Open Mic: Life beyond the natural

 Post Reply Post Reply
Author
Sky Scrapur View Drop Down
Standard Member
Standard Member
Avatar

Joined: 21 October 2014
Status: Offline
Points: 1133
Crew: Lyricist Inc.

Audio Rank: Unranked
Stats: 0-1-0
Form: L
Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote Sky Scrapur Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Topic: Life beyond the natural
    Posted: 05 August 2017 at 4:04pm

                                           Just tryna shake off the rusty...writers block...


Study hard, graduate, and get employeed,
Flip figures, hustle hard or get destroyed,
"There's nothing in life sweeter than pussy",
Somewhat true but fuck that nigga, how could he,
How could he because we live in two or more dimensions,
We kill for our flesh, while sacrificing spiritual direction,
Fast foods for pleasure, achievements for self glory,
Take joy in competitions just to build a memorable story,
That's the average man wrapped in his bag before his body crushes,
Amputated and trapped in a loop, while moving using only crutches,
But fuck this, i'm a witness to both worlds and their ways,
Benefits, consequences, and reasons Pac prayed for better days,
I've seen cherubs clush with dark cherubs for human possession,
Luxifer chastising demons with death, talkin of cruel correction,
I've perceived anger's true form together with its witty triggers,
unveiled mysteries like how real men fall before skinny niggas,
It was never about how much fight a little ass man packs,
But the level of cruelty skin ass niggas possess on ranks,
I believed real life was conspicuous, easy to calculate,
I believed strength constantly fed on how much you hate,
I believed physical pain existed as the only form of punishment,
Until my bleak sight observed the untold relm manifest,
Prayers of various forms ascending up to heaven day and night,
Some weak like wishes, some violent like meteorites.
I've seen sorcerers, spell casters and voodoo practises,
Ripping lives apart causing mysteriously unheard tragedies,
Inflicting pain beyond scientific explanation, vexing doctors,
Till i conversed with mother nature and my experience shocked her.
In all this i'm still human, limited by time and space,
I still choose this world of the natural life and pace,
Because afterall we live in bleak dispair knowing when death comes,
all mysteries of life shall unfold and then the end sums.
Back to Top
Sammy View Drop Down
Site Moderator
Site Moderator
Avatar
Beacon of Light

Joined: 24 October 2015
Status: Offline
Points: 2213
Crew: Elision

Text Rank: Unranked
Stats: 1-1-1
Form: LNW
Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote Sammy Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 05 August 2017 at 6:18pm
hey man thanks for the feed! here to RTF :)

this is surprisingly dope! Not because ur wack but because i do't think i've ever read anything of yours before. crisp, terse wording are right up my alley. 

nice little existential discussion here. i like this part right here:

"Prayers of various forms ascending up to heaven day and night,"

the imagery is dope in my head lol. reminds me of some Final Fantasy shit ha. overall not bad. def looking forward to another one. write more, man. 


Back to Top
Sky Scrapur View Drop Down
Standard Member
Standard Member
Avatar

Joined: 21 October 2014
Status: Offline
Points: 1133
Crew: Lyricist Inc.

Audio Rank: Unranked
Stats: 0-1-0
Form: L
Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote Sky Scrapur Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 09 August 2017 at 4:32pm
It was a pleasure man

Thanks for the feed

I'll keep trying
Back to Top
 Post Reply Post Reply
  Share Topic   

Forum Jump Forum Permissions View Drop Down