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Titu 
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 Topic: Realest ShitPosted: 02 February 2015 at 4:53am |
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My crazy lifestyle made me go stubborn and stressed All the struggle has left me more troubled and messed, But Im tougher than Rex from my knuckles to cleft, I try to bubble my breaths through these puddles of Death, My body squeezes in itself like nothing has left, Is it a symptom of death or just a fucking refelx? Whatever the heck... Its causing nubbles I guess, I have buckled my belt but it has doubled the sweat, Have you ever been so stuck that you feel guttered and checked? When pressure rubbles your neck n leaves your chuckles compressed? And if you ever dare ....just try to utter or step, You just cumble yourself with some plundering depth, Well.... i know what I need.. YOU!!! I might be scattered and strawed-depressive and clawed, But Im impressed so applaued at the blessings of God, Coz even tho this brawl was streching my jaws, And regardless of the shame I was undressing it all, Im cofessing, my lord, i was professing the wrong, The gift youve gave me saved my life, it coushined my fall, Im just expressing it all, all the stress have been sawed.. im a lot more calm... And That pressure has gone Aaaaaaaaahhhhhh!!!!! Here it comes....... I LOVE YOU MY POOP :'') ♥ 💩 ♥ |
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Fuck That Fat smelly cunt Donald Trump, a racist asshole who is fucked in the head.
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Ransom
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Posted: 02 February 2015 at 11:44am |
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This is a decent piece, not very wordy or technical. The flow was relaxed and the piece itself was crazy untilI got to the ending then I had to re read it. After that I would have to say this is alright, but I know you got better then a few bars about poop... Still pretty funny SHIT though lol
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~Lyrical Death Dealer~
"The Mike Myers of Papyrus" |
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daydizzle89
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Posted: 02 February 2015 at 2:36pm |
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this is interesting. Your content was shitty, literally. Lol. This wasn't bad, I laughed pretty hard for the most part. Flowed well and ya had some ok multis. Ummmm, keep pushing forward brah lol
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Titu
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Posted: 02 February 2015 at 3:38pm |
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Lol Thanks for the replies. I dont know what dafuck i was thinking when I wrote this lol.. But i guess thats what comes outta yo heart as the "realest shit" when youre drunk and sitting on the seat. Last night was crazy lol
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Fuck That Fat smelly cunt Donald Trump, a racist asshole who is fucked in the head.
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Beans
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Posted: 02 February 2015 at 3:46pm |
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I thought this was dope... Nice work tit fucker
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Mission
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Posted: 02 February 2015 at 6:01pm |
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AHHAHAHAHAHAH dying right now when i got to the bottom. you gotta quit drinking and writing bruh lmfao. this was really good tho i liked all the internals and the job you did of carrying a rhymescheme through each verse. the flow was excellent and had this been about something else, lmao i think it coulda been great
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iLL ScriptureZ
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Posted: 02 February 2015 at 6:44pm |
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Technically sound. Very good use of the multis matching the internals and externals. Flow wise it was pretty solid. It being about poop at the end made it comical. I didn't grasp it until the final line. Kudos for that. If you never said it was about shit, this piece could've had a whole other feel.
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GAiNz
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Posted: 02 February 2015 at 6:52pm |
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I just shit my pants on how good this was haha. Nice drop titu.
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Titu
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Posted: 02 February 2015 at 10:21pm |
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tthanks a lot beans.. Missiom amd gainz.
Ill.. Too bad bro.. Always thought about you as a nice cat. |
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Fuck That Fat smelly cunt Donald Trump, a racist asshole who is fucked in the head.
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JBrenn
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Posted: 03 February 2015 at 5:46am |
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I peeped this after Exo called it out and i have to say this is levels ahead of where you started bro!!!! you came out in this piece with the fire and never let up...
"I might be scattered and strawed-depressive and clawed, But Im impressed so applaued at the blessings of God, Coz even tho this brawl was streching my jaws, And regardless of the shame I was undressing it all," ^^^^^ right there that was some real life shit!!! nice work T2!!!
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nomedic
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Posted: 03 February 2015 at 9:31pm |
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wtf shit in my mind I thought you're dealing with a drug addiction wtf titu you're one messed up guy all that poetry describing what seemed to me as a life altering struggle like a meth addiction all that intense
self conscious approach was for that damn that was the most quickest and nastiest twist ever I really didn't see anything like that popping up disgusting but as for creativity goes that was quite dope flow was that was sick and clean just the last line changed the whole beauty of the piece and made it somin else lmao stay up
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Titu
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Posted: 04 February 2015 at 12:54pm |
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LOl.. Appreciate the feed Nom and Brenn bro. Glad you guys liked it.
i always write about dark subjects so thought a lil change would be good. |
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Fuck That Fat smelly cunt Donald Trump, a racist asshole who is fucked in the head.
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The Poet
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Posted: 06 February 2015 at 7:16am |
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the flowwwww , the rhymeeeeees, goooood... nice shit man, pun intended, but i also didnt know wassup until the end, still a good motherfuck
keep it hot bro |
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Titu
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Posted: 06 February 2015 at 2:45pm |
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Thanks dude.
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Fuck That Fat smelly cunt Donald Trump, a racist asshole who is fucked in the head.
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