Open Mic: Airing out off top

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   Lets Work...

Like penicillin i'm not one to let shit fester
these uncle festers claim superman when leaping from dressers
when in essence, their adolescence leaves em destine
to hover above shit.. like dung beetles with indigestion
so without question
 like prospectors.. leave em resting
guilty of whack lines, every O.M they provide is a written confession
in essence I find that's the first exhibit...
in my mind  they define the laws of physics, 
they get no applause no active guys visit,
 then out the blue poof their asinine verses marked exquisite!
these Cats Washed up and dying to savior the flavor 
of past years so they now engaging in trollish behavior
Couldn't wait to say Ran overrated?
Knowing ill snatch his mandible get it gold plated
and wear it like Mr T made it..
see my jabs weighted, so on contact leave mallet scars 
and I can't be seen like fat bitches at salad bars
I smash SKULLS.. so fuck your secret society
I have sleepers tripping over my lines like drunks testing sobriety
Im a lyrical rapist, quick to go ape shit have this bitch dropping his purse
So next time you take shots at ran how about being a man and dropping a verse.. 

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Ransom Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 30 June 2014 Location: 7 Citys Status: Offline Points: 911 Audio Rank: Unranked Stats: 2-0-0 Form: WW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Ransom Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Topic: Airing out off top Posted: 20 March 2015 at 8:51pm
	Lets Work... Like penicillin i'm not one to let shit fester these uncle festers claim superman when leaping from dressers when in essence, their adolescence leaves em destine to hover above shit.. like dung beetles with indigestion so without question like prospectors.. leave em resting guilty of whack lines, every O.M they provide is a written confession in essence I find that's the first exhibit... in my mind they define the laws of physics, they get no applause no active guys visit, then out the blue poof their asinine verses marked exquisite! these Cats Washed up and dying to savior the flavor of past years so they now engaging in trollish behavior Couldn't wait to say Ran overrated? Knowing ill snatch his mandible get it gold plated and wear it like Mr T made it.. see my jabs weighted, so on contact leave mallet scars and I can't be seen like fat bitches at salad bars I smash SKULLS.. so fuck your secret society I have sleepers tripping over my lines like drunks testing sobriety Im a lyrical rapist, quick to go ape shit have this bitch dropping his purse So next time you take shots at ran how about being a man and dropping a verse..
	~Lyrical Death Dealer~ "The Mike Myers of Papyrus"

Zinaii Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 15 June 2013 Status: Offline Points: 2957 Crew: Tha Syndicate Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 47-27-10 Form: WLNNNL	Post Options Post Reply Quote Zinaii Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 20 March 2015 at 9:09pm
	This was smooth. I can respect you taking it to the OM thats how things should always be handled. The "how dare you" vibe you came with was pretty dope; I thought you came out kinda slow; but once you started addressing your issue I thought you started picking up. they get no applause no active guys visit, then out the blue poof their asinine verses marked exquisite! these Cats Washed up and dying to savior the flavor of past years so they now engaging in trollish behavior Couldn't wait to say Ran overrated? Knowing ill snatch his mandible get it gold plated and wear it like Mr T made it.. and the closer were prolly my favorite parts of this. Nice lil warning shot

barrybondz Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 09 June 2014 Location: Canada Status: Offline Points: 1440 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 0-1-0 Form: L	Post Options Post Reply Quote barrybondz Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 20 March 2015 at 9:16pm
	Haha this was pretty sick and the first OM I've read in awhile. Had a good vibe/flow to it, but the question is who is this directed at?


Trizzy Tre Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member Joined: 28 March 2013 Status: Offline Points: 5101 Crew: EMPIRE Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 30-7-1 Form: WLWLWW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Trizzy Tre Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 20 March 2015 at 9:26pm
	Nice shit Ran... Thought the beginning was just decent, but from the middle to the end you killed it. The rhyme scheme was slick and the punches were hittin. Not sure fully whom you was gettin at, as i have been on much...but overall dope verse.


Titu Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member Joined: 04 July 2013 Location: 🔥 Hell 🔥 Status: Offline Points: 4522 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 47-19-0 Form: WWWWWW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Titu Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 20 March 2015 at 11:00pm
	lol i thought that was pretty sick. Good rhymecheme and punches were nicely executed, bro. And thanks for the shoutout. Mr T appreciates it.
	Fuck That Fat smelly cunt Donald Trump, a racist asshole who is fucked in the head.

Ransom Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 30 June 2014 Location: 7 Citys Status: Offline Points: 911 Audio Rank: Unranked Stats: 2-0-0 Form: WW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Ransom Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 20 March 2015 at 11:27pm
	Good looks fellas i appreciate the feed!
	~Lyrical Death Dealer~ "The Mike Myers of Papyrus"

nomedic Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 11 January 2014 Location: South Africa Status: Offline Points: 1578 Crew: Hunger Games Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 35-25-0 Form: WWLLWL	Post Options Post Reply Quote nomedic Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 21 March 2015 at 8:50am
	I haven't been as active yet was this directed to Elite or H4Ze ? Either way this was a nice read a few lines could've been worked on cause of flow but the drop was nice the content gave it that real feel I liked that good shit