Open Mic: Ya Gonna Die Bitch...And Thats That |
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TeQuiLaSunRiSe
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Posted: 30 January 2005 at 1:01am |
this a verse bein put together for an audio collab...peep And Dont Even Get Me Started On Veronicas Shit Edited by TeQuiLaSunRiSe |
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POP POPPITY WHAT, I Know Yall Aint Poppin At Us
Cuz One or Two Punches Will Leave You TALKIN LIKE SEAN CONNERY DOES |
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-Orion-
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Like I said... nice continuous rhyme scheme, pretty solid flow... closer and lactose intolerant bits were dope...1
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They just said that FUCKIN' with me They didn't mean it Nah . . . |
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TeQuiLaSunRiSe
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thanks
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POP POPPITY WHAT, I Know Yall Aint Poppin At Us
Cuz One or Two Punches Will Leave You TALKIN LIKE SEAN CONNERY DOES |
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TeQuiLaSunRiSe
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POP POPPITY WHAT, I Know Yall Aint Poppin At Us
Cuz One or Two Punches Will Leave You TALKIN LIKE SEAN CONNERY DOES |
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King Jehu
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4 lines ended in shit, 3 ended in bitch... Other than that, hotness...
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Insert something rappy here
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Hybrid
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it was off and on..good..bad..good..bad..good..etc. rhyme scheme was simple..other than all that its good
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Noxious
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I wasnt Feelin'... weird Topic... and said 'Bitch' & 'Shit' too much.. ...1 Edited by Noxious |
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King Jehu
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You must be retarded... you try rhyming 4 syllables for 16 lines and then tell me if it's simple... It's the only reason the "Bitch" and "Shit" are tolerated in the verse. |
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Insert something rappy here
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