the term but you were kinda swaggin. From the name drops onwards was really standout. The flow switch at the 'tippin forums' section was tight and the closer was really sick IMO, solid performance here sir. The rest will come later this evening
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Brotha Goose
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Posted: 26 November 2013 at 3:46pm |
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Haha, gud shit fellas.....Syndicate Strong
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Brotha Goose
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Posted: 26 November 2013 at 3:47pm |
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Wait.....I just made an S.S. comment......
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Lucky D
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Posted: 26 November 2013 at 4:09pm |
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Well done everyone.....that Iz was the best part lol
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JBrenn
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Posted: 26 November 2013 at 4:27pm |
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Levy and goose thought you guys murdered this. The guy and lucky your shit melted my mind great concepts.
Zin. I wish your verse was in all caps I think it was hard but wish it was in all caps. Lol. Iz you killed slothfulness dawg! Lol Nah for real though. Nice drop all and thanks for participating y'all Syn! |
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Posted: 27 November 2013 at 2:13am |
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JBrenn
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Posted: 27 November 2013 at 3:04pm |
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Bump.
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Brotha Goose
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Posted: 28 November 2013 at 4:45pm |
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Waking this one up
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Posted: 28 November 2013 at 4:48pm |
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dooooooooope.ima feed later.
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Posted: 28 November 2013 at 7:06pm |
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yeah this was tight.
Like the different angle each of you had to approach to contribute to the verse. this deff worth the tread. brenns last line
Got my whole crew gunning for these snakes like Gryffindors… hottest in verse lol loved it |
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Look to the sky to try n find god in the clouds
hoping when he looks down i dont get lost in the crowd |
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JBrenn
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Posted: 01 December 2013 at 9:30pm |
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Since real heads dropping feed again I wana bump this.
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Posted: 01 December 2013 at 10:26pm |
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Levy; you opened this collab up nice. Loving this section our crew keep a solid foundation, witch keeps these herbs in frustration we lust for elevation, motivated to the craft threw dedication with the bars i drop its premeditated, for detonation ripping ya spine because i'll explode at the drop of the dime like proximity mines JB; Looking good on the Gluttony trip......Nice portrail I eat until i can't see straight I'm steady gaining weight… I disrespect the fates smash down emcees then refill my plate... IZ;...........Ha ha dope way to get the best from him though! Brotha; You killed on this one fam...Loving that money tree thing you done Don't color me green with envy, greed is the enemy within me I kill men and reroute streams to furnish blood for money trees Guy; Oh shit you went out an slaughtered this one...Brilliant The question is for "Best Rapper Alive" and I answered it The punishment for excessive pride is to be broken on the wheel If thats true, fuck it size em to 22's and chromed out steel Lucky; Yep you tuned into that envy feel well I see now I ain't good enough, to be him there is no hope Please quote my note while I jump down wit this rope Zin; Wrath was def the best link up for you main, you brought this collab to a great end its pure passion, super saiyan surrounded by energy waves muscles bulging like steroids entered my veins, simple and plain superhuman strength, so your face; you could never correct that smashing crews heads together as grusesome as celebrity deathmatch Really feeling this work lads, great to see you all going from strength to strength and working as a team.........Thats a real crew.......Respect |
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JBrenn
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Posted: 01 December 2013 at 10:42pm |
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Thanks spume!!! I'll hit up your pieces for some feed tonight!
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Posted: 02 December 2013 at 12:27am |
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Dope collab,fellas. It was an immense show of ill concepts with sick executions... Levy, opened it really nicely.Guy's drop was a standout for me. Brotha goose's flow and twisted rhyming style was dope. Jbrenn dropped bombs. Lucky, never seen anything from you before. Yo verse was solid. Whole Syndicates family rocked it. Lots of props and respect... Im quoting the best bars (imo) from each verse... Levy: with the bars i drop its premeditated, for detonation ripping ya spine because i'll explode at the drop of the dime like proximity mines shit we live an we die, i'm just trying to leave my mark leaving scriptures set in stone like i'm a descendant of pac JBrenn: I eat until i can't see straight I'm steady gaining weight… I disrespect the fates smash down emcees then refill my plate... I hunger for more so i smash whores causing KAOS grief… Fill my plate with BEANS and BUTTER use FLOSS to clean my teeth… Knowing wrist destroy figures with forks I keep tippin forums... Throwing fist in swarms fucking up weight like liftin' porns… Brotha Goose: Bleed leaves for chlorophyl, green sheen im gettin my fill free Don't color me green with envy, greed is the enemy within me Keep feed'n my greed and watch it grow like a Chia pet puppy I'm see'n yur bluff G, I've had enough so i'm uppin the ante The Guy: I'm Multifaceted, copyrighted my verses like I'm patented And talented, breaking down bars till they're fragmented Inhabited your minds with rhymes and mini annelids The question is for "Best Rapper Alive" and I answered it I'm so vain(vein), my cells fuse with pens and bleed through paper Believe in Syn, sure cause even the devil once sat next to your maker Lucky D: It rained upon my parade, tha days are spent contagious Planted rage it came wit basics states faced couragious I see you playin games wit that man who's name remains sin Rejected a poets lines, and gifts of gold my love engrained in I want to hold you tight, but that man just won't let you free Sick of tha way he's got that car, tha money, house with ease Look at him and look at me, clean cut compared to street Brought up wit a golden spoon, my shoes barely covered feet, Zinaii: its pure passion, super saiyan surrounded by energy waves muscles bulging like steroids entered my veins, simple and plain superhuman strength, so your face; you could never correct that smashing crews heads together as grusesome as celebrity deathmatch |
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Fuck That Fat smelly cunt Donald Trump, a racist asshole who is fucked in the head.
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Posted: 02 December 2013 at 3:20pm |
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Yeah, obviously a dope concept piece for your crew, the color format was a bit disturbing, intentional perhaps? Thought all contributions was nice and fitted in and complemented eachother, as for my favorite SIN this time around imma have to go with ENVY, that was a real tight verse imo.
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Posted: 02 December 2013 at 5:36pm |
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not bad
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JBrenn
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Posted: 03 December 2013 at 2:40am |
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Thanks for the feed from those who took the time.
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Posted: 04 December 2013 at 11:00pm |
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I'll just quote my fav. lines
Wrath is my favorite sin but Levy fucking got this. Dope. |
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