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Ransom 
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 Topic: Silver BackPosted: 04 February 2015 at 9:20pm |
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Ransom known to get shit smoking like locked tires these rhymes catch fire quick like blocked dryers so on papyrus i'm a menace, in minutes, I mix venom's for victims symptoms, faster than most chemist leaving bars bent.. like honey boo boo as a gymnast spent crumbs on my litmus, and skipping out on my fitness I'm heavy weight, straight sliver ape in caged in a gate with chimps who can't relate so I contemplate the great escape like King Kong on the greatest scrape (skyscraper) strong hate I inspire, Cause my bars breath fire so the thread stink, cause my ink make the loose leaf perspire (fire) all I apply is pressure to these half nice spitters came to drop shit.. told Scotty "hope you you have nice shitters" tell theses rust buckets, I aint nothing to fuck with been on my nuts shit, everything I touch sick 600 plus post here, 4000 in the close rear (sic wit it) I am no noob niggaz lets get that shit clear! Ripped rappers, left dead on arrival so called scrappers, wouldn't know hell if they got head on a bible Im a Dead lift rapper, I raised the bar! catch beef i'm airing raw cause my punches have your hand over your gut like the air guitar...  Edited by Ransom - 04 February 2015 at 9:29pm |
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daydizzle89
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Posted: 04 February 2015 at 10:17pm |
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Ransom known to get shit smoking like locked tires these rhymes catch fire quick like blocked http://www.ebay.com/sch/i.?_nkw=dryers - dryers ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ lol at that dryers line, straight dirty opener so on papyrus i'm a menace, in minutes, I mix venom's ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ Liked the way this came off flow wise. for victims symptoms, faster than most chemist leaving bars bent.. like honey boo boo as a gymnast ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ LMFAO HONEY BOO BOO, that was slick wit metas spent crumbs on my litmus, and skipping out on my fitness I'm heavy weight, straight sliver ape ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ lmfao, aggression hasn't ben lost so far brudaman in caged in a gate with chimps who can't relate so I contemplate http://www.ebay.com/sch/i.?_nkw=the+great+escape - the great escape ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ Shop the GREAT ESCAPE. lmfao like King Kong on the greatest scrape (skyscraper) strong hate I inspire, Cause my bars breath fire ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ Not feeling this bar so much so the thread stink, cause my ink make the loose leaf perspire (fire) ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ hahaha, slick all I apply is pressure to these half nice spitters came to drop shit.. told Scotty "hope you you have nice shitters" ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ lmfao wtf tell theses rust buckets, I aint nothing to fuck with been on my nuts shit, everything I touch sick ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ BELIEB DAT!! 600 plus post here, 4000 in the close rear (sic wit it) I am no noob niggaz lets get that shit clear! ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ we know your not a noob brah, shit relax already Ripped rappers, left dead on arrival so called scrappers, wouldn't know hell if they got head on a bible ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ LMFAO, That funny as shit. Liked this line Im a Dead lift rapper, I raised the bar! catch beef i'm airing raw ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ Nice wordage and Metas cause my http://www.ebay.com/sch/i.?_nkw=punches - punches have your hand over your gut like the air guitar... ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ Brah, nice way to end this Overall- the swagish aggression worked well in this piece. Your flow was sick and I can read this over a beat with no issues. This was a pretty slick drop. Your metas and wordplay was shining in this piece. BOOM
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Ransom
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Posted: 05 February 2015 at 12:48am |
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Good looking on the feed dizzle, solid break down...
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Ransom
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Posted: 05 February 2015 at 8:55pm |
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Bumping for feed
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nomedic
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Posted: 05 February 2015 at 9:25pm |
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haha ransom you were on your ape shit here the flow was the dopest in the first half you didn't drop the quality though cause you went on with harder content on a later stage I couldn't see any negative cause of that cause you had a balance this shit would be cool on audio straight up nice drop
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Posted: 05 February 2015 at 9:41pm |
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Lol
That was nice, man. Your flow stayed on top. Your multis and internals were clean which made the verse flow like a butter..your. opening was sick. I really liked it. Then that kingkong concept was really nice for me. Leaf perspire/chemist and scotty's shitters were also good. Nice little piece and I really felt the agression. Keep dropping, bro! 👍 |
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Fuck That Fat smelly cunt Donald Trump, a racist asshole who is fucked in the head.
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Ransom
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Posted: 06 February 2015 at 1:29pm |
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Good looks Nomedic And Titu, I appreciate the feed
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