Audio Mic: Mama I remember(Instrumental)

I love Love that your makeing beats...

its a cool beat, only critique is when the beat drops off around the 30 second mark, I didn't like that. the rest of it and how it changes and progresses is cool.

Sky there was a good vibe to this beat here,yeah it had a sort of techno feel to it,i
liked the white noise in the middle and towards the end,the thing was when I heard
the white noise I was expecting a switch up,and to be honest I think that was the
problem,it lacked diversity,you didn't have enough range with the sounds you was
using,the beat was set in the higher pitch range to long,but with that said it still
better than what I could do,I do believe this would make a fantastic intro to a
bouncy summery beat,say 3-4 minutes long,anyways my man, good effort on the whole,and respect for becoming more than just a textcee,your going the right route
by branching out into audio's and producing,plus the journey your taking here isn't
going to be a long one,I do feel you'll master this soon enough..peace Bro.

Respect for giving it ago, but i gotta say it does sound very dated. It sounded like something i made in 2000 on my play station. I think using a range of more authentic sounds/instruments would def help. Just sounded very synthetic. You get what you pay for with equipment, i image this is good for building your foundations though. Keep up the grind.