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   Trying to write a bunch. Looking at whats trending on twitter and tried writing some bars for each thing.

Michael Sam

Michael Sam, Look at him

Always hitting other men

What’s the plan? Stoppin dem

Grow and be 6 9 and then

Finish him, rushin end.

Sack that back you’re paid to bend.

NFL you’re dropping in

Not Furlonged, it's half that man.

#SkipTo900K

Skip to 900K Skip to 900K

Put in work okay to say I’ll

Skip to 900k Skip to 900K

Rewrite this verse, fuck it’s okay I'll

Skip to 900K Skip to 900K

Not thought out just get us paid I'll

Skip to 900K Skip to 900K

What’s that say I'll skip to 900K

#Beatles50

Beatles turning 50 makes no sense.

Needles turned plenty but since

The 60’s burned Jimmy Hendrix

The musicality learned is pen shit.

Imitate half them, this suddenly ends.

#TheWalkingDead

One by one another falls victim.

Talking so hard wickens envision

horror in the televsion, beating your systoms.

Another infected another leaping to listen.

The landscape is barren picked over too cleanly.

Seemlessly advertised “feed me”, not seein

Carl’s pudding up thieving looks I'm not being

A zombie that's gathering and asking for tv.

#TWD

TWD a retweet so skip these and suck these nuts as you leave
please.

#Transmitter

What the fuck is this a transmitter?

Or is this a fans idea, some bland twitter.

Trending for top five but outside so sit here.

Number 6, If your show picks up. Been here.

5 Seconds left of summer, in the middle of fucking winter.

People all explaining why they're giving you love. Send beer.

Well if you have to explain, I don’t give a fuck.

I give the finger I now give here, image huh?

The middle is extended so transmit that love.
A fuck you, have nice day, was that clear bud?

#CollegeDropout

Oh shit, as I was starting this wasn’t on the list

But as I worked through and played truth, it hits

Coming back to the bigs, walking dead but not shit

Oh fuck yes, this my bit, loving every second. 
Wits end. West ended the love for comedic gold long ago, its

sad the diggers had to go and make a grave for bits thrown.

I liked the lighter ye, not in that way, just the hits he grown.

What’s wrong with connecting to kids no matter the dad so

red with anger over every offense. Makes no sense though.

I just want to laugh and get lit, not up, but one day throne. 

The rest of the top 10

Dumb Starbucks, Cali, ebay

The espresso machine is late, that Hollywood dream, cafes

sitting at beaches and waving to screaming groupies
expressing

crazy thoughts of adoring my packaged treat ex-Presley
delivered 

the king at imitating, multicultural faceted loving every
statement

that I can be the star making money with screenplays get

screen laid by the cali kissed sun ordered tropically but

themes paid tribute to more than a few before if I could
just 

order off this god damn store can’t get though with the
people ignored.

Starbucks floor model ebayed to Cali shores but delayed a fucking week more?

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Cheeseburger Eddie Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 08 February 2014 Location: United States Status: Offline Points: 499 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 1-1-0 Form: WL	Post Options Post Reply Quote Cheeseburger Eddie Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Topic: Trending on Twitter Posted: 10 February 2014 at 6:50pm
	Trying to write a bunch. Looking at whats trending on twitter and tried writing some bars for each thing. Michael Sam Michael Sam, Look at him Always hitting other men What’s the plan? Stoppin dem Grow and be 6 9 and then Finish him, rushin end. Sack that back you’re paid to bend. NFL you’re dropping in Not Furlonged, it's half that man. #SkipTo900K Skip to 900K Skip to 900K Put in work okay to say I’ll Skip to 900k Skip to 900K Rewrite this verse, fuck it’s okay I'll Skip to 900K Skip to 900K Not thought out just get us paid I'll Skip to 900K Skip to 900K What’s that say I'll skip to 900K #Beatles50 Beatles turning 50 makes no sense. Needles turned plenty but since The 60’s burned Jimmy Hendrix The musicality learned is pen shit. Imitate half them, this suddenly ends. #TheWalkingDead One by one another falls victim. Talking so hard wickens envision horror in the televsion, beating your systoms. Another infected another leaping to listen. The landscape is barren picked over too cleanly. Seemlessly advertised “feed me”, not seein Carl’s pudding up thieving looks I'm not being A zombie that's gathering and asking for tv. #TWD TWD a retweet so skip these and suck these nuts as you leave please. #Transmitter What the fuck is this a transmitter? Or is this a fans idea, some bland twitter. Trending for top five but outside so sit here. Number 6, If your show picks up. Been here. 5 Seconds left of summer, in the middle of fucking winter. People all explaining why they're giving you love. Send beer. Well if you have to explain, I don’t give a fuck. I give the finger I now give here, image huh? The middle is extended so transmit that love. A fuck you, have nice day, was that clear bud? #CollegeDropout Oh shit, as I was starting this wasn’t on the list But as I worked through and played truth, it hits Coming back to the bigs, walking dead but not shit Oh fuck yes, this my bit, loving every second. Wits end. West ended the love for comedic gold long ago, its sad the diggers had to go and make a grave for bits thrown. I liked the lighter ye, not in that way, just the hits he grown. What’s wrong with connecting to kids no matter the dad so red with anger over every offense. Makes no sense though. I just want to laugh and get lit, not up, but one day throne. The rest of the top 10 Dumb Starbucks, Cali, ebay The espresso machine is late, that Hollywood dream, cafes sitting at beaches and waving to screaming groupies expressing crazy thoughts of adoring my packaged treat ex-Presley delivered the king at imitating, multicultural faceted loving every statement that I can be the star making money with screenplays get screen laid by the cali kissed sun ordered tropically but themes paid tribute to more than a few before if I could just order off this god damn store can’t get though with the people ignored. Starbucks floor model ebayed to Cali shores but delayed a fucking week more?

U.N.L.M. Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 19 December 2006 Location: USA Status: Offline Points: 1955 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 23-15-0 Form: WWWWWW	Post Options Post Reply Quote U.N.L.M. Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 11 February 2014 at 5:21pm
	To be honest, this type of piece here is something you could do, but probably not post here...I'm not saying it's bad...It just feels like a "messing around" kind of piece...Some people like to post everything they write, but this piece right here doesn't really have much substance to be fed, if you know what i mean? You went through the hastags, but it really just seemed like you freestyled the first thoughts you had when reading it...Came out as very simple and sometimes nonsensical due to its stream of consciousness style...Put some more work into your thoughts/lines and you'll get more feed. Nobody really wants to feed your throwaways or practice verses, ya know? These are definitely good to do to get better and write...but, this is not much of a complete work, just fragmented thoughts and ideas...keep writing...


Cheeseburger Eddie Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 08 February 2014 Location: United States Status: Offline Points: 499 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 1-1-0 Form: WL	Post Options Post Reply Quote Cheeseburger Eddie Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 11 February 2014 at 5:22pm
	Ahh gotcha gotcha. Thanks for the heads up.