Open Mic: LA Resurrection

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    Posted: 03 June 2015 at 5:02am
Yo.. hip hop been a part of my heart
Mixin words with a purpose, carvin an art
Old era, new era, which is better is worthless
Only thing that matters is the message in verses
Ive said it before this, never get it distorted
La will survive even if all the vets are dispersin
La's a community, we've weathered the curses
A place to explain ya pain that others are forced with
The message gets set and, forever its stored in
The same community as the cleverest wordsmith
Stupid beefs, usually, together we all click
A place where a father can send a letter to their kid
Lost my brother, my brethren is sure missed
Trapped in a fire, upsettin we lost Sick, i wept when i saw it
Soldier to the fullest, blessed wit his service
Wish he escaped the flames to show his text is just perfect
Peep and read, leave some feed, let it restore him
One of the most underrated, wish i couldve expressed it in person
But we carry on, share a bond, Ss has explored it
But he can only keep going if hes got the rest of us workin







an overseas flow from me

the streets is cold

airplanes

youtube debut

roach spray


Rest in peace brother.

Edited by Stalin - 03 June 2015 at 5:54am
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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote Nigma Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 03 June 2015 at 5:40am
Nice one. Technically sound, relevant content and heartfelt shout out to sick. Gonna give those verses a read. Nothing stood out but this sort of verse doesn't require home run lines. Nice light read, good to see you dropping.
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Yeah this was dope man, nice to see you dropping. Your flow is pretty much perfect to be honest, experience shines through when people have been doin this over a decade ad your word-choice is so concise that it's a pleasure to spit/read your work. Great sentiment and touching when you talk about Sick-witted. All in all just solid work. Oh and thanks for the shout-out.
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"La will survive even if all the vets are dispersin"...interesting line, ofcourse LA will survive but IT WON'T BE THE SAME. Nice tribute to Sick.
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Stalin this was a sick drop. I learned a few tricks of the trade from this OM. Nice work keep it coming. AR
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Thanks for the feed everyone. Appreciate it
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Just popped in and see this...nice verse an a real nice tribute, you already know my opinions on your stuff, didnt dissapoint
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This was a great sentimental and remembrance piece. Whether you care about the technicalies and flow those were on point. However, the main thing was the emotion and getting it across that we must miss and carry on the member that we lost. Great om man.
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Loved the drop fam being from L.A. Myself gave me all types of pride flowed well got to the point and made it so clear very nice open drop
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Lost my brother, my brethren is sure missed
Trapped in a fire, upsettin we lost Sick, i wept when i saw it
Soldier to the fullest, blessed wit his service
Wish he escaped the flames to show his text is just perfect
Peep and read, leave some feed, let it restore him
One of the most underrated, wish i couldve expressed it in person


Sup big homie!
I know you've been ducking me for years now, but I'll catch up with you soon lol

Anyway, I haven't been able to pen a single line about Sick.
I just can't. It still doesn't feel right.

But this right here was dope. You were always ill at channeling these type of emotions.
You still got it, man.

And I have to keep it one hundred my eyes got wet when Jay and I decided to end the whole NLEI/HG thing. Maybe it wasn't our decision to make but we felt like it was the right thing to do.

Clap @ Stalin

 

 


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Win for Stalin
 
This was fresh brotha. I think you hit this with the perfect approach. Relevant as fuck and I enjoyed every line/bar. Nice to see you drop a piece. The last segment is too real. I don't think I could have wrote about the situation like you did. Still man, NICE WORK
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Thanks for the feed everyone. And upping so people can see what Sick-Witted was all about!
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This was dope flow was relentless emotions was pooring every witch way stay up stalin never got the chance to politic wit sick dude was a beast with the pen though rest in peace
I'll explode at the drop of a dime like proximity mines
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